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Edited the first chapter, just saying, it was pretty bad, this is my first time writing a novel so yeh MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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寫檢討Edited the first chapter, just saying, it was pretty bad, this is my first time writing a novel so yeh MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
Edited the first chapter, just saying, it was pretty bad, this is my first time writing a novel so yeh MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE