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LV 1
The story just needs some filling out. Like the speed of the flow, it's been a page Turner so far. I like the beginnings of the growth of the characters. Can't wait for more.
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寫檢討The story just needs some filling out. Like the speed of the flow, it's been a page Turner so far. I like the beginnings of the growth of the characters. Can't wait for more.
The story just needs some filling out. Like the speed of the flow, it's been a page Turner so far. I like the beginnings of the growth of the characters. Can't wait for more.