/ Anime & Comics / Beyblade Maker
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So I have the weirdest luck you see when my friends and I saw a shooting star we made random joke wishes out loud in all good and fun and it went like this:
F1: I wish to be an ero anime trap with Perfect D!!
F2: I wish to have a system with a twisted personality!
F3: I wish to crossover to a Beyblade world!
Me: I wish to have a phone that can connect to different dimensions and the like!
F4: I wish all the wishes to go to Alex!
F5: I wish to be forever 14!
As we finished making our wishes a bored god chose to grant them all of them for fun but thanks to one of the joke wishes from one of my friends I was forcefully crossed over to a new world as an ero trap that's forever stuck in a 14-year-old body.
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interesting concept, I imagine that you will have to resort to having children, in order to get high points, I look forward to the harem. ..................................................................................................................................................
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Man I kept uploading more chapters that is good. I'll keep watching it. Best bayblade fanfic I've ever seen. 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
You just got a loyal reader with only the description of the novel, keep it UP 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Grammatical errors are common, but not that bad. So far, I REALLY like this novel and hope that you continue this. Would like to know if you're taking a break from this novel or if you dropped it.
This story is Really great the system is amazing, makes sense, and is unique, the plot is great so far, and I wish there was more updates. Really want to see how things are going to turn out in the future.
The story is good but you need to update it more and daily/weekly at least 1 a week but after that it's amazing. The person who said to give all the wishes to Alex is my God.
I enjoy this system very well, well done at showing the powers of the system, was he supposed to be losing money for making the dancer bayblade for Sam's sister i think the numbers might have been off unless it was intentional that he was losing money? Anyways great story egarly awaiting the next chapter, keep writing and ignore the critics.
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While the update speed is slow considering the size of the chapters it's not bad . The world building isn't the best but it's more likely because the author only published 14 chapters as of writing this.so the book is great so far. My favorite part of the book is the authors Creativeity. Now that the review is done does anyone know where to find more beyblade fanfics?
JUST HOPE THAT THE AUTHOR WILL NOT DROP THIS NOVEL AND WILL CONTINUE WRITING IT NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Great story don't drop, Great story don't drop, Great story don't drop, Great story don't drop, Great story don't drop, Great story don't drop, Great story don't drop, Great story don't drop, Great story don't drop,
So ... this is my latest reviews. I can't tell much about this novel but, Damn. This story is good! Author-san don't drop this novel kay ~ and here we go xp~xp~xp~xp~xp~xp~xp~xp~xp~xp~xp~xp~xp~xp~xp~xp~xp~xp~xp~xp~xp~xp~xp~xp~xp~xp~xp~xp~xp~xp~xp~xp~xp~xp~xp~xp~xp~xp~
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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was a good and funny read lol, poor dude really got screwed over but at least Hot Milf can soothe his soul till moves onto her kids. like the system pretty well thought out in my opinion
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this novel is good and nice to read, keep us the good work, I'm expecting more updates to be launched, please give more + frequent updates, 😊🙂
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I haven't even started reading yet but the description was enough make me laugh but that bast*Ard who wished for all wishes to go Alex was the true God 😅