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Just really love it no idea why.the story development is great. Just minor errors. Characters of the story are well designed. And am curious bout the ending of the story
I try to read but i got bored after chapter 10. ML is stupid and coward. FL seems determined to find happiness and let go of everything which is good. But side character is quite stupid especially that villainess (the daughter of her brother’s aunt) she is utterly stupid. Her reasoning and excuses after ML found out her involvement tho was stupid. Overall i dislike the ML.
Love the story based on summary. Can you please edit the story. Will try reading it. If you don't find an editor I can do the same for you.Look forward to reading it.
Although the writing has a lot of spelling and grammatical errors, the story itself is interesting... FL seems determined to find her happiness in her second life and correct her mistakes that made her lose everything... Anyway, the story is really great!...
Even though it has some spelling and grammar issues, this story made me feel better at a low point and I really appreciate it. I want to send a well deserved thank you to the author.
Not a long story but it grabs your heart that and you fall in love with it. 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕
hello this is the first time i read the book from this author. and its actually nice . I look forward to the story development . 😊😊😊😊🙂
The story its great! Love the characters .. a little difficult to read but overall i love the story and the end .. chinu is soo cute 🥰👏👏
It's my first time seeing a fellow Indian names on novel (Indian style writing..aha...si...most of them are Chinese or korean..).will update after completing.
thank you very much for this wonderful story. this made me cry starting from chp 1. why must you put a bowl of onion from the beginning. anyway.. grammar still needs improvement.. but storywise.. i give it 5 :)
Although the grammar and spelling seemlike a bad Google translation, the story is understandable and very sweet, I definitely recommend. It is just different enough from other stories to keep you reading to the end.
Honestly the Novel is worth a try, not a typical reincarnation who wants revenge after being reincarnated.. Just that it would be better if author-san check the grammar error find help with translators or proofreaders to help you with the writing quality .. this book has a chance to be at a top. am now excited with the development of the story. If you guys inclined with this genre then try this one.
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love ❤💓 to read your books .. .they are beautifully written Throughli described and so thought full 🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺
koans and a lot to the author and his girl are you out there in a coma and a little bit more of the body of a man who has been able and more powerful and the rest are
Ok so this is obviously a reincarnation story but there's lots of misunderstandings and mature content. I absolutely adore the story but if you cannot ignore that that the entire book is written in broken English and is often confusing then I don't suggest it!! But I do like how the author truly gave you an ending, and you know what happened to all the characters, also its not a 1000 chapter book which to me is great!!
So I started reading this book for light reading and I like the genre. But it has too many grammatical and sentence errors. It feels like too much stuff is going on and the story build up is not properly executed. The basic story is nice but I think the author can work on her writing and execution. I hope the author doesn’t get discouraged by my comment. I hope you keep on improving and keep on writing.
The story idea is very good even though alot of grammar error.. but i really appreciate your hardwork and your braveness to write story . Its amazed that you are great! Hope to see more of your work!
I have read the preview of the novel and the chapter and I could say that this story has potential. :) Keep it up, author! I know I’d learn a thing or two from your characters!
It is one of the nice novels, I have read.... Thanks, for sharing 😁😁😁😁. I will support 😁
Somewhat new and somewhat cliche, but enjoying so far. I like the fl she is sweet and strong, intelligent and not at all your kind and good person. Loving this book so far
YOU SEE I LOVE YOU AND YOUR WORK THE MOST THE WAY YOU WRITE IT'S SUPERB AND KEEP WRITING AND YOU WILL GET YOUR DETENATION....YOU CAN DO IT YOURSELF....AND GO FOR IT. ...
Shameless author here, This is my second story again on rebirth with system, but I wanted to write something about depression and other stuff through story, this is nothing but the journey of Sia where she search for happiness, I hope you give it a try
I read previous book of author I like it very much so I decide to give it a try and I can say it is also quite interesting and somewhat different from other reincarnation story, so you like reincarnation+system story with new type of story then give it a try
I read the another book of this writer rthhl and I really like it, looking forward for this book, over all this story is also looking good. Keep up your work writer.
I have read the first novel of this author and love the story how she have developed the FL looking forward for this novel to . Hope that author keep on writing more novels 👍👍. Have a nice day 😊😊.
Just really love it no idea why.the story development is great. Just minor errors. Characters of the story are well designed. And am curious bout the ending of the story
I try to read but i got bored after chapter 10. ML is stupid and coward. FL seems determined to find happiness and let go of everything which is good. But side character is quite stupid especially that villainess (the daughter of her brother’s aunt) she is utterly stupid. Her reasoning and excuses after ML found out her involvement tho was stupid. Overall i dislike the ML.
Love the story based on summary. Can you please edit the story. Will try reading it. If you don't find an editor I can do the same for you.Look forward to reading it.
Although the writing has a lot of spelling and grammatical errors, the story itself is interesting... FL seems determined to find her happiness in her second life and correct her mistakes that made her lose everything... Anyway, the story is really great!...
Even though it has some spelling and grammar issues, this story made me feel better at a low point and I really appreciate it. I want to send a well deserved thank you to the author.
Not a long story but it grabs your heart that and you fall in love with it. 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕
hello this is the first time i read the book from this author. and its actually nice . I look forward to the story development . 😊😊😊😊🙂
The story its great! Love the characters .. a little difficult to read but overall i love the story and the end .. chinu is soo cute 🥰👏👏
It's my first time seeing a fellow Indian names on novel (Indian style writing..aha...si...most of them are Chinese or korean..).will update after completing.
thank you very much for this wonderful story. this made me cry starting from chp 1. why must you put a bowl of onion from the beginning. anyway.. grammar still needs improvement.. but storywise.. i give it 5 :)
Although the grammar and spelling seemlike a bad Google translation, the story is understandable and very sweet, I definitely recommend. It is just different enough from other stories to keep you reading to the end.
Honestly the Novel is worth a try, not a typical reincarnation who wants revenge after being reincarnated.. Just that it would be better if author-san check the grammar error find help with translators or proofreaders to help you with the writing quality .. this book has a chance to be at a top. am now excited with the development of the story. If you guys inclined with this genre then try this one.
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love ❤💓 to read your books .. .they are beautifully written Throughli described and so thought full 🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺
koans and a lot to the author and his girl are you out there in a coma and a little bit more of the body of a man who has been able and more powerful and the rest are
Ok so this is obviously a reincarnation story but there's lots of misunderstandings and mature content. I absolutely adore the story but if you cannot ignore that that the entire book is written in broken English and is often confusing then I don't suggest it!! But I do like how the author truly gave you an ending, and you know what happened to all the characters, also its not a 1000 chapter book which to me is great!!
So I started reading this book for light reading and I like the genre. But it has too many grammatical and sentence errors. It feels like too much stuff is going on and the story build up is not properly executed. The basic story is nice but I think the author can work on her writing and execution. I hope the author doesn’t get discouraged by my comment. I hope you keep on improving and keep on writing.
The story idea is very good even though alot of grammar error.. but i really appreciate your hardwork and your braveness to write story . Its amazed that you are great! Hope to see more of your work!
I have read the preview of the novel and the chapter and I could say that this story has potential. :) Keep it up, author! I know I’d learn a thing or two from your characters!
It is one of the nice novels, I have read.... Thanks, for sharing 😁😁😁😁. I will support 😁
Somewhat new and somewhat cliche, but enjoying so far. I like the fl she is sweet and strong, intelligent and not at all your kind and good person. Loving this book so far
YOU SEE I LOVE YOU AND YOUR WORK THE MOST THE WAY YOU WRITE IT'S SUPERB AND KEEP WRITING AND YOU WILL GET YOUR DETENATION....YOU CAN DO IT YOURSELF....AND GO FOR IT. ...
Shameless author here, This is my second story again on rebirth with system, but I wanted to write something about depression and other stuff through story, this is nothing but the journey of Sia where she search for happiness, I hope you give it a try
I read previous book of author I like it very much so I decide to give it a try and I can say it is also quite interesting and somewhat different from other reincarnation story, so you like reincarnation+system story with new type of story then give it a try
I read the another book of this writer rthhl and I really like it, looking forward for this book, over all this story is also looking good. Keep up your work writer.
I have read the first novel of this author and love the story how she have developed the FL looking forward for this novel to . Hope that author keep on writing more novels 👍👍. Have a nice day 😊😊.