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I called out to work 2 days in a row because I couldnt put this down. I Cannot say enough about this author and her abIlity to capture each character realistically, in a way that you feel like you actually know them personally. It has a balanced mix of everything: plot twist, romance, action, tragedy, money, mystery & murder and STEAMY bedroom scenes-keep a fan next to you while reading cause it gets real hot, real fast! I really, really hope there are plans for several sequels down the line- I love these characters!
The story is so interesting it a must read the Author is creative and the characters in the story are so interesting the action Is on point the romance would leave you wanting more and character development is mind blowing
Chapters 721-751 we a complete waste of coins. They were out of order and repeated chapters from earlier in the story. I am completely disappointed
This text is a set of senseless delusionss, I didn't read such mindless fantasies for a long time. ,..........................,..........................,..........................,..........................
I fell in love with this story.no words are enough for describing this story......I just fell in love...
My first story I ever read, please author update it, please I'm waiting from a long time 😭😭
it is an amazing story with romance and suspense .I am very addicted to the characters .please update more chapters[img=update]
The novel is amazing ,I read it for 2 days straight ,I can believe myself ,I love it so much 🥰🥰
all characters are well designed and perfect. marks and Anna are good combination. also Mona and Tom are one of main characters..
This book just piques my curiosity the more I read it. It just...ugh, captures my imagination. So frickin' good.
please update this story i really like the story i waited 3 months already please update the story
haven't read it, but curious why a 18+ adult book is using as a teen book. shouldn't be allowed.
I love the novel it phrasing it lits ma senses up ... it a clear image 🥰🥰🥰in ma mind
so far the story is very interesting and the story development character design everything is too good but the updating stability is slow.i liked story .
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I could not get past the first few chapters as it was too moronic for me to continue. So the FL thought it was a good idea to confront her rapist stepbrother alone and then when he “surprisingly”gets violent her mother gets killed as she rushes in to save her. Then when FL runs out of the house to save herself at her stepfathers behest, instead of calling the police at any time just wanders around the streets for a while until some guys try to attack her. And this was after the initial stupidity of the FL and ML’s first meeting…why the ML thinks it makes more sense to blame the FL for his sisters death when he had a perfect person to blame in the stepbrother I dunno, but I tried to still give it a chance after that but yeah I guess that I shouldn’t have. From what I tried to skim ahead it doesn’t seem to get much better so yeah, I’m done.
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This is absolutely awful, there are several grammar mistakes and the attention to detail was incredibly lacked. I am extremely disappointed. Don’ waste your time. 🖕
I am not being able to unlock "More privilege chapters". I can't afford to buy. I opened chapters with bonuses. Author only 677 chapters i got to unlock. I want to unlock all chapters. Please help.
keep it up dear author! Your novel has keep on improving, in all ways. Iove your novel very much [img=recommend] This is my first time rating the novel in full review. Your novel tells everything... I like Anna and Mark I love their character in here I just can't stop myself from reading it...
I'm really glad that anna mark story is on way, but I'm upset because now i am out of money and coin. I can't read ch on the way. So author i want your help. Can you please unlock these ch or suggest me some website where i can watch theses chapter. I'm really out of coin amd money. And I'm not self employed. So can you please do me a favour.
Amazing story, I hope in between story author update timely I love more anna n mark Character nand also teasing mona session to mark.. Can plz unlock more chapters to read
I'm really waiting eagerly for the mark and anna story. I'm really enjoying the way you write. I'm really a big fan. But i want to know when genie's part will finish. Because i want to see mark and anna parts. Please do favour and complete this part. I really waited for mark and anna part for long time and i can't wait any more. I daily wish and hope that today i see marks and Anna's part. But i only see that. Please author finish this part. I'm really in love with this book. And I'm sure you will also support your readers happily and understand them. 😊😊 Btw i'm really big fan. My first book ever i read. I couldn't help but this is amazing book in entire my life. After this i read so many books but couldn't find better than this book is. And i really mean it.
I couldn’t get enough after I first started reading it. I love the multiple points of view. Times are hard right now but I definitely will be investing some coins in this book when I can.
I hope you're are well. Im so glad that you comeback. Please post your chapter daily. I request you. I'm really got addicted. I'm a big fan. Please daily post your chapter, if u not feel well then don't. 😊😊
Thank you for comeback😭😭😭 I waited so long, I'm full of tears now. Love your writing First book i ecer read is so amazing. Thank you thank you
This story s an amazing story and it is probably one of the best romantic and **** stories that I have probably read. When reading this I couldn't put my iPad down because it is that good. I am sure that people who like romance will definitely enjoy it. I really recommend this story to everyone and I am sure who will love it. Amazing work author.
I called out to work 2 days in a row because I couldnt put this down. I Cannot say enough about this author and her abIlity to capture each character realistically, in a way that you feel like you actually know them personally. It has a balanced mix of everything: plot twist, romance, action, tragedy, money, mystery & murder and STEAMY bedroom scenes-keep a fan next to you while reading cause it gets real hot, real fast! I really, really hope there are plans for several sequels down the line- I love these characters!
The story is so interesting it a must read the Author is creative and the characters in the story are so interesting the action Is on point the romance would leave you wanting more and character development is mind blowing
Chapters 721-751 we a complete waste of coins. They were out of order and repeated chapters from earlier in the story. I am completely disappointed
This text is a set of senseless delusionss, I didn't read such mindless fantasies for a long time. ,..........................,..........................,..........................,..........................
I fell in love with this story.no words are enough for describing this story......I just fell in love...
My first story I ever read, please author update it, please I'm waiting from a long time 😭😭
it is an amazing story with romance and suspense .I am very addicted to the characters .please update more chapters[img=update]
The novel is amazing ,I read it for 2 days straight ,I can believe myself ,I love it so much 🥰🥰
all characters are well designed and perfect. marks and Anna are good combination. also Mona and Tom are one of main characters..
This book just piques my curiosity the more I read it. It just...ugh, captures my imagination. So frickin' good.
please update this story i really like the story i waited 3 months already please update the story
haven't read it, but curious why a 18+ adult book is using as a teen book. shouldn't be allowed.
I love the novel it phrasing it lits ma senses up ... it a clear image 🥰🥰🥰in ma mind
so far the story is very interesting and the story development character design everything is too good but the updating stability is slow.i liked story .
揭示劇透 I could not get past the first few chapters as it was too moronic for me to continue. So the FL thought it was a good idea to confront her rapist stepbrother alone and then when he “surprisingly”gets violent her mother gets killed as she rushes in to save her. Then when FL runs out of the house to save herself at her stepfathers behest, instead of calling the police at any time just wanders around the streets for a while until some guys try to attack her. And this was after the initial stupidity of the FL and ML’s first meeting…why the ML thinks it makes more sense to blame the FL for his sisters death when he had a perfect person to blame in the stepbrother I dunno, but I tried to still give it a chance after that but yeah I guess that I shouldn’t have. From what I tried to skim ahead it doesn’t seem to get much better so yeah, I’m done.
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This is absolutely awful, there are several grammar mistakes and the attention to detail was incredibly lacked. I am extremely disappointed. Don’ waste your time. 🖕
I am not being able to unlock "More privilege chapters". I can't afford to buy. I opened chapters with bonuses. Author only 677 chapters i got to unlock. I want to unlock all chapters. Please help.
keep it up dear author! Your novel has keep on improving, in all ways. Iove your novel very much [img=recommend] This is my first time rating the novel in full review. Your novel tells everything... I like Anna and Mark I love their character in here I just can't stop myself from reading it...
I'm really glad that anna mark story is on way, but I'm upset because now i am out of money and coin. I can't read ch on the way. So author i want your help. Can you please unlock these ch or suggest me some website where i can watch theses chapter. I'm really out of coin amd money. And I'm not self employed. So can you please do me a favour.
Amazing story, I hope in between story author update timely I love more anna n mark Character nand also teasing mona session to mark.. Can plz unlock more chapters to read
I'm really waiting eagerly for the mark and anna story. I'm really enjoying the way you write. I'm really a big fan. But i want to know when genie's part will finish. Because i want to see mark and anna parts. Please do favour and complete this part. I really waited for mark and anna part for long time and i can't wait any more. I daily wish and hope that today i see marks and Anna's part. But i only see that. Please author finish this part. I'm really in love with this book. And I'm sure you will also support your readers happily and understand them. 😊😊 Btw i'm really big fan. My first book ever i read. I couldn't help but this is amazing book in entire my life. After this i read so many books but couldn't find better than this book is. And i really mean it.
I couldn’t get enough after I first started reading it. I love the multiple points of view. Times are hard right now but I definitely will be investing some coins in this book when I can.
I hope you're are well. Im so glad that you comeback. Please post your chapter daily. I request you. I'm really got addicted. I'm a big fan. Please daily post your chapter, if u not feel well then don't. 😊😊
Thank you for comeback😭😭😭 I waited so long, I'm full of tears now. Love your writing First book i ecer read is so amazing. Thank you thank you
This story s an amazing story and it is probably one of the best romantic and **** stories that I have probably read. When reading this I couldn't put my iPad down because it is that good. I am sure that people who like romance will definitely enjoy it. I really recommend this story to everyone and I am sure who will love it. Amazing work author.