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I'm very much obliged to give this fanfic a 5 star. It is dark but real. It gets you thinking about life and the consequences and impact of your actions in the life of other people.
it's so depressing that it feels like an invisible hand twisting my guts yet I can't stop myself from wanting more. a symphony of broken dreams an orchestra of twisted ideals and a haunted melody of broken hearts. from the purest wishes to the tainted souls. I have seen few stories that can display the intricacies of rotten purity the way you have I can't wait to see how this story ends, a pure and innocent boy becomes a vengeful spirit eventually a regretful man who ends up a dead man walking I wander what happens next shall the the boy, no the man leave his mark on the world before his body joins his soul in eternal rest or will his chorus of the broken end up falling short I can't wait to see
I came for reckless villainy..... But I got psychological therapy instead..😓😓😓😓 Hence the low rating..
Again trash deku. Has to be a goody two shoes and help everyone. Sigh why do I even bother.
I love this. This perfectly captures the world of MHA with its society that is built on a system of concealed discrimination. This is not a typical fanfiction. It is a study on villains; what created them; what motivates them; and what they really are. This is so much more than just a fun project a high school kid did on the side. This is a literary masterpiece (exaggerated, but I think I got the point across).
I love how detailed the emotions are portrayed, very detailed. i also live izukus mentallity changes and overall changed of the character throughout The story.
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story should be is interesting but too much emphasis of mc emotions and thoughts, too much of use of figurative language and what-not, vague description on the surrounding(scenes).
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It is literal depression incarnate, and that's why I like it. Do expect a LOT of philosophical stuff in the novel, as, in literally every single chapter there a quote
Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great
Beauty will always be found in the darkest of times (Now excuse me while I finis this review) Euejdjxsiwhehebsbhsuewijejshsbwhehehsjswjwuejjeehhsueoqkwjehdbebehwosoductvysiqqoehebvsbsaiwiydisiduncsheiobh gsuaovjvbshwk. Doiejehch she crisp hs sq kkdjdiddijdjdieieoqqojszjdhhdhejeieowoqkwnsnshdhdhdbdhddh Thank you
I came here expecting to read a story about a broken man as everything he ever believed and hoped for was shattered. Started great then the author just had to pull a bullshit reason to put deku into UA. That's fine and all since he was there to infiltrate. Then deku starts helping a few key people in the cast. Helped todoroki with his daddy issues Helped uraraka to get stronger And now he's helping BAKUGOU OF ALL PEOPLE, ONE OF THE MAIN REASONS HE WAS DRIVEN TO Suicide. Bakugou's mindset was slowly breaking down and now he's pulling him up. Yeah, I dropped it right then and there. If this review gets deleted I will spam this with 1 stars.
Enjoyed the story greatly! Great mix between detail and dialogue. I also enjoy the quotes you have at the beginning of each chapter. Keep up the good work! Fun to read!
This is it!! I finally found it!! I've been wondering on this app typing mha villain fanfic ,and finally came across this ff!! Although i have not read i will be giving it 5 stars!!😆
The reason is so sound frankly its frightening, you take a boy who has been physically and mentally abused to a point he can't even properly speak anymore, who was bullied all his life by someone who once was his bestfriend, then getting the only thing that made him sane, his dream shattered by the very man he idolised to the extreme...... A true villian, the truest sense of a man broken by society....this is true even now in today's sense this is how most psychopathic killers or the like are molded
Loving this new side of deku, it's a more realistic outcome based on his situation during the anime and I can't wait to see future interactions between him and other UA students. BTW I hoping for some deku x toga psycho romance.
The story is interesting, entertaining and has an element of realism to it. Even though the events are quite different, it still feels like Deku despite being warped. A good read overall. :)
I really like the story.I never could finish the real MHA due to Midoriya's everything(attitude and all) but this story,albeit darker,makes him way better and is very enjoyable to read.Keep doing miracles author! ^-^
The writing and the overall story is some of the best I have seen on Webnovel it is really good.................................................
10/10 2 lazy to give a review, I know you will understand, keep up the good work. 😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈
This is amazing forgotten to write a review till now so ya plz make more stories like this after this one is over.Maybe a villain Naruto idk your decision.
look its very great story but the writing quality is very bad don't understand who is speaking and u there isn't any difference between his inner thoughts and his speech so u cant know is he thinking or speaking and the paragraph is not organized enough so the writing quality only take 1 star
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Well, it's kinda my obligation as the author to give it 5 stars. :) In all honestly, I'm pretty proud of my little baby book. You should give it a try! I've gone through great lengths to ensure that the anatomy, injures, mental illnesses, etc throughout the book are in line with reality. You can think of the whole think as one part narrative, and another part research. Plus, Deku's the main character! The one and only cinnamon role, now a sinnamon variety instead (Pun intended :D). In any case, I hope my review convinced you to give this a try!
I'm very much obliged to give this fanfic a 5 star. It is dark but real. It gets you thinking about life and the consequences and impact of your actions in the life of other people.
it's so depressing that it feels like an invisible hand twisting my guts yet I can't stop myself from wanting more. a symphony of broken dreams an orchestra of twisted ideals and a haunted melody of broken hearts. from the purest wishes to the tainted souls. I have seen few stories that can display the intricacies of rotten purity the way you have I can't wait to see how this story ends, a pure and innocent boy becomes a vengeful spirit eventually a regretful man who ends up a dead man walking I wander what happens next shall the the boy, no the man leave his mark on the world before his body joins his soul in eternal rest or will his chorus of the broken end up falling short I can't wait to see
I came for reckless villainy..... But I got psychological therapy instead..😓😓😓😓 Hence the low rating..
Again trash deku. Has to be a goody two shoes and help everyone. Sigh why do I even bother.
I love this. This perfectly captures the world of MHA with its society that is built on a system of concealed discrimination. This is not a typical fanfiction. It is a study on villains; what created them; what motivates them; and what they really are. This is so much more than just a fun project a high school kid did on the side. This is a literary masterpiece (exaggerated, but I think I got the point across).
I love how detailed the emotions are portrayed, very detailed. i also live izukus mentallity changes and overall changed of the character throughout The story.
ggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
Too many flashback like 4 minutes before present time [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
story should be is interesting but too much emphasis of mc emotions and thoughts, too much of use of figurative language and what-not, vague description on the surrounding(scenes).
muito bom........................................................................................................................................................
It is literal depression incarnate, and that's why I like it. Do expect a LOT of philosophical stuff in the novel, as, in literally every single chapter there a quote
Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great
Beauty will always be found in the darkest of times (Now excuse me while I finis this review) Euejdjxsiwhehebsbhsuewijejshsbwhehehsjswjwuejjeehhsueoqkwjehdbebehwosoductvysiqqoehebvsbsaiwiydisiduncsheiobh gsuaovjvbshwk. Doiejehch she crisp hs sq kkdjdiddijdjdieieoqqojszjdhhdhejeieowoqkwnsnshdhdhdbdhddh Thank you
I came here expecting to read a story about a broken man as everything he ever believed and hoped for was shattered. Started great then the author just had to pull a bullshit reason to put deku into UA. That's fine and all since he was there to infiltrate. Then deku starts helping a few key people in the cast. Helped todoroki with his daddy issues Helped uraraka to get stronger And now he's helping BAKUGOU OF ALL PEOPLE, ONE OF THE MAIN REASONS HE WAS DRIVEN TO Suicide. Bakugou's mindset was slowly breaking down and now he's pulling him up. Yeah, I dropped it right then and there. If this review gets deleted I will spam this with 1 stars.
Enjoyed the story greatly! Great mix between detail and dialogue. I also enjoy the quotes you have at the beginning of each chapter. Keep up the good work! Fun to read!
This is it!! I finally found it!! I've been wondering on this app typing mha villain fanfic ,and finally came across this ff!! Although i have not read i will be giving it 5 stars!!😆
The reason is so sound frankly its frightening, you take a boy who has been physically and mentally abused to a point he can't even properly speak anymore, who was bullied all his life by someone who once was his bestfriend, then getting the only thing that made him sane, his dream shattered by the very man he idolised to the extreme...... A true villian, the truest sense of a man broken by society....this is true even now in today's sense this is how most psychopathic killers or the like are molded
Loving this new side of deku, it's a more realistic outcome based on his situation during the anime and I can't wait to see future interactions between him and other UA students. BTW I hoping for some deku x toga psycho romance.
The story is interesting, entertaining and has an element of realism to it. Even though the events are quite different, it still feels like Deku despite being warped. A good read overall. :)
I really like the story.I never could finish the real MHA due to Midoriya's everything(attitude and all) but this story,albeit darker,makes him way better and is very enjoyable to read.Keep doing miracles author! ^-^
The writing and the overall story is some of the best I have seen on Webnovel it is really good.................................................
10/10 2 lazy to give a review, I know you will understand, keep up the good work. 😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈
This is amazing forgotten to write a review till now so ya plz make more stories like this after this one is over.Maybe a villain Naruto idk your decision.
look its very great story but the writing quality is very bad don't understand who is speaking and u there isn't any difference between his inner thoughts and his speech so u cant know is he thinking or speaking and the paragraph is not organized enough so the writing quality only take 1 star
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Well, it's kinda my obligation as the author to give it 5 stars. :) In all honestly, I'm pretty proud of my little baby book. You should give it a try! I've gone through great lengths to ensure that the anatomy, injures, mental illnesses, etc throughout the book are in line with reality. You can think of the whole think as one part narrative, and another part research. Plus, Deku's the main character! The one and only cinnamon role, now a sinnamon variety instead (Pun intended :D). In any case, I hope my review convinced you to give this a try!