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Mana Star System: Soul Rebirth

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作者: Nospacess

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-Accepted, Welcome Donis. This is the [Mana Star System].-


This book is about our protagonist, Donis Laurent, exploring the magic world of Erazar. Knowing nothing of this world, he'll have to face whatever this second try at life has to throw at him.

A world where everyone has a system, knows of magic, and is ruled by the strong. His ability to thrive in this world will only be limited by his drive, and not his aptitude. Born with the rarest blessing, seen only once before in the last few hundred years, Donis will have to face the greed of all the old monsters of Erazar.

Hi, this is Nospacess, and it's my first novel. The uploads will be slightly erratic at first as I'm still trying to figure out a writing schedule, but I hope to release a chapter a day, and if things permit, two chapters a day. Each chapter will be 1.5k-2.5k words at least. I would love any and all criticism, and want to make the story grow with the reader. So if you have anything you want to point out, add, or question, I'll read every comment.

The new cover is done by "ivanwithvodka" on fiverr! Big thank you for the commission and the timely delivery!

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dragon_Individual

So far so good. Technically the update schedule is not set in stone yet but I’ll still give it five stars. ————————————————— Keep up the good work!

4yr
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Snoodle_Booper

This novel deserves a read to any that are looking for a great fantasy novel it first follows the typical norms of all reincarnation novels but has a many slight but significant differences such as there is a real need/reason for the mc wanting to become the strongest

4yr
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ahmed_waleed_1200

Keep writing so good, and more more more more more more more more more chapter, thanks for your hard working, I hope you can continue to write this nove.

4yr
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mmatthew

I really enjoy this book. While it’s not entirely original with systems and transmigration, it does have a unique twist to it, no signs of a harem, which I like (seriously why do they have harems, you’re writing for antisocial men, and women, neither of which are interested in reading about a guy sleeping around with 7 women). It defiantly has my attention

4yr
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The_last_Guardin

I relly like the concept of this novel it s not like that it s the first time seeing a novwl with it but i think this one is well made. For me everythink thats more than 7 chapters a week is good so no problems for me there to. Overall we haven t seen that much of the world and charackters but it s only chapter 50. One think i relly liked was the kidnapping of donis nice idea

4yr
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DevilBox

Amazing so far, loving the attitude and the progression. Keep up the good work, thanks for alleviating my birdie during this Quarantine. Can’t wait for the next chapter.

4yr
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FatihKrsmn

Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

4yr
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Serious_Reader

A good story so far but felt rushed from MC getting kidnaped till arc end hope author will slow down a bit and author should give a overview of the said world power system overall good reading exp

4yr
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elano77
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Wow, what a story. Most times, when authors write a fantasy novel, especially one with a system in it, they tend to get caught up in the fantasy and end up with a stale, static novel whose characters and world are unrealistic. This novel does not make the same mistake. It is dynamic with world-building that is measured and deliberate. The story does not have any logical holes and you can flow really well with it and its characters. The characters are largely realistic and multifaceted. The only issue with the story is that most of the other characters are not fleshed out enough. We do not know their backgrounds or motivations which makes it more difficult to connect with them fundamentally. There have been slight improvements to this in recent chapters but it still is not there yet. All in all, I would highly recommend for anyone into fantasy because, system or no, this novel is spectacular.

4yr
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NecromikReal

Not bad System Novel with High Mana and magic action and development. Reincarnated on magic world from simple earth life? (Light Spoiler alert. ............................................................. Really? No.........not so simple.....well played Author San!

4yr
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Aila_Dain

💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟 This is a freaken awesome book! Keep up the good work!

4yr
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Aila_Dain

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4yr
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FREEPALESTINEplz

Love it. Please keep writing (:

4yr
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EnderPL

Writing quality and stability of updates is good so 5* But the rest... ehhh... Story is cliche reincarnation and being genius in magic. Nicely written and all. The Mc as a child is really beta but in a nice way. Then he is kidnapped and suffers. The author did preparation to upgrade his way of thinking. But the Mc didn’t change at all! He is still a genius, he is still useless even with all the magic and weapon training! He again almost dies and the only thing he’s good at is crying! He is afraid of authority and is shaking when meeting a normal guard but is able to speak leisurely with the strongest mages in his region! Really it’s a nice read if you’re not expecting anything but even till chapter 70 the Mc is beta. Not worth wasting time if you’re waiting for the Mc to change.

4yr
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praco74
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Very good novel so far the world building seems very solid the grammar is good .At the beginning it look like supreme magus but it is NOT about a psycopath in a magic world Overall good novel so far

4yr
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Ilham_Fian_06

I love this novel because every chapter of it is satisfying so it make me endure with the waiting time for update and the cursed cliff hanger

4yr
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TanoshimiSubete

Really a great book to be honest. One where you actually don't know what is going to happen. Great stuff tbh. 10/10 for everything. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

4yr
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BigNovelBigDream

This book is amazing, keep going!  Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?

3yr
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poke_predator07

Best book I have ever read..................................................................................................................

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卷 0 : Auxiliary Volume

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卷 1

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    1 Initializing [System] 4 years ago
  2. 2
    2 Mental Exploration 4 years ago
  3. 3
    3 System Shop 4 years ago
  4. 4
    4 Home! 4 years ago
  5. 5
    5 A New Title 4 years ago
  6. 6
    6 [EXP] Bar & [Inspect] 4 years ago
  7. 7
    7 Etheria 4 years ago
  8. 8
    8 Stonegore 4 years ago
  9. 9
    9 More Rewards! 4 years ago
  10. 10
    10 Trepidations 4 years ago
  11. 11
    11 A Blessing 4 years ago
  12. 12
    12 Master Inspector 4 years ago
  13. 13
    13 The First Lesson 4 years ago
  14. 14
    14 Archmage – Galathris 4 years ago
  15. 15
    15 Studious Life 4 years ago
  16. 16
    16 Academic Endeavours 4 years ago
  17. 17
    17 A day, A year 4 years ago
  18. 18
    18 A Turn Never Taken 4 years ago
  19. 19
    19 Kidnappings are fun 4 years ago
  20. 20
    20 Anguish 4 years ago
  21. 21
    21 Just Survive 4 years ago
  22. 22
    22 Wrath 4 years ago
  23. 23
    23 Parchments 4 years ago
  24. 24
    24 Innate Knowledge 4 years ago
  25. 25
    25 It All Begins Now 4 years ago
  26. 26
    26 Too much 4 years ago
  27. 27
    27 Genius Class 4 years ago
  28. 28
    28 Direction 4 years ago
  29. 29
    29 Answers part 1 4 years ago
  30. 30
    30 Answers part 2 4 years ago
  31. 31
    31 [Alchemy] Level-0 4 years ago
  32. 32
    32 Scamming Old Fools 4 years ago
  33. 33
    33 One of Them 4 years ago
  34. 34
    34 The Prophesied Upgrade 4 years ago
  35. 35
    35 The Rest of His Life 4 years ago
  36. 36
    36 -[Dragonfire]- 4 years ago
  37. 37
    37 Grimbay 4 years ago
  38. 38
    38 Gisbir Hunting 4 years ago
  39. 39
    39 Light Briefing 4 years ago
  40. 40
    40 The Trio +1 4 years ago
  41. 41
    41 Calneer and the Volatile Meckstras 4 years ago
  42. 42
    42 Co-operation 4 years ago
  43. 43
    43 A Chefs Duty 4 years ago
  44. 44
    44 Decisions 4 years ago
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    45 Immolate 4 years ago
  46. 46
    46 Limitations of Will 4 years ago
  47. 47
    47 Steeling of Will 4 years ago
  48. 48
    48 Some Tough Truths 4 years ago
  49. 49
    49 Day Off 4 years ago
  50. 50
    50 Day Off Part 2 4 years ago
  51. 51
    51 Eyes 4 years ago
  52. 52
    52 Royal Informants 4 years ago
  53. 53
    53 Sandy Dunes 4 years ago
  54. 54
    54 Sandracons (Part 1) 4 years ago
  55. 55
    55 Sandracons (Part 2) 4 years ago
  56. 56
    56 HArmless Realisations 4 years ago
  57. 57
    57 Darker Than Black 4 years ago
  58. 58
    58 Seed of Distrust 4 years ago
  59. 59
    59 Dr. Gilbert 4 years ago
  60. 60
    60 A Taste Of Her Past 4 years ago
  61. 61
    61 Espionage 4 years ago
  62. 62
    62 Battle Preparations 4 years ago
  63. 63
    63 Becoming Both 4 years ago
  64. 64
    64 Hunger of the Masses 4 years ago
  65. 65
    65 Queen Sandracon 4 years ago
  66. 66
    66 A Secret 4 years ago
  67. 67
    67 Bedside Chat 4 years ago
  68. 68
    68 New Perspective 4 years ago
  69. 69
    69 Always Learning 4 years ago
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    70 Nice 4 years ago
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    71 Alpha Etheria 4 years ago
  72. 72
    72 A Letter Home 4 years ago
  73. 73
    73 Some New Old Ruins 4 years ago
  74. 74
    74 The Ruins Preamble 4 years ago
  75. 75
    75 A Merry Crew 4 years ago
  76. 76
    76 Sacrifice 4 years ago
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    77 Sacrificed 4 years ago
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    78 Birth and Rebirth 4 years ago
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    79 Traps In Traps 4 years ago
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    80 Broken Through 4 years ago
  81. 81
    81 Not What It Seems 4 years ago
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    82 A Logistical Problem 4 years ago
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    83 Duel of Fires 4 years ago
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    84 Construction Work 1 4 years ago
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    85 Construction Work 2 4 years ago

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