3評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
I've been reading some dungeon masters' novels so far and this one is quite fun to read. While I do think the MC does not have a realistic reaction most of the time (which is hilarious mostly) but I'll believe the author who said his character will grow over time. I'm looking forward to future chapters.
Author Review here. This is my assessment of my novel, from the characters, down to the world building. Also, this is one of the older novels that I had written, so please go easy on me if this novel is a little bit disappointing since I wrote this when I was younger and I was just starting to write. Anyway, hope you all have fun with my novel :D
Great story I want more chapters. The story contains beastkin, trolls, goblins, ninjas, golem, a usually overpowered protagonist, and wish-fulfillment.
I've been reading some dungeon masters' novels so far and this one is quite fun to read. While I do think the MC does not have a realistic reaction most of the time (which is hilarious mostly) but I'll believe the author who said his character will grow over time. I'm looking forward to future chapters.
Author Review here. This is my assessment of my novel, from the characters, down to the world building. Also, this is one of the older novels that I had written, so please go easy on me if this novel is a little bit disappointing since I wrote this when I was younger and I was just starting to write. Anyway, hope you all have fun with my novel :D
Great story I want more chapters. The story contains beastkin, trolls, goblins, ninjas, golem, a usually overpowered protagonist, and wish-fulfillment.