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The book itself is good, but the cover is cannot be compared with other covers made by author himself. Maybe there will be more readers if author takes the time to make another art masterpiece for the cover.
This is a good book. I'm only 4 chapters in and the plot is good and well paced. The way u go into the characters, everything is spaced out and u dive into them both not just say here he is our protaganist blah blah blah
Nose que mierda estás haciendo autor no pude leer más de tres capítulos por como acortado las cosas ni siquiera se como llegó a pelear con los bandidos i porque la gente que estaba en el carruaje no lo ayudo
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technical side, this book is deserved more attention, the author is pretty genius when it comes to made a book well organized, and the chapter well detailled. 10/10 btw
I don't know why this has only a few reviews and views.This deserves million views. It's that good. To anyone, who is reading this review, give this novel a try. Believe me, it's definitely worth it and you will not regret it. This novel is superb. Really, I am speechless. It keeps getting better and better and keeps wanting you for more. The start of the novel is somewhat rushed and confusing, but everything is revealed as the story progresses. I can see how much the author has improved after reading all the chapters. This is for the author. Excellent work, it's really good and good luck with the writing. (I hope you start writing again soon).
In love with the plot(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦) MC here is not a overpowered type nor a weak type, he is a balanced type who becomes stronger through his fights and journey. (◍•ᴗ•◍)(◍•ᴗ•◍)(◍•ᴗ•◍)(◍•ᴗ•◍) The plot keep on getting intresting, I can't get enough of it. Good work author. Keep it up. ( ꈍᴗꈍ)( ꈍᴗꈍ)( ꈍᴗꈍ)( ꈍᴗꈍ)( ꈍᴗꈍ)( ꈍᴗꈍ)( ꈍᴗꈍ)
It's good but kinda rush for a couple of chapters....... the story is kind of story telling......... hw did a good job tho...... give it a try....it's worth it!
I like that there is an auxiliary chapter for some details to keep things organized. The plot is moving at a good pace. Good character design as well . . . However. The writing. I advice you proofread. The capitalizations are everywhere and as a reader it had distracted me. I suggest you to lowercase the characters when constructing a sentence. (E.g. “The Work Is Good And Amazing” will be hard to read, so instead “The work is good and amazing.” Would give you a better flow on the narration as the readers won’t be distracted while the author conveys what happens. Keep on writing.
I've read four chapters so far. This book has great potential. The World Background is astonishing and attention-grabbing. Keep up the good work author!!!
Good world building and character designs The author have a unique writing style but please keep the paragraph around medium and long length Rather than extra long
Painful read, no flow broken english. Just google translated. Simple story the author might have some surface knowledge but it doesn't show. Knights don't compete in bow competitions, especially wearing full armor and helmet. Also about the hunt. They went hunting in full armor and got lost... because only knights and lords can go... Gave up the torture at around chat 17
The book itself is good, but the cover is cannot be compared with other covers made by author himself. Maybe there will be more readers if author takes the time to make another art masterpiece for the cover.
This is a good book. I'm only 4 chapters in and the plot is good and well paced. The way u go into the characters, everything is spaced out and u dive into them both not just say here he is our protaganist blah blah blah
Nose que mierda estás haciendo autor no pude leer más de tres capítulos por como acortado las cosas ni siquiera se como llegó a pelear con los bandidos i porque la gente que estaba en el carruaje no lo ayudo
Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try! https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
technical side, this book is deserved more attention, the author is pretty genius when it comes to made a book well organized, and the chapter well detailled. 10/10 btw
I don't know why this has only a few reviews and views.This deserves million views. It's that good. To anyone, who is reading this review, give this novel a try. Believe me, it's definitely worth it and you will not regret it. This novel is superb. Really, I am speechless. It keeps getting better and better and keeps wanting you for more. The start of the novel is somewhat rushed and confusing, but everything is revealed as the story progresses. I can see how much the author has improved after reading all the chapters. This is for the author. Excellent work, it's really good and good luck with the writing. (I hope you start writing again soon).
In love with the plot(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦) MC here is not a overpowered type nor a weak type, he is a balanced type who becomes stronger through his fights and journey. (◍•ᴗ•◍)(◍•ᴗ•◍)(◍•ᴗ•◍)(◍•ᴗ•◍) The plot keep on getting intresting, I can't get enough of it. Good work author. Keep it up. ( ꈍᴗꈍ)( ꈍᴗꈍ)( ꈍᴗꈍ)( ꈍᴗꈍ)( ꈍᴗꈍ)( ꈍᴗꈍ)( ꈍᴗꈍ)
It's good but kinda rush for a couple of chapters....... the story is kind of story telling......... hw did a good job tho...... give it a try....it's worth it!
I like that there is an auxiliary chapter for some details to keep things organized. The plot is moving at a good pace. Good character design as well . . . However. The writing. I advice you proofread. The capitalizations are everywhere and as a reader it had distracted me. I suggest you to lowercase the characters when constructing a sentence. (E.g. “The Work Is Good And Amazing” will be hard to read, so instead “The work is good and amazing.” Would give you a better flow on the narration as the readers won’t be distracted while the author conveys what happens. Keep on writing.
I've read four chapters so far. This book has great potential. The World Background is astonishing and attention-grabbing. Keep up the good work author!!!
Good world building and character designs The author have a unique writing style but please keep the paragraph around medium and long length Rather than extra long
Painful read, no flow broken english. Just google translated. Simple story the author might have some surface knowledge but it doesn't show. Knights don't compete in bow competitions, especially wearing full armor and helmet. Also about the hunt. They went hunting in full armor and got lost... because only knights and lords can go... Gave up the torture at around chat 17