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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Not to toot my own horn too much, but I think this novel I've written is very good at making characters feel real... The ironic twinges of humor about their own situations is something that lots of people do, humor and tragedy are the same... The inky difference is timing and tone. It's also very morally grey, but not the kind a lot of people are used to in fiction.
I hate good guys smh, I was gonna read it until you started talking about being a nice person on his second account. Imma read it tho, no worries.
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Although I have barely got up to chapter 8 and haven’t ever wrote a review, today I felt like doing just that. To start off I like how the Mc is a comedian and has a mischievous personality, also about how you write in a different perspective then others( such as it mainly just the character thoughts and he’s not talking out loud, kinda like a diary + nice touch with the Dice POV😂).But mainly I feel like there’s plot missing because you haven’t explained what currently is the “top players” level and I feel that the mans leveling speed is fast as hell, so I don’t know if this is gonna be a short novel(100 chapters or so)but I’m enjoying it👌
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Not to toot my own horn too much, but I think this novel I've written is very good at making characters feel real... The ironic twinges of humor about their own situations is something that lots of people do, humor and tragedy are the same... The inky difference is timing and tone. It's also very morally grey, but not the kind a lot of people are used to in fiction.
I hate good guys smh, I was gonna read it until you started talking about being a nice person on his second account. Imma read it tho, no worries.
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Although I have barely got up to chapter 8 and haven’t ever wrote a review, today I felt like doing just that. To start off I like how the Mc is a comedian and has a mischievous personality, also about how you write in a different perspective then others( such as it mainly just the character thoughts and he’s not talking out loud, kinda like a diary + nice touch with the Dice POV😂).But mainly I feel like there’s plot missing because you haven’t explained what currently is the “top players” level and I feel that the mans leveling speed is fast as hell, so I don’t know if this is gonna be a short novel(100 chapters or so)but I’m enjoying it👌
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.