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WOW! ! Writing quality ✅ Character design ✅ Story development ✅ Update stability ✅ World background ✅ This is simply wowable. I love the book and coming from a fantasy writer and reader as myself... I can really say this book is great. To all fantasy readers, come n read, this is a definite recommended. Author's style of writing, grammar n all are on point, giving u a fluent read. My only prov would be when author doesn't differentiate the fly's thought from author's narration... I almost thought it was fl POV at one point. But other than that which was probably unlikely noticeable... This is a splendid work. Good job, wud definitely continue reading. Adding to my library now and wud leave author a gift 😘
This is a fun book and one that shows the author's fantastic imagination. It's a story about Lillian's adventures as the Fairy Godmother. Lillian as the MC def. not an OP character, but that's the best thing about her. She goes through all her conflicts and struggles with a smiling face, which is truly inspiring. The side characters are entertaining to read, as well. They are alive and have their own development as the story continues. The world is a combination of the real world and a fantasy one. The transitions between the two worlds are written nicely. The fantasy world is vividly written. All in all, it's a gem, and I can't wait for more chapters. Will follow closely till it reaches the end. Author, all the best!
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Author your awesome your story is great please author we need more chapters why are you quite author your my favourite person give us your readers more chapters please author.
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Great and interesting artwork. I love how the author gives a vivid description of events and characters. I really love the flow of events. This story really got potential and I highly recommend it to anyone. Good job author, this is really a master piece. Thumps up and keep doing what you do best.
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I like the plot...it's not like others and it's very intriguing so I'm going to try it out and I want to see how it's going to be. I really hope it's as awesome as my imagination. Thanks author–san for this new plot. I haven't read the book but the synopsis captivated me...I do hope I love it
cooollllll!!!! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This story wants me to read it again and again . A intruging story there is a mysterious past of the lead that makes the audience curious but also fun to read
WOW! ! Writing quality ✅ Character design ✅ Story development ✅ Update stability ✅ World background ✅ This is simply wowable. I love the book and coming from a fantasy writer and reader as myself... I can really say this book is great. To all fantasy readers, come n read, this is a definite recommended. Author's style of writing, grammar n all are on point, giving u a fluent read. My only prov would be when author doesn't differentiate the fly's thought from author's narration... I almost thought it was fl POV at one point. But other than that which was probably unlikely noticeable... This is a splendid work. Good job, wud definitely continue reading. Adding to my library now and wud leave author a gift 😘
This is a fun book and one that shows the author's fantastic imagination. It's a story about Lillian's adventures as the Fairy Godmother. Lillian as the MC def. not an OP character, but that's the best thing about her. She goes through all her conflicts and struggles with a smiling face, which is truly inspiring. The side characters are entertaining to read, as well. They are alive and have their own development as the story continues. The world is a combination of the real world and a fantasy one. The transitions between the two worlds are written nicely. The fantasy world is vividly written. All in all, it's a gem, and I can't wait for more chapters. Will follow closely till it reaches the end. Author, all the best!
揭示劇透 Author your awesome your story is great please author we need more chapters why are you quite author your my favourite person give us your readers more chapters please author.
揭示劇透 Great and interesting artwork. I love how the author gives a vivid description of events and characters. I really love the flow of events. This story really got potential and I highly recommend it to anyone. Good job author, this is really a master piece. Thumps up and keep doing what you do best.
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I like the plot...it's not like others and it's very intriguing so I'm going to try it out and I want to see how it's going to be. I really hope it's as awesome as my imagination. Thanks author–san for this new plot. I haven't read the book but the synopsis captivated me...I do hope I love it
cooollllll!!!! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This story wants me to read it again and again . A intruging story there is a mysterious past of the lead that makes the audience curious but also fun to read