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Gosh, This is so nice. I can't wait to read few chapters more. I hope you will update more often author. this is really a nice masterpiece. :)
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Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your appealing novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?once your book gets exclusive contracted with us, you can get lots of rewards! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! 【my email: kazechanku@gmail.com】 If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. I’m sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
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Overall I think I get the story and might consider it has the potential. However, the style of writing seemed stiff and not fluid so it made it like robotic writing. Will try to read more chapters to see if there is improvement
Hi, My name is Riya. I recently wrote a book and would love it if you checked it out. It's a Badboy goodgirl lovestory. https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/18967603205763405?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4314683099
uaahhhh..... sebenarnya cerita nya bagus, bisa di mengerti tapi ngak terperinci, but keep fighting Thor, I believe you .....🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥👌👌
Hi ! for those of you who like the romance genre it is very suitable to read this story, I really enjoy reading the story which is very interesting 🥺💓🔥
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gosh, I just found out there's an English version!! 😍 I really like Clara, like it the most! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
This novel has an exciting story, and I'm also curious to continue to the next chapter, good story!, keep spirit thor 😊😊😊😊😁😁😁😁👍👍👍
I love Mr. K, so I want to have a boyfriend like Mr.K 🤣. The storyline is interesting, the characters are lively and it can make me as a reader feel the situation.
Must Read! the novel has a very good story line. try a few chapter and you will see the story is a gem. it really worth the time to read. very recommended.
the boss of a private agent, waaaaaaow he is so cooooool! i love this story, can't wait for the next chapter thoor! i love every character on this story!
different stories from the others relate to one another who do not know each other and know each other.[img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
OMG!!! im so loving a mysterious novel like this!!! good job author!!! this is such an excelent story you had to read in your free time!!! good job author!!! 😍😍😍
i read more chapters and addictictive.. u Should read more, this story' worth to read. the story' full of good words and the situation, plot.. unexpected just like the tittle.. recommended
Action vs Romance...😍😍😍 always love story like this!! everyone must read this!! i can give u spirit to make u able to continue ur story.. hug💪💪💪💪☺☺☺
D*mn, this story is good, you must read this!!! honest review after reading 3 chs: kualitas tulisan: meski ini hasil terjemahan, tapi Inggris nya bagus euy, masih dapat dibaca 😍 pengembangan cerita: aku suka, bikin penasaran, udah pasti bakal di cek versi Indonesia nya, apalagi ini ada misteri" action, agent" gitu 😍 desain karakter: sepertinya Mr K di sini kesannya dibuat misterius ya? membuatku teringat pada charlie di charlie's angel 😂. untuk FL nya, ku blm terlalu nangkap latar belakang dunia: sepertinya di dunia fantasi ya settingan alurnya? keren kok ahh the point is, this story is good, definitely gonna read the Indonesia version 😍
Read the novel like you read Detective Conan. The story is full of mystery. As a reader I am curious about the story line. The novel is good. I recommend this novel
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I've read the original version of this book, and I really really really love it. The author is a genius because the mysteries in this book are unpredictable. I also love the relationship between Mr. K and Clara so so so much. The writing quality is also excellent. Good job author, you are a truly Romance-Mystery Master!!
kindly like the story' begin.. waiting for the plot and more... i read the other review and starting read more chapters.. great job author. [img=update]
I think the story is interesting, thor, great .... diligently up to thor, waiting for the next chapter ..... [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Woah! It's so cool have a mystery and secret agent. I can imagine the suit of the Mr. K wearing 😋😋 Good luck thor and keep writing. Don't stop in the middle and don't give up. Fighting!!
I hope to read more of your work. I'm curious about the continuation of the story from Mr K and Clara. Cheer up Thor. Good health and lots of ideas for writing this story.
I like puzzled stories like this. so remembering Detective Conan in solving a case. this story for us can not stop to continue reading. Author, your work makes me addicted 🥰😍😘
Good Luck Thorrrrr I like your story and looking forward to see the next chapter and what Will happened between Mr K and Clara. I Think both of them can give the best chemistry. 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘
Gosh, This is so nice. I can't wait to read few chapters more. I hope you will update more often author. this is really a nice masterpiece. :)
good job [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]
揭示劇透 Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your appealing novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?once your book gets exclusive contracted with us, you can get lots of rewards! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! 【my email: kazechanku@gmail.com】 If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. I’m sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
揭示劇透 Overall I think I get the story and might consider it has the potential. However, the style of writing seemed stiff and not fluid so it made it like robotic writing. Will try to read more chapters to see if there is improvement
Hi, My name is Riya. I recently wrote a book and would love it if you checked it out. It's a Badboy goodgirl lovestory. https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/18967603205763405?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4314683099
uaahhhh..... sebenarnya cerita nya bagus, bisa di mengerti tapi ngak terperinci, but keep fighting Thor, I believe you .....🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥👌👌
Hi ! for those of you who like the romance genre it is very suitable to read this story, I really enjoy reading the story which is very interesting 🥺💓🔥
❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😍😍😍😍😍😍❤😍❤😍❤❤😍❤😍❤😍😘😘😘😘😘😘❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😍😍😍😍😍😍❤😍❤😍❤❤😍❤😍❤😍😘😘😘😘😘😘❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😍😍😍😍😍😍❤😍❤😍❤❤😍❤😍❤😍😘😘😘😘😘😘❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😍😍😍😍😍😍❤😍❤😍❤❤😍❤😍❤😍😘😘😘😘😘😘❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😍😍😍😍😍😍❤😍❤😍❤❤😍❤😍❤😍😘😘😘😘😘😘❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😍😍😍😍😍😍❤😍❤😍❤❤😍❤😍❤😍😘😘😘😘😘😘❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😍😍😍😍😍😍❤😍❤😍❤❤😍❤😍❤😍😘😘😘😘😘😘❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😍😍😍😍😍😍❤😍❤😍❤❤😍❤😍❤😍😘😘😘😘😘😘❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😍😍😍😍😍😍❤😍❤😍❤❤😍❤😍❤😍😘😘😘😘😘😘❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😍😍😍😍😍😍❤😍❤😍❤❤😍❤😍❤😍😘😘😘😘😘😘❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😍😍😍😍😍😍❤😍❤😍❤❤😍❤😍❤😍😘😘😘😘😘😘❤❤❤❤❤
gosh, I just found out there's an English version!! 😍 I really like Clara, like it the most! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
This novel has an exciting story, and I'm also curious to continue to the next chapter, good story!, keep spirit thor 😊😊😊😊😁😁😁😁👍👍👍
I love Mr. K, so I want to have a boyfriend like Mr.K 🤣. The storyline is interesting, the characters are lively and it can make me as a reader feel the situation.
Must Read! the novel has a very good story line. try a few chapter and you will see the story is a gem. it really worth the time to read. very recommended.
the boss of a private agent, waaaaaaow he is so cooooool! i love this story, can't wait for the next chapter thoor! i love every character on this story!
different stories from the others relate to one another who do not know each other and know each other.[img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
OMG!!! im so loving a mysterious novel like this!!! good job author!!! this is such an excelent story you had to read in your free time!!! good job author!!! 😍😍😍
i read more chapters and addictictive.. u Should read more, this story' worth to read. the story' full of good words and the situation, plot.. unexpected just like the tittle.. recommended
Action vs Romance...😍😍😍 always love story like this!! everyone must read this!! i can give u spirit to make u able to continue ur story.. hug💪💪💪💪☺☺☺
D*mn, this story is good, you must read this!!! honest review after reading 3 chs: kualitas tulisan: meski ini hasil terjemahan, tapi Inggris nya bagus euy, masih dapat dibaca 😍 pengembangan cerita: aku suka, bikin penasaran, udah pasti bakal di cek versi Indonesia nya, apalagi ini ada misteri" action, agent" gitu 😍 desain karakter: sepertinya Mr K di sini kesannya dibuat misterius ya? membuatku teringat pada charlie di charlie's angel 😂. untuk FL nya, ku blm terlalu nangkap latar belakang dunia: sepertinya di dunia fantasi ya settingan alurnya? keren kok ahh the point is, this story is good, definitely gonna read the Indonesia version 😍
Read the novel like you read Detective Conan. The story is full of mystery. As a reader I am curious about the story line. The novel is good. I recommend this novel
揭示劇透 I've read the original version of this book, and I really really really love it. The author is a genius because the mysteries in this book are unpredictable. I also love the relationship between Mr. K and Clara so so so much. The writing quality is also excellent. Good job author, you are a truly Romance-Mystery Master!!
kindly like the story' begin.. waiting for the plot and more... i read the other review and starting read more chapters.. great job author. [img=update]
I think the story is interesting, thor, great .... diligently up to thor, waiting for the next chapter ..... [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Woah! It's so cool have a mystery and secret agent. I can imagine the suit of the Mr. K wearing 😋😋 Good luck thor and keep writing. Don't stop in the middle and don't give up. Fighting!!
I hope to read more of your work. I'm curious about the continuation of the story from Mr K and Clara. Cheer up Thor. Good health and lots of ideas for writing this story.
I like puzzled stories like this. so remembering Detective Conan in solving a case. this story for us can not stop to continue reading. Author, your work makes me addicted 🥰😍😘
Good Luck Thorrrrr I like your story and looking forward to see the next chapter and what Will happened between Mr K and Clara. I Think both of them can give the best chemistry. 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘
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