/ Movies / Eternity with my family ( Twilight fanfic)
摘要
My mom picked my sister and me up from the airport. On our way home we were hit by a truck. What happens when you thought you had died but wake up again in the middle of a crazy witch experiment. Well that's what happened to my family.
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I think that you should continue with this fanfic. You’ve taken a unique perspective in the Twilight world. I’d love to see how you progress this stroy further. Hope I won’t have to wait years for the next update on this story.
don't read this ! everything seems to be normal but then you realize that this was written by a schoolboy without imagination ------------------------------
🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 great book so far author-kun.. can't wait for more chapters to come out this story is interesting so and easy to follow.. 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
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Nice story.... Keep it up... And release frequently 😄😃😀😊☺😉😍😘😚😗😙😜😝😛😳😁😔😌😒😞😣😢😂😭😪😥😰😅😓😩😫😨😱😠😡😤😖😆😋😷😎😴😵😲😟😦😧😮😬😐😕😯😶😇😏😑
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Agréable !! J'aime vraiment cette histoire merci a l'auteur pour son travail. Je comprend un peu le MC les sœur font peur 😱 xd L'histoire est agréable a lire pour moi sa mérite 5 étoiles laisser vous tenter vous n'allait pas le regretter 😉🐼🐼🐼
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It's definitely a good light read. The beginning was a little slow, but it's understandable since the author was building the story background.
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Although the world building and background need some work, and there are some simple typo mistakes, This is a very good novel. and i need a few more words for the word limit for this review.
卷 1 : Story line
- 1 Origins 1 4 years ago
- 2 Origins 2 4 years ago
- 3 Origins 3 4 years ago
- 4 Realization 4 years ago
- 5 Through the ages 1 4 years ago
- 6 Through the ages 2 4 years ago
- 7 First day of School 1 4 years ago
- 8 First day of School 2 4 years ago
- 9 First day of School 3 4 years ago
- 10 Meeting Charlie 4 years ago
- 11 Start of Canon 4 years ago
- 12 Start of canon 2 4 years ago
- 13 Mingling with the Cullens 4 years ago
- 14 Figuring out the truth 4 years ago
- 15 What to do 4 years ago
- 16 Notice 4 years ago
- 17 The reveal 4 years ago
- 18 Family gathering 4 years ago
- 19 Bella! 4 years ago
- 20 Baseball 4 years ago
- 21 Notice! (Not dropped) 4 years ago
- 22 See you later James 4 years ago
- 23 Getting asked to the dance! Again! 4 years ago
- 24 Let the massacre begin 4 years ago
- 25 The massacre 4 years ago
- 26 Getting married 4 years ago
- 27 Notice (not dropped) 4 years ago
- 28 Unnamed 4 years ago
- 29 Notice( not dropped) 4 years ago
- 30 Figuring it out 4 years ago
yeah ima get sent to a different world become a vampire progenitor live 2000 years and have a crush on someone i never met before just because i saw them the tv. does that not sound a bit ridiculous are you really going to just do this i know the idea might of sounded better in you head but just imagine your a 2000 year old female vampire would you have a crush on some you have never met and only saw on tv over 2000 years ago and then you just start dating them i mean seriously!