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章節 2: Story begins

{I'm so sorry for not posting this for over a month, l didn't know how to add more chapters and my community needed help with all kinds of stuff. (like bringing food to old people who are at risk from the virus, and keeping the place clean) I know the feeling and I am really sorry that I did this to all of you. From now on I will try to update at least once a week, anyway back to the story}

1000 years have passed. in a lonely castle, there was a young man, around 20, with a straw hat sitting sloppily on an iron throne. "Captain! captain!" a girl yelled in the hall, she looked 19 with a pink tank-top and long black pants. She had long black hair and green eyes, you could see her muscles from a mile away but she had a gentle touch to her.

"We finally found the fruit you wanted" the young man jumped from the chair and got in front of her in what seemed to be an instant. "Are you serious? it better not be another one of your pranks Nataly" startled from his sudden movement Nataly replied, "n-no captain we have found the time-time fruit".

"What about the marines? did they not try to interrupt you?" "no captain, after their 200th defeat aginst us they decided to leave us alone for some time to recover their forces. I mean come on... we have ruled over the sea for the last millennia and you yourself have reached new levels of strength that no one could ever hope to come close, yet they still challenge us every couple of years only to get destroyed again. At this point, I'm starting to feel sorry for them". "Never mind that, you should tell Don to bring me the fruit" the young man rebutted, rare stars appearing in his eyes, "now GO!".

"YES CAPTAIN!". Nataly ran at her top speed. how many years has she been with him? and yet this was the first time in her life were she heard him yell. Alone in his room, the young man jumped from happiness. "I can't believe it is finally happening! after all of these years, I can finally see you all again. Zoro, Nami, Sanji, Jimbe, Chopper, Usopp, Franki, Shanks, grandpa I can finally spend my time with you all again and this time I will not waste it"..... there was silence in the room when the young man realized something.

"I CAN SAVE ACE!!! I DON'T NEED TO TRAIN JUST TO REMAIN SAIN FROM THIS LONELINESS, I CAN RIGHT MY WRONGS I CAN FINALLY MAKE THEIR DREAMS COME TRUE". Tears started falling from the young man's face as he started thinking about his reunion with his family and friends, and the possibilities that accompanied it. The young man started to plan his gurney where he would repay his former crew by making their dreams come true, he wanted them to feel like they have nothing left to lose in this world before passing away, because he remembered their sacrifice for his dream and the guilt of not being able to repay it slowly poisoned him from the inside. days passed and finally, Nataly came to his throne room and delivered the news "Don said that we are ready to send you back, captain Luffy!"


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