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This story is really great(in my opinion) and would've wished that the author continued it. .............................................................. ..............................................................
The story is a good one and brand new on webnovel,the ability to analyze DNA and integrate better evolutionary traits of other beings is awesome but also has its own problems as you can get overpowered to quickly plus you need to even the power level so that it is always a challenge.The grammer could use a bit of work, check out Grammerly for that. Keep up the good work.
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never read a king SI b4 loads of villas but never kong. looking forward to how he improves and hope there is a kongVSzilla saga ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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This story is really great(in my opinion) and would've wished that the author continued it. .............................................................. ..............................................................
The story is a good one and brand new on webnovel,the ability to analyze DNA and integrate better evolutionary traits of other beings is awesome but also has its own problems as you can get overpowered to quickly plus you need to even the power level so that it is always a challenge.The grammer could use a bit of work, check out Grammerly for that. Keep up the good work.
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never read a king SI b4 loads of villas but never kong. looking forward to how he improves and hope there is a kongVSzilla saga ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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