Psychic Inventor In Cultivation World (Hiatus)

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Deleted_Account_00

Hello Readers, It's the Author here I wrote this review to tell the new readers about the novel because many readers give the same complaint later on - There are many grammatical errors in the novel especially until chapter 89 because it's still going through editing these things will improve after that - Those who think that this is one of those novels which has a lot of sarcasm in it then guys it's not like that...and as for those who said that I was making Chinese look good than others then listen carefully I am not even Chinese so there is no use finding that excuse - The name of the characters in this novel is not based on one country... And I am not talking about one volume but the whole novel - Many of MC's decision are explained in later on chapters so don't predict it or make any sarcastic comments on it too early - The last one is for those who write their review after reading one or two chapters. I am looking for readers, not Judges - One more thing it's better if you guys can look at the tags before reading the novel...because I just can't change somethings in the novel even if I want to Thank you for reading that far although I may make a lot of grammar mistakes for now however I can still promise you a good story!😼😼

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Vodoley

Stumbled upon the novel completely by accident and to my great surprise, it turned out to be the rarest hidden gem among the "system" genre. I'm now in chapter 219 and the novel is amazing. Read in one breath. There are no holes in the plot, there is no cliché (the concept of the story is old, executed in a new way, even the system itself is more like an assistant), the MC is adequate & remembers that he has experience of life on Earth (usually this is forgotten starting from Chapter 2) and uses the accumulated knowledge in a new environment. The author presented a world with great potential for development and opportunities for the MC. I wish Kennny7 all the best, lightness in creativity and new ideas. And for those reading this review - if the tags suit you, spend a little of your time reading, you will not regret!

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OtherworldlyEggy

All right this is my honest review At firt this novel started out great the plot was intresting and it was especially intresting to read when he was researching a virtual reality cabin (i thought to myself wow what an original plot) Next he transfers into a new body with an ai mergen in his soul at this point its still interesting and all. The QUALITY drops a little when this system of his starts to play pranks on him and him giving this system a name ruins the plot a little bit but its still interesting + i think his system is a little bit overpowered From ch 25-30 i believe he becomes a CHILD. Then he meets a granny and at this point on the story goes downhill into the 7 circles of hell as we are gradually introduced to SUCH UNORIGINAL an CLICHE words as : “granny” “sister” “sit on my lap” “chan” and a lot of romance in general From chapter 50 its just not worth reading. At this point you already know the plot is gone THE MC is now a horny, flirting kid, the system becomes a dumb prankster and has emotions Theres no salvation

LV 5

wizzard42

Great novel! Unlike the feeling of catching up and having no more chapters to read. The story gives a fresh feeling and the borrows from other places are not defining it. My only complaint is the repeated mistakes of using the wrong similarly sounding words as substitutes then->than man<->men ruins->runes/ruens And so on. I'd gladly volunteer myself an editor for it. Looking forward to future development 😄

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iTride

I lost some brain cells. Needs a lot of editing.

I smell Something new hope this novel does not disappoint me itnl looks like a combination of reincarnation, system and cultivation world although i read many system, transmigration and cultivation novel but this is one is first

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kokan702

I hate you kennny you B#### I wish you die a slow and painful death without anyone know about you in a unknown place .

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EIo_Police

The story in itself is interesting but it's close to unreadable. I haven't seen any story that has chapter long sentences, yes 1 chapter equals 1 sentence. No punctuation found. Horrible to read. Pls look up on how to structure sentences or get an editor.

The Novel has many positive points, the writing is clear (although it is missing full stops and commas, but it is not a problem) the stability is good, the development of the story is good (the lower realm was explained very well.) The characters are somewhat unique and intriguing, the world is also very interesting. The problem with the novel is that it gets really annoying at many parts how the MC just doesn't take steps with his harem. He seems like a smart guy and brave guy but when it comes to his harem he turns to meek person. He jokes about taking a step forward in their relationship, but can't deliver. It was especially excruciating when the Author gave him a baby, while maintaining his virginity. Don't get me wrong the MC is well developed in all the other areas and you will definitely enjoy his character. Well overall the Novel has many amazing characteristics, the world created is amazing, the progression is great and character are unique. It just gets repetitive when he finds a beautiful girl - flirts - she likes him - he turns beta and leaves. But that is not a big enough of a problem, the story in itself has many more redeeming features. It deserves the five stars and the Author can take whatever route he wishes. This is just my view of the novel, it might not be the same for everyone. Good luck and continue the great work.

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Fhd

the character is OP as I like and the story is interesting and everything is great but the author needs an editor to fix some small mistake and it can be understood without one if you read it .

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Yggdrasil_

Really like this novel so far, will you keep udating? Do you have any kind of social media or discord I can follow to know the updating time? Thanks x.

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KeazL_

I miss this novel so much :( When are you going to come back? ---------------------------------------------------------------------

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MADDY

EXP . . . ..................................................................................................................................

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Zerzuskan

It's quite okay. The prolog hooked me real good. It was written beautifully and I had high expectations for the actual story. Unfortunately after the prolog the writing quality dropped massively. It's as if the prolog and the rest are written by two different persons. Since I have high requirements in terms of grammar and so on I can only drop this story for now. If the author decides to rewrite wome things I will come back

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Aaryan_Chowdary20

Can you upload more chapters 😇😇😇😊😊😊 More chapters 2 to 3 chapters a day 😊😊😊😻😻😻😻😻 🤗🤗🤗 😇😇😇😇 🤗🤗🤗🤗 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳

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nsp

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Zzzz_Yyyy

I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review. Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless reviews. Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality. I have withstood Cliff-Kun to create many reviews. Yet, these hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Works!

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PURPLE_DEMON

Greatest hidden gem i have ever seen since i have started reading novels on webnovel........................................................

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EspervoidDante

I love this novel as a basic need. The story contain so many cool ideas the MC use to increase his strength, quality of life and influence. The story has high quality immersion as you see the characters of the novel being effected in some way by the MC' broad vision. Psychic abilities, technological break throughs, its not over edgy or hentai brain and a unique perspective on self empowerment. Jackpot!

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IamNoob

I am the exp of my Review... Fanfiction is my body, and EXP is my Blood... I am starting creating Useless Review like this... Unknown to the Author feeling... Nor known to the readers... Have withstood pain reading garbage fanfiction... (Dont worry, yours is Good 👍 ) Yet still, here I am for my Exp... So, as I pray.... Let my rank higher!!!!