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The western high Fantasy setting was a breath of fresh air for me. A good change of pace from all the eastern fantasy settings of immortal cultivation and martial arts. World building was good and didn’t feel like info dumps. I enjoyed reading your story :) I hope you keep writing. Keep up the good work 👍
Absolutely love this book! Has all of the fantasy elements with twists that keeps it unique. I find myself invested in the characters. I get mad at the bad guys and not ashamed to say shed a few tears at some sad parts. It’s a fun story with an intricate storyline thats weaved beautifully together which is amazing since theres so many storylines in twined. I’m dying to see how it ends and dreading it at the same time. I don’t want to let the characters go. Maybe author will do a sequel and/or prequel? I can only hope!!
I bought this as a book to hold me over until my favorites added chapters. But, I enjoyed it so much I finished it before ever checking my favorites. You fall in love with the characters and can’t help but hope everything works out for them. It was a roller coaster of emotions but totally a great read. You won’t regret adding this one to your library. 2 thumbs up. 👍 👍
I enjoyed the action and chase that flowed through the book. The reader was drawn into the book and developed a love for the characters. It was a bittersweet ending but still happy so I loved it. Some grammatical errors but nothing that took away from the story. I definitely recommend it. I bought the whole book and binged. So, I can’t comment on updates. Definitely worth reading.
Best story ever written would make a great movie 100% would watch I will even pay for it * but not a lot though 😅
Another great story of Baevida I like her style. Very easy to love all the characters in this story. 🥰 there are some grammar mistakes but that doesnt stop me reading this great journey. environment well discribed. lots of details. When read it I can picture it 🥰 I like the interaction with the author when I leave some comments. Worth to read and add to your library. I added this novel as one of my favorites 😆
Absolutely loved this book and many others by this author. I am a fan. Will miss reading about Astrid and Blade and the rest of the characters in the book. Congratulations on completing this book.
Clearly a master piece, a great plot with characters developed wonderfully, magic and romance that will keep your curiosity all time, and everything with a perfect timing nether too slow nor to fast, what the update are slow, my only hope is that the story go on and it won't be dropped
You get a five star on this one author. You have a way of making me spellbound when reading your stories. I advise readers to give this book a chance. I love you author 👋😘
Woah!! This book left me mind blown!!🤯🤯 Everything about the book would get you trapped to your seat and each chapter is as intriguing as the last😲💝💝💝 Amazing work author 👌🙌🙌
Why did they locked some of the remaining chapters ow can I open it up.I can't wait to see it. Actually this is an interesting story I love it.bit I wonder if there is a movie of this story
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I’ll admit that I was a little hesitant to read this story, mainly just cause it’s not my typical pick. However it definitely did not disappoint. There may be a few grammer mistakes but you could easily get past it for the incredible story line.
Slow start. Took me awhile to get into it as there are quite a few threads to keep track of. You have 3 kingdoms that want Astrid the Hybrid (human, elf and mer) but once it gets going more it is easy to follow. Absolutely worth pushing through the start.
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Lovely lovely lovely book. I would highly recommend reading this book :)) Very nicely written.. and nice story line. Can't wait to read what's to come
Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your appealing novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?once your book gets exclusive contracted with us, you can get lots of rewards! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! 【my email: kazechanku@gmail.com】 If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. I’m sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
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Great story... great plot, great characters, and I love that there are multiple stories going on at the same time.
The Storys Good its like A Western Fantasy that takes a bit of reality not sure if its ending is good but i do know this novels a bit realistic in the terms of plots the The FL Or Mc Barely has any plot armor her only PA is well her talents and races as for other not quite sure well regardless althos this storys good its not my taste of genre the Development of the story is good since it explains the reason in Second person view or maybe third so its quite easy to immerse urself. all in all its a good story
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This is a great read! I literally only started reading it a few days ago and couldn't put it down. The author has done a great job bringing the story life! Can't wait to see how this journey will play out.
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This book is so special and so good. The different plot twists that author introduces when you think that is it... Simply lovely. A nice blend of fantasy with action and love and secrets and betrayals.
I've just started reading this story and will update more as I read on, can't tell much yet, but so far it's off to a good start, I thinking this story will become more interesting as I read. Thank you and keep up the good work.
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I'm in love with this book. Few chapters in and it is so good. Yay, I got a special fantasy here. Come and read guys and you would love it .
The narrator's dialogue is a nice touch. It really adds up to this fairy tale atmosphere. There are a generous amount of plot twists, which is good to keep the readers more invested on the story. Good job, Mr. Author. It's a very good read.
The western high Fantasy setting was a breath of fresh air for me. A good change of pace from all the eastern fantasy settings of immortal cultivation and martial arts. World building was good and didn’t feel like info dumps. I enjoyed reading your story :) I hope you keep writing. Keep up the good work 👍
Absolutely love this book! Has all of the fantasy elements with twists that keeps it unique. I find myself invested in the characters. I get mad at the bad guys and not ashamed to say shed a few tears at some sad parts. It’s a fun story with an intricate storyline thats weaved beautifully together which is amazing since theres so many storylines in twined. I’m dying to see how it ends and dreading it at the same time. I don’t want to let the characters go. Maybe author will do a sequel and/or prequel? I can only hope!!
I bought this as a book to hold me over until my favorites added chapters. But, I enjoyed it so much I finished it before ever checking my favorites. You fall in love with the characters and can’t help but hope everything works out for them. It was a roller coaster of emotions but totally a great read. You won’t regret adding this one to your library. 2 thumbs up. 👍 👍
I enjoyed the action and chase that flowed through the book. The reader was drawn into the book and developed a love for the characters. It was a bittersweet ending but still happy so I loved it. Some grammatical errors but nothing that took away from the story. I definitely recommend it. I bought the whole book and binged. So, I can’t comment on updates. Definitely worth reading.
Best story ever written would make a great movie 100% would watch I will even pay for it * but not a lot though 😅
Another great story of Baevida I like her style. Very easy to love all the characters in this story. 🥰 there are some grammar mistakes but that doesnt stop me reading this great journey. environment well discribed. lots of details. When read it I can picture it 🥰 I like the interaction with the author when I leave some comments. Worth to read and add to your library. I added this novel as one of my favorites 😆
Absolutely loved this book and many others by this author. I am a fan. Will miss reading about Astrid and Blade and the rest of the characters in the book. Congratulations on completing this book.
Clearly a master piece, a great plot with characters developed wonderfully, magic and romance that will keep your curiosity all time, and everything with a perfect timing nether too slow nor to fast, what the update are slow, my only hope is that the story go on and it won't be dropped
You get a five star on this one author. You have a way of making me spellbound when reading your stories. I advise readers to give this book a chance. I love you author 👋😘
Woah!! This book left me mind blown!!🤯🤯 Everything about the book would get you trapped to your seat and each chapter is as intriguing as the last😲💝💝💝 Amazing work author 👌🙌🙌
Why did they locked some of the remaining chapters ow can I open it up.I can't wait to see it. Actually this is an interesting story I love it.bit I wonder if there is a movie of this story
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揭示劇透 I’ll admit that I was a little hesitant to read this story, mainly just cause it’s not my typical pick. However it definitely did not disappoint. There may be a few grammer mistakes but you could easily get past it for the incredible story line.
Slow start. Took me awhile to get into it as there are quite a few threads to keep track of. You have 3 kingdoms that want Astrid the Hybrid (human, elf and mer) but once it gets going more it is easy to follow. Absolutely worth pushing through the start.
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Lovely lovely lovely book. I would highly recommend reading this book :)) Very nicely written.. and nice story line. Can't wait to read what's to come
Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your appealing novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?once your book gets exclusive contracted with us, you can get lots of rewards! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! 【my email: kazechanku@gmail.com】 If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. I’m sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
揭示劇透 Great story... great plot, great characters, and I love that there are multiple stories going on at the same time.
The Storys Good its like A Western Fantasy that takes a bit of reality not sure if its ending is good but i do know this novels a bit realistic in the terms of plots the The FL Or Mc Barely has any plot armor her only PA is well her talents and races as for other not quite sure well regardless althos this storys good its not my taste of genre the Development of the story is good since it explains the reason in Second person view or maybe third so its quite easy to immerse urself. all in all its a good story
揭示劇透 This is a great read! I literally only started reading it a few days ago and couldn't put it down. The author has done a great job bringing the story life! Can't wait to see how this journey will play out.
The dialogue is a nice touch ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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This book is so special and so good. The different plot twists that author introduces when you think that is it... Simply lovely. A nice blend of fantasy with action and love and secrets and betrayals.
I've just started reading this story and will update more as I read on, can't tell much yet, but so far it's off to a good start, I thinking this story will become more interesting as I read. Thank you and keep up the good work.
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I'm in love with this book. Few chapters in and it is so good. Yay, I got a special fantasy here. Come and read guys and you would love it .
The narrator's dialogue is a nice touch. It really adds up to this fairy tale atmosphere. There are a generous amount of plot twists, which is good to keep the readers more invested on the story. Good job, Mr. Author. It's a very good read.