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章節 19: day of black sun short chapter 453 words

(AN: its been a while, but the reason why I kinda discontinued this, was because of a few reasons ill neglect to mention here... but know that I'm currently now using Grammarly. so my writing will be 10x better. but ill still pump out semi drafts since I'm too lazy to correct them lol. well here's a random time skip. i don't remember much about the details of my story, but there you go. ill try to stream line it.)

Its a regular day, i was casually being beaten by Azula as we were sparring inside the palace walls…

She lurched towards me, and spun in mid air… twisting around, and his a hefty back kick…

Seeing this, i crossed my arms into an X motion, and blocked the strike…

He was pushed back but his stance was firm, as, as he kept his guard up to face his extremely talented sister, Azula…

He went in to punch his sisters face, with a serious expression, but he knew, he knew, that she would dodge it, without any wasted movements…

He felt like he was facing a insurmountable mountain, that was his sister… while he also knew that his brother was much more talented… he also knew that his sister Azula was incredibly talented as well, but she was also cold…

A bit too cold for a sibling…

Her eyes glowed a malicious light as she twirled again, and kicked towards him, it was blocked in the same manner as before… but this time, she put even more force in it, sending him stumbling back… and this was her chance…

Running forth, giving a series of punches, on of them connected with his gut… as he was sent flying while the rest were blocked by his hands…

Sending him flying into the wall…

This is what they have been doing in their spare time, sparing against each other… of course they havnt gotten to spar with their weapons…

They have been watched by the guards and their maids, with no support what so ever…

As a result… it led to this…

Though Azula was mostly letting loose her frustrations out on poor little zuzu giving him hard bruises to deal with much to the delight of Azula, who seems to be getting more and more rough, and angry as the days go pass…

With that being said… it was at this moment, on a regular day, that a massive explosion was heard… shaking the entire grounds… and it was also at this moment, that a struggle could be heard outside the door…

They opened the door to peak outside, and saw a group of soldiers fighting amongst themselves…

Then *BOOOOOOM*

They both blacked out.


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