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WARNING READ THIS AT RISK OF CONFUSION OF MIND, hope u like it at the end tho u will feel like what did I just read cuz it does just that and it’ underrated this is how u make a antihero.
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It was a good book all in all but theres not much explination in the chapters and the stability of the book is very low and i am sad because i think that this book couldve become something very great.
I came to see op loli kick butt and got that in no time at all but I am still wanting more chapters I miss reading the adventures of this little one
It’s a pretty good book for anyone that wants to read about an op loli, that’s really all I have to say.
Came to find an op loli and it's what I got I hope the author does not drop this........,..,.,.,....,. Foafbhowjfowjfowfpjtixsgihrjpfjoan hfowjfpjs sjlfjsfjowjfpwjglhqfhwkhdkw
There's not much to say... I came to find a Loli being OP that's exactly what I got. So if that's what you're looking for, then come right in.
WARNING READ THIS AT RISK OF CONFUSION OF MIND, hope u like it at the end tho u will feel like what did I just read cuz it does just that and it’ underrated this is how u make a antihero.
揭示劇透 It was a good book all in all but theres not much explination in the chapters and the stability of the book is very low and i am sad because i think that this book couldve become something very great.
I came to see op loli kick butt and got that in no time at all but I am still wanting more chapters I miss reading the adventures of this little one
It’s a pretty good book for anyone that wants to read about an op loli, that’s really all I have to say.
Came to find an op loli and it's what I got I hope the author does not drop this........,..,.,.,....,. Foafbhowjfowjfowfpjtixsgihrjpfjoan hfowjfpjs sjlfjsfjowjfpwjglhqfhwkhdkw
There's not much to say... I came to find a Loli being OP that's exactly what I got. So if that's what you're looking for, then come right in.
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