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"I've recently undertaken the serious task of translating this novel. If you're interested in reading it, the title is 'Gaming Genesis: The Tycoon's Epic Rise.' I would greatly appreciate your support, everyone."
hello athor it's been awhile if u don't remember I was ur first fan I always check up on this book I love how u kept the cover once again ur fan Mr skelatal😍😂😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌
quite interesting nd also I do love time travel with vr games in it so it's a good novel for me. So I really loved this one 🤩😍😍🤩🤩😍😍🤩
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
https://***.mtlnovel.com/the-tycoon-god-of-online-gaming/ To read more. Games gamers gaming The game. Need to add more words. I liked the plot.
This is one of the most interesting and fun reads .. I really hope that this book is continued. It’s a nice development line in the trend of MC conquers everything and gets revenge ... done ina very interesting format that keeps your attention .
Attention !!! I will give you 3🌟 Unsatisfactory, Every chapter the stats names change, the numbers change without any reason. Not only that, but he act like some degenerate version of others MC of the genre. This also resembles MLT more than regular translation.
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Is there more? I want to know what happens. Please is there a mtl site that has the other chapters. Also I really want to see that skill in action once he kills 1000
I only did this for the fast pass. Everything else is it's just going to be random cuz I need a hundred and forty. The first thing I did was to be a part of.
for the first time in a novel ... the worst thing in it is not the weak plot or even the bad game ... the translation is the worst thing ever -try unifying words and not use different shapes of the same word (power\strength), (gang\guild), (wisdom\intelligence) and a lot more... -Grammar is non-existent -bad gaming knowledge (why are you translating MMORPG if you know nothing about it?)
it would be nice if this book got picked up. sure there are some odd translations here and there but the overall premise of the book is good.
When knowledge, power, and money combine forces who can stop you? I quite enjoyed myself reading this novel despite its glaring flaws. It’s a video game novel so there’s obviously gonna be video game terms that we’ve all pretty much seen before. You’ve know what a wet nurse or a granny is right? Oh I meant in gaming terms. It obviously means priest/healer. Hehe... yeah. The terms are inconsistent and ones chosen are incomprehensible. I don’t even know whether it’s the fault of the author or the translator. Okay let’s get a little into the story. Parents were killed and MC wants revenge. A groundbreaking game ‘Heaven’ is about to come out and from his knowledge, we know an AI will take over and make the game currency the only one worth anything. This left the MC poor af with his business empire but not in this life. So you can expect a bit of what he’ll do with his knowledge, power, and wealth. The MC itself is quite cold and I like that. He doesn’t dilly dally and play around with his old foes. He just takes them out and makes them his enemy upon first sight. All in all, very hard to read but I was happy reading it for the story although it isn’t that unique.
I love the story and i like the idea behind thr MC and thr world...hope its chosen and please updated and complete the story....thank you for this
So MC..,.................................is .........................a......................................PEDOFILE........................
Really good book a little pissed about the cliffhanger on chapter 60 but whatever look forward to more chapters however with how long it will be till the book comes out I may forget the plot in it and drop it sadly
This is a okay story to read cause of corona you got nothing better to do 🤖🤭🤭🤖🤫😭😥👌🏻😟😭👌🏻🦁👌🏻👌🏻😥😥👌🏻😥🦁👌🏻🦁👌🏻🦁🦁👌🏻🦁👌🏻🦁👌🏻👌🏻🦁🦁🦁👌🏻
Pretty good, but the translation needs some improvement and revision for the English version. Overall, I enjoy it fairly well and would recommend it.
After reading the rest of the free chapters I no longer have any interest or hope in this novel and it quality and it chances to improve the translation quality. I probably could edit better than this
Thank you for the Nice Novel you wrote. Goodluck and I hope that the story will still continue because its FUN. 🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘✌️🤘✌️🤘✌️🤘✌️🤘✌️🤘✌️🤘✌️🤘✌️🤘✌️🤘✌️🤘✌️🤘🤘✌️🤘✌️🤘✌️🤘🤘✌️🤘✌️🤘✌️🤘✌️🤘✌️🤘✌️🤘✌️
Overall the story seems to be good and follows the standard trope of; MC played game, got suppressed in game, died, reborn xx years back. Some new twist and takes on it which makes it interesting. Now for the problems. -odd choices for certain words/phrases in the translation. Not wrong, just odd. Gang instead of clan for instance. -scene transistions occur with little notice. I'm not sure if this is due to spacing in the paragraphs or just story flow. Overall, I hope this is picked up but it wouldn't be one that I'd be upset if it isn't anytime soon.
Didn't by the reading it just by the cover doesn't look like it would be anything interesting for me I just hate how this site makes you post a review to get passes to read more
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lots of people seems to have a problem with this Novel in my view its better than alot of fanfics thats rated highly so i can't tell whats the problem
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I'm liking the combination between MMORPG and cultivation, I just hope that things will develop well. I don't know what more to say, I just want more damn chapters.
"I've recently undertaken the serious task of translating this novel. If you're interested in reading it, the title is 'Gaming Genesis: The Tycoon's Epic Rise.' I would greatly appreciate your support, everyone."
hello athor it's been awhile if u don't remember I was ur first fan I always check up on this book I love how u kept the cover once again ur fan Mr skelatal😍😂😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌
quite interesting nd also I do love time travel with vr games in it so it's a good novel for me. So I really loved this one 🤩😍😍🤩🤩😍😍🤩
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
https://***.mtlnovel.com/the-tycoon-god-of-online-gaming/ To read more. Games gamers gaming The game. Need to add more words. I liked the plot.
This is one of the most interesting and fun reads .. I really hope that this book is continued. It’s a nice development line in the trend of MC conquers everything and gets revenge ... done ina very interesting format that keeps your attention .
Attention !!! I will give you 3🌟 Unsatisfactory, Every chapter the stats names change, the numbers change without any reason. Not only that, but he act like some degenerate version of others MC of the genre. This also resembles MLT more than regular translation.
Read it hehhe read it XPXPXPXPXPXPPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPPXPXPXPXPPX Cppxpxpxpxppxppxpxpxpxpxppxpxppxpxppxpxppx XpXPPXPXPXPXPPXPXPPXPZPXPPXPXPPXPXPPX
Is there more? I want to know what happens. Please is there a mtl site that has the other chapters. Also I really want to see that skill in action once he kills 1000
I only did this for the fast pass. Everything else is it's just going to be random cuz I need a hundred and forty. The first thing I did was to be a part of.
for the first time in a novel ... the worst thing in it is not the weak plot or even the bad game ... the translation is the worst thing ever -try unifying words and not use different shapes of the same word (power\strength), (gang\guild), (wisdom\intelligence) and a lot more... -Grammar is non-existent -bad gaming knowledge (why are you translating MMORPG if you know nothing about it?)
it would be nice if this book got picked up. sure there are some odd translations here and there but the overall premise of the book is good.
When knowledge, power, and money combine forces who can stop you? I quite enjoyed myself reading this novel despite its glaring flaws. It’s a video game novel so there’s obviously gonna be video game terms that we’ve all pretty much seen before. You’ve know what a wet nurse or a granny is right? Oh I meant in gaming terms. It obviously means priest/healer. Hehe... yeah. The terms are inconsistent and ones chosen are incomprehensible. I don’t even know whether it’s the fault of the author or the translator. Okay let’s get a little into the story. Parents were killed and MC wants revenge. A groundbreaking game ‘Heaven’ is about to come out and from his knowledge, we know an AI will take over and make the game currency the only one worth anything. This left the MC poor af with his business empire but not in this life. So you can expect a bit of what he’ll do with his knowledge, power, and wealth. The MC itself is quite cold and I like that. He doesn’t dilly dally and play around with his old foes. He just takes them out and makes them his enemy upon first sight. All in all, very hard to read but I was happy reading it for the story although it isn’t that unique.
I love the story and i like the idea behind thr MC and thr world...hope its chosen and please updated and complete the story....thank you for this
So MC..,.................................is .........................a......................................PEDOFILE........................
Really good book a little pissed about the cliffhanger on chapter 60 but whatever look forward to more chapters however with how long it will be till the book comes out I may forget the plot in it and drop it sadly
This is a okay story to read cause of corona you got nothing better to do 🤖🤭🤭🤖🤫😭😥👌🏻😟😭👌🏻🦁👌🏻👌🏻😥😥👌🏻😥🦁👌🏻🦁👌🏻🦁🦁👌🏻🦁👌🏻🦁👌🏻👌🏻🦁🦁🦁👌🏻
Pretty good, but the translation needs some improvement and revision for the English version. Overall, I enjoy it fairly well and would recommend it.
After reading the rest of the free chapters I no longer have any interest or hope in this novel and it quality and it chances to improve the translation quality. I probably could edit better than this
Thank you for the Nice Novel you wrote. Goodluck and I hope that the story will still continue because its FUN. 🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘✌️🤘✌️🤘✌️🤘✌️🤘✌️🤘✌️🤘✌️🤘✌️🤘✌️🤘✌️🤘✌️🤘🤘✌️🤘✌️🤘✌️🤘🤘✌️🤘✌️🤘✌️🤘✌️🤘✌️🤘✌️🤘✌️
Overall the story seems to be good and follows the standard trope of; MC played game, got suppressed in game, died, reborn xx years back. Some new twist and takes on it which makes it interesting. Now for the problems. -odd choices for certain words/phrases in the translation. Not wrong, just odd. Gang instead of clan for instance. -scene transistions occur with little notice. I'm not sure if this is due to spacing in the paragraphs or just story flow. Overall, I hope this is picked up but it wouldn't be one that I'd be upset if it isn't anytime soon.
Didn't by the reading it just by the cover doesn't look like it would be anything interesting for me I just hate how this site makes you post a review to get passes to read more
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lots of people seems to have a problem with this Novel in my view its better than alot of fanfics thats rated highly so i can't tell whats the problem
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I'm liking the combination between MMORPG and cultivation, I just hope that things will develop well. I don't know what more to say, I just want more damn chapters.
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