The Blessed

LV 12

Evrabonzz

Ok so since I'm the author of course I will give myself a whopping 5 stars because of obvious reasons and because I jus love my work....really good job me u did a great job.🙄

LV 12

Zostran

I played russian novel roulette and I didn't need to grab the eye bleach but instead gently pick up the 40lbs budha statue that i rub for good luck on occasion, then the 35lbs bejeweled toad statue with a heavy bronze coin it it's mouth, and finally the tiny jade dragon that I may or may not misremember owning or pilfering from an aunt visiting when I was 8. It's that fake jade, like really caustic resin ones you get at a swap meet. Pretty sure if I bust up the statues I'll either get a lot of money, a trip to the clink, or crushed childhood memories. Anyway the MC is fun and the plot a twist of something familiar. It's my cup of tea and all I'll say is give it a try and ignore my random bouts of word diarrhea.

LV 14

kaban

The pace of the story is good, I liked how you setted up the world background. MC's personallity is okay too, a clever and smart guy. But your novel sucks as **** in writing quality, making it almost unreadable, as i have to reformulate entire phrashes in my head just to understand what's going on, almost looks like MTL. I tried to give it a try but couldn't withstand it, good luck xD

LV 12

Jameson_The_Odd

Love the story hate the writing its so odd to read that I have to read the same sentence a few times but once I've got the idea I'm happy as can be.

LV 4

Kaisen1

up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up

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LV 5

Azathoth_PlotGod

Just because. I haven't even started to read yet, lol. But going by your other novel, this must be as good or even better! Love ya my dude.

LV 13

Masterpiece17

Bro i love this **** its so damn good hope you continue you it...... Plz continue man i reall like it ........................................

LV 14

OOA

This is awesome but I need no WE need more chapters.........................................................................................

LV 3

Cardinal_System

Amazing..................................................................................................................................... I had to manually write the dots. My hand hurts now lol.

LV 3

Realplayxd

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LV 1

DeSuLaToR

What can i say?? MOoORRRRREEEEEEE MOoORRRRREEEEEEE MOoORRRRREEEEEEE MOoORRRRREEEEEEE MOoORRRRREEEEEEE MOoORRRRREEEEEEE MOoORRRRREEEEEEE MOoORRRRREEEEEEE MOoORRRRREEEEEEE MOoORRRRREEEEEEE MOoORRRRREEEEEEE MOoORRRRREEEEEEE Its so Good Worth to wait

LV 5

TintedvCeo

OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,AND SO GOOD,GOod,GOOD,GOOD.More chaps.pls.THIS IS THE BEST!!!!

LV 5

TintedvCeo

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LV 1

ftickmepls

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LV 1

DragonicWiener

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Socksniffer

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It's good more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more plsss