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I'm not used to writing reviews, but I'm going to do it here because I really like this story. First of all, the author is experienced, he has already written something good and it shows, the descriptions are well done and the characters have well defined personalities. Then, the world is interesting, a large number of classes seem to be predicted and we can expect great battles against powerful monsters or nasty players. Finally, the update rate, at the beginning I had some reservations, but the author promised to publish more chapter. In short, it is a good novel, I advise you.
Okay, this novel is good. Why is that? Warning: Tiny minora spoiler ahead. Read at your own risk. Let me clarify something first in today's novels regarding this genre. Whether they are Japanese, Chinese, or original ones, they have cliches. The repeating happenings that it has becomes predictable and boring. So boring that reading the synopsis or the first chapter will make you lose interest. This one, this novel is a fresh addition because it has new gaming aspects told in a storytelling that will bait people to voluntarily go to the deepest layer of 'the abyss', LOL. Writing Quality: Storytelling factors such as the dialogue and information given in between isn't lacking or excessive. The cliffhanger is really good especially that first chapter. As per the basic requirement every author must learn, "show, not tell", the author has mastered it. It is at the level you would end up engrossed reading the story. The last thing is the fillers. Nope, there's almost no fillers or whatnot, atleast for me. Stability Of Updates: From what I observe, there's unstable updates for this one in the last couple months. But now author is uploading daily chapters. So do not worry fellow reapers. Wow, two chapters per day? With 1500-200 average words? You're a beast man. Story Development: Now, this is what I like about it. Only second to world background. Not too slow and not too fast. The pacing is excellent and far better than any novel out there that get power-ups to one punch any obstacle in the way. If there would be future face slapping events then it will be different. Overall, you wouldn't experience the ypical elements involving the gamers, people, the game master and monsters in the typical litrpg genre. Simpy because of the unique theme and setting where it all took places. Character Design: Fleshed out characters that certainly is an individual. Not some characters that simply follows the wil of their gods. Goals amd motivations, check. Personalities, flaws, addiction, and minor tidbits that makes them a person, check. The main characters arnt't some godly geniuses that knows everything one way or another and will implement everything. Tbh, I have so much to learn from the author, 😭✌ World Background: Now this is what I really liked about this one. The world building. Having some modern element helps the readers connect with the story. Especially the memes.😂 What really is the greatest thing I liked about it is the definition of the abyss, made possible dur to the death of DEATH Himself. What an irony. The embodiment of death dies? Nice. Anyways, I hope this small review will help new readers. Also, check my book, Magic In The Galactic Era.
This is a very interesting story with a cool background and a new storyline. the protagonists are very nice and easy to sympathize, I just need a little romance.
So First Of All , This Is My Second Review Of This Book After Taking A Break From This Webnovel After getting my system fix . Straight Away From The Home Page Of The Novel And The People Who Are Genuinely Enjoying The Story Reminds Me Of The Starting Days And How The Author Actually Cares About Himself And His Fans To The Point Of Adding Characters To The Main Storyline Off Of People's Suggestions , So The World Revolves Around Him And The People Who Read The Novel. Practically Every Day From Breaking Something In My Heart Refuses To Drop This Novel So I Continued To Put Power Stones Into It And Trust Me It. Is. Worth. It. I'm About 100 chaps late But I'm Coming Back to anticipating The Next Update. So Thanks To The Author For Giving Such A Fresh View On The Underworld Whilst Sticking To The Agreed Mythologies. GD Cruz Thank You Zekester2ude ~
It's the first story i decided to spend my passess on, currently on chapter 82 and writing this to unlock more. I really enjoy the original concept of developing game in afterlife, story so far has been really interesting and it's nice to see as of now quite competent villain emerge. Characters are interesting, well developed and their actions seem reasonable, Good job, author can't wait to see what happens at the fortress!
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dark of night and waxing moon come to us a single pool hear us sing our witches' song and send us moonlight clear and strong earth and water, wind and fire one and all you must conspire to banish bad for goodness sake cos I need moonshine for my cake weary travelers long ago shared their bread and made a vow that they will be forever friends and so shall be until time ends
dark of night and waxing moon come to us a single pool hear us sing our witches' song and send us moonlight clear and strong earth and water, wind and fire one and all you must conspire to banish bad for goodness sake cos I need moonshine for my cake weary travelers long ago shared their bread and made a vow that they will be forever friends and so shall be until time ends
Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try! https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing
Its a good read makes me laugh and i love the characters. its got a good pace and is Updated at an ok speed, i do wish it was quicker but thats just coz i need to know what happens.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
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Good I guess, but did you literally copy the cover of 'Badge of Azure?!?!' Did you? creating a book cover is really easy so why copy it and merely change the colour?
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Updates are daily. The story quality, both writing and development is awesome. The characters all have their own backgrounds and personalities(even the antagonists!) The mc is a good guy that still cares for his players, even though his environment could change him. The denizens (citizens) of the Abyss aren't all evil, and they act just like any chuunibyou worker in a game store. so its all good
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I highly recommend this novel it has not many boring chapters and always get you hooked in it. Give it a try you might also like it. The story development in this good it's not to fast nor it's slow. You can really appreciate every character and how they live because they there own emotions and characteristics of there own.
This game master of souls is a very interesting blend of many cultural things that just improves the story in an interesting way lol if a good attention grabbing book is what your looking for id recommend this one for sure 🤘
Ok it was a great book I usually read books with some art but this this is amazing I still have more to read because I fell asleep last night reading it 10/10
Hi. You do not have to reply to this and props to you for reply to all most every comment so that deserves a 5 star your welcome and I wish I did not have to write 140 letters the end ** I'm going to read you book tomorrow
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Why did you want to update this story again. People will soon forget most of the character in the novel if you don't update it on time. Please try to create time if you don't have it again to post maybe once in a week or in three three days
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(My First 5 ⭐btw) Now , This Isn't Your Usual rpg/fantasy comic it tells you of how the world came to be, who created what and only ever leaves you asking questions about when's the next upload or what's gonna happen next I'm normally strict about the reviews I leave but for once there's nothing bad to say ----------------------------- ⬇️Spoilers Ahead⬇️ ----------------------------- It's excites me to the point where there are actual hidden (for now) stakes to those who play as they just accepted the "privacy policy" (reaper contract) unawares of the 'realism' of the abyss from the development of Ath3na and BlackHowler The Original Few To When You Meet Jaybird And Found Out His Situation The story never seems to slow down or make you lose interest. P.s This Is My Longest Review To Date And I Wanna Thank The Author For Such A Good Story. I Feel That I Shall Stay To Chapter 1000+ Thanks For Reading Pps (like so this appears on the front page of the book)
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Time for the author's shameless self-plugging! 😅 Hi, I'm G.D. Cruz, human scribe of the Fayne (Foolhardies), and now, keeper of stories for the Abyss too. Although my synopsis says it all, I do want to add one tiny little detail... this isn't your typical Lit-RPG story. In fact, I believe you'll agree with me afte you finish reading chapter one. Damn, that Morgana is brutal. My lead, Leo, is every boy's dream... a successful game designer who builds the best games one could play... but then you get a glim**e of his sad tale at the beginning and you may not want to follow in his footste**. All in all, GmofS was a very fun work to write and I barely felt the time pass as I finished a chapter. So I hope to continue it for a long time to come. Cheers! And enjoy! 😁
I'm not used to writing reviews, but I'm going to do it here because I really like this story. First of all, the author is experienced, he has already written something good and it shows, the descriptions are well done and the characters have well defined personalities. Then, the world is interesting, a large number of classes seem to be predicted and we can expect great battles against powerful monsters or nasty players. Finally, the update rate, at the beginning I had some reservations, but the author promised to publish more chapter. In short, it is a good novel, I advise you.
Okay, this novel is good. Why is that? Warning: Tiny minora spoiler ahead. Read at your own risk. Let me clarify something first in today's novels regarding this genre. Whether they are Japanese, Chinese, or original ones, they have cliches. The repeating happenings that it has becomes predictable and boring. So boring that reading the synopsis or the first chapter will make you lose interest. This one, this novel is a fresh addition because it has new gaming aspects told in a storytelling that will bait people to voluntarily go to the deepest layer of 'the abyss', LOL. Writing Quality: Storytelling factors such as the dialogue and information given in between isn't lacking or excessive. The cliffhanger is really good especially that first chapter. As per the basic requirement every author must learn, "show, not tell", the author has mastered it. It is at the level you would end up engrossed reading the story. The last thing is the fillers. Nope, there's almost no fillers or whatnot, atleast for me. Stability Of Updates: From what I observe, there's unstable updates for this one in the last couple months. But now author is uploading daily chapters. So do not worry fellow reapers. Wow, two chapters per day? With 1500-200 average words? You're a beast man. Story Development: Now, this is what I like about it. Only second to world background. Not too slow and not too fast. The pacing is excellent and far better than any novel out there that get power-ups to one punch any obstacle in the way. If there would be future face slapping events then it will be different. Overall, you wouldn't experience the ypical elements involving the gamers, people, the game master and monsters in the typical litrpg genre. Simpy because of the unique theme and setting where it all took places. Character Design: Fleshed out characters that certainly is an individual. Not some characters that simply follows the wil of their gods. Goals amd motivations, check. Personalities, flaws, addiction, and minor tidbits that makes them a person, check. The main characters arnt't some godly geniuses that knows everything one way or another and will implement everything. Tbh, I have so much to learn from the author, 😭✌ World Background: Now this is what I really liked about this one. The world building. Having some modern element helps the readers connect with the story. Especially the memes.😂 What really is the greatest thing I liked about it is the definition of the abyss, made possible dur to the death of DEATH Himself. What an irony. The embodiment of death dies? Nice. Anyways, I hope this small review will help new readers. Also, check my book, Magic In The Galactic Era.
This is a very interesting story with a cool background and a new storyline. the protagonists are very nice and easy to sympathize, I just need a little romance.
So First Of All , This Is My Second Review Of This Book After Taking A Break From This Webnovel After getting my system fix . Straight Away From The Home Page Of The Novel And The People Who Are Genuinely Enjoying The Story Reminds Me Of The Starting Days And How The Author Actually Cares About Himself And His Fans To The Point Of Adding Characters To The Main Storyline Off Of People's Suggestions , So The World Revolves Around Him And The People Who Read The Novel. Practically Every Day From Breaking Something In My Heart Refuses To Drop This Novel So I Continued To Put Power Stones Into It And Trust Me It. Is. Worth. It. I'm About 100 chaps late But I'm Coming Back to anticipating The Next Update. So Thanks To The Author For Giving Such A Fresh View On The Underworld Whilst Sticking To The Agreed Mythologies. GD Cruz Thank You Zekester2ude ~
It's the first story i decided to spend my passess on, currently on chapter 82 and writing this to unlock more. I really enjoy the original concept of developing game in afterlife, story so far has been really interesting and it's nice to see as of now quite competent villain emerge. Characters are interesting, well developed and their actions seem reasonable, Good job, author can't wait to see what happens at the fortress!
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dark of night and waxing moon come to us a single pool hear us sing our witches' song and send us moonlight clear and strong earth and water, wind and fire one and all you must conspire to banish bad for goodness sake cos I need moonshine for my cake weary travelers long ago shared their bread and made a vow that they will be forever friends and so shall be until time ends
dark of night and waxing moon come to us a single pool hear us sing our witches' song and send us moonlight clear and strong earth and water, wind and fire one and all you must conspire to banish bad for goodness sake cos I need moonshine for my cake weary travelers long ago shared their bread and made a vow that they will be forever friends and so shall be until time ends
Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try! https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing
Its a good read makes me laugh and i love the characters. its got a good pace and is Updated at an ok speed, i do wish it was quicker but thats just coz i need to know what happens.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
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Hi there! Do you know there is a LitRPG writing contest? You might be a competitive participant and take the chance to win up to $3,000! Please Google LUTAW_writing_contest or Supreme Me Fiction Writing Contest to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact litrpgwritingcontest_review@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
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Good I guess, but did you literally copy the cover of 'Badge of Azure?!?!' Did you? creating a book cover is really easy so why copy it and merely change the colour?
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Updates are daily. The story quality, both writing and development is awesome. The characters all have their own backgrounds and personalities(even the antagonists!) The mc is a good guy that still cares for his players, even though his environment could change him. The denizens (citizens) of the Abyss aren't all evil, and they act just like any chuunibyou worker in a game store. so its all good
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I highly recommend this novel it has not many boring chapters and always get you hooked in it. Give it a try you might also like it. The story development in this good it's not to fast nor it's slow. You can really appreciate every character and how they live because they there own emotions and characteristics of there own.
This game master of souls is a very interesting blend of many cultural things that just improves the story in an interesting way lol if a good attention grabbing book is what your looking for id recommend this one for sure 🤘
Ok it was a great book I usually read books with some art but this this is amazing I still have more to read because I fell asleep last night reading it 10/10
Hi. You do not have to reply to this and props to you for reply to all most every comment so that deserves a 5 star your welcome and I wish I did not have to write 140 letters the end ** I'm going to read you book tomorrow
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Why did you want to update this story again. People will soon forget most of the character in the novel if you don't update it on time. Please try to create time if you don't have it again to post maybe once in a week or in three three days
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(My First 5 ⭐btw) Now , This Isn't Your Usual rpg/fantasy comic it tells you of how the world came to be, who created what and only ever leaves you asking questions about when's the next upload or what's gonna happen next I'm normally strict about the reviews I leave but for once there's nothing bad to say ----------------------------- ⬇️Spoilers Ahead⬇️ ----------------------------- It's excites me to the point where there are actual hidden (for now) stakes to those who play as they just accepted the "privacy policy" (reaper contract) unawares of the 'realism' of the abyss from the development of Ath3na and BlackHowler The Original Few To When You Meet Jaybird And Found Out His Situation The story never seems to slow down or make you lose interest. P.s This Is My Longest Review To Date And I Wanna Thank The Author For Such A Good Story. I Feel That I Shall Stay To Chapter 1000+ Thanks For Reading Pps (like so this appears on the front page of the book)
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Time for the author's shameless self-plugging! 😅 Hi, I'm G.D. Cruz, human scribe of the Fayne (Foolhardies), and now, keeper of stories for the Abyss too. Although my synopsis says it all, I do want to add one tiny little detail... this isn't your typical Lit-RPG story. In fact, I believe you'll agree with me afte you finish reading chapter one. Damn, that Morgana is brutal. My lead, Leo, is every boy's dream... a successful game designer who builds the best games one could play... but then you get a glim**e of his sad tale at the beginning and you may not want to follow in his footste**. All in all, GmofS was a very fun work to write and I barely felt the time pass as I finished a chapter. So I hope to continue it for a long time to come. Cheers! And enjoy! 😁