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Great one . The power is also much more satisfying than common OP fanfics.plot and character development is also top notch. Waiting for more. And thank you for writing pls don't drop aki
great novel love the story I'm hoping to see more............................[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
You shouldn't have deleted the first chapters. haaaa, they were not that bad, because of you deleting them you lost your motivation to write.
you finally posted a chapter after three months and it was just to tell us about the pole. give me back my excitement...you finally posted a chapter after three months and it was just to tell us about the pole. give me back my excitement...you finally posted a chapter after three months and it was just to tell us about the pole. give me back my excitement...
Great fanfic love it[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
the story is good and fun but i think it's going a little fast. thanks for the story. [img = recomendar][img = fp][img = atualização][img = atualização]
A great fanfic . Plot development and character design are all very superb . Waiting for more.A great fanfic . Plot development and character design are all very superb . Waiting for more.A great fanfic . Plot development and character design are all very superb . Waiting for more.
did you drop this novel? :( [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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I like it so far, there are some mess ups but it is still written well and enjoyable to read. Would be nice if the updates on Chapters would be faster. Pls ceep it up and thx :)
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It is a relly good fanfic of fairytail . I relly like Vergil and Erza's pairing although I prefer him having only one wife . I don't mind him having two . I can't wait to read more of this .[img=recommend]
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La historia es buena en si en mi opinion pero eso de estar destiando a tener dos amantes me molesta un poco pero no estoy en contra, al contrario el protagonista deberia tener un libre alberio de quien o con quien estar, aun asi el fic es bueno pero a veces no se entiende nada y molesta un poco pero todo lo demas esta bien, este fic puede mejorar, asi que echale ganas xD.
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A good fanfic. A little lacking in Grammar, but nothing serious. I hope the Author will keep up his good work and upload a little bit faster. But I can only recommend this story.
I highly suggest you do a quick Rewrite of the other chapters, so to make them more fluid, and to correct some writing errors that you might have missed. Overall it's not bad but also not a great FF either, it's just Mildly average I guess?, I sincerely apologize if I offended you in any way with my review. have a great evening... bye ^-^/
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Yeah I like the fan-fic bla bla bla it's good bla bla I love the idea of using gura gura no mi as a magic also nice system - - - - - - - ------------------------------------------ - - - - - - - -------------------------------------------
FINALLY A NEW CHAPTER AFTER A LONG WAIT I HOPE THAT THE UPDATE RATE WILL BE INCREASED NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
A great fanfic . Plot development and character design are all very superb . Waiting for more.
Great one . The power is also much more satisfying than common OP fanfics.plot and character development is also top notch. Waiting for more. And thank you for writing pls don't drop aki
great novel love the story I'm hoping to see more............................[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
You shouldn't have deleted the first chapters. haaaa, they were not that bad, because of you deleting them you lost your motivation to write.
you finally posted a chapter after three months and it was just to tell us about the pole. give me back my excitement...you finally posted a chapter after three months and it was just to tell us about the pole. give me back my excitement...you finally posted a chapter after three months and it was just to tell us about the pole. give me back my excitement...
Great fanfic love it[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
the story is good and fun but i think it's going a little fast. thanks for the story. [img = recomendar][img = fp][img = atualização][img = atualização]
A great fanfic . Plot development and character design are all very superb . Waiting for more.A great fanfic . Plot development and character design are all very superb . Waiting for more.A great fanfic . Plot development and character design are all very superb . Waiting for more.
did you drop this novel? :( [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
// / / / /// / /// / / /// / /// / /// / /// / / /// / / /// i / / /t was meh. // / ./ / / // . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .
I like it so far, there are some mess ups but it is still written well and enjoyable to read. Would be nice if the updates on Chapters would be faster. Pls ceep it up and thx :)
Keren banget asli nih komik bikin pengen baca terus,dan GK ngebosenin [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
It is a relly good fanfic of fairytail . I relly like Vergil and Erza's pairing although I prefer him having only one wife . I don't mind him having two . I can't wait to read more of this .[img=recommend]
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La historia es buena en si en mi opinion pero eso de estar destiando a tener dos amantes me molesta un poco pero no estoy en contra, al contrario el protagonista deberia tener un libre alberio de quien o con quien estar, aun asi el fic es bueno pero a veces no se entiende nada y molesta un poco pero todo lo demas esta bien, este fic puede mejorar, asi que echale ganas xD.
so soy soy soy whoussiti statist jftdj stjdtjdti d this retire jet Urdu Stu utd its sy tut dust Stu Stu story t Stu cutsycusigvsgj sky sig ugh h hi. Assvuiiuvsuvsvusgusgugu
A good fanfic. A little lacking in Grammar, but nothing serious. I hope the Author will keep up his good work and upload a little bit faster. But I can only recommend this story.
I highly suggest you do a quick Rewrite of the other chapters, so to make them more fluid, and to correct some writing errors that you might have missed. Overall it's not bad but also not a great FF either, it's just Mildly average I guess?, I sincerely apologize if I offended you in any way with my review. have a great evening... bye ^-^/
Hi there! Are you looking for inspiration? You might want to check out our Prompts Writing contest! Apocalypse, Isekai, LitRPG... Follow the three provided prompts and take the chance to win up to $2,000! Please Google 70daysthemedwritingchallenge to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact litrpgwritingcontest_review@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
Yeah I like the fan-fic bla bla bla it's good bla bla I love the idea of using gura gura no mi as a magic also nice system - - - - - - - ------------------------------------------ - - - - - - - -------------------------------------------
FINALLY A NEW CHAPTER AFTER A LONG WAIT I HOPE THAT THE UPDATE RATE WILL BE INCREASED NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
A great fanfic . Plot development and character design are all very superb . Waiting for more.