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A man reincarnates into the world of Avatar The Last Airbender with dualbending, no strings attached.
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Looks really promising and can't wait until you release more chapters for this storie. 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140.
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Pretty good, Hope the novel goes on. The training progress is realistic, The interactions don't just count of, A teasing female, a teasing male, a stupid MC, and the annoying girls that's a friend.
Soy la rueda de mi parachoques ... El acero es mi cuerpo, el diesel es mi sangre ... He enviado más de mil reencarnadores ... Desconocido para los trenes, ni conocido para las bicicletas ... He resistido el dolor para crear muchas muertes. ... Sin embargo, esas ruedas no aplastarán nada ... Entonces, mientras corro, ¡Unlimited Truck Works ~!
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please give mc special colored fire (i think white would be nice)....................................................................................................................
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So far so good can’t wait for the next chapter and the concept is really interesting and has lots of promise ^_^
It’s interesting and I like it so far 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140
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Keep up the good work. MC's wish isn't stupidly OP, And its pretty decent imo. Its was that he wasn't able to be with his parents. I'm expecting some sort of are in the future where it turns out that out parents are alive and are prisoners, And the whole mc saves them cliche. I'm looking forward to it actually. Please don't make this a Harem. There are already too many of those already.
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