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Honestly one of the very best novels I‘ve ever read on Webnovel, I absolutely adored this back when it was still being updated and I just couldn’t get enough of it. Was quite honestly like a drug for me. It helped out quite a lot when I was not doing good mentally or physically. This gave me something I’ll hopefully never forget. I can’t understate how good of a read this is and how much fun I had reading it. It seems it’s been assumed that the author is likely no longer living and I hope that isn’t true and that they are living happily especially now that corona is an almost non existent issue. And if they are I’d just like to say thank you for this wonderful novel that never failed to bring a smile to my face. Even if they never see this my prayers go out to them, hope you’re doing good and once again. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for allowing not only me but so many other people to enjoy such a great piece of art.
I love the story it's a fantastic read and the only downside is that the author stopped writing it. they could have a good reason so I won't blame them I just hope that one day it can be continued!
this is one i really did enjoy, and it's a shame it stopped in the asteroid field. I could only ask (Please return some day. ) For now i'll be off looking for another long running story. In addition for anyone looking for a good story even though it stopped it is still worth seeing new stuff and watching how it grows from the start to stop. So give it a chance. I don't think you'll regret it. only get frustrated that it had ended and feels incomplete.
I'm actually upset that I can't give this book my golden ticket, I've read it long ago when the author was still active and writing this novel, it's a gem among the rocks. a bright north star in the sky, or the ace of a space fleet.
good lore and naming of spaceships but I think it needs a bit more memes related to Azur Lane, KanColle, Arp and some other warship anime cuz if it were there it would've been wayy funnier and I think it needs a more conventional naval prefixes, nicknames and other stuff but hey it is what it is
really cute book with a girl lead that is action packed. is good enough to be one of those potentially addicting stories yet the chapters haven't been added in a while. so upsetting comeback author
I hope auther san is all right. They havent been active for over a year and that is kinda worrying. i truely do pray that you ate alright.
it's pretty good despite it being confusing at times it is pretty good eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
I wish she could have used the resources to upgrade her real spaceship to a good standard before hijacking a large one. Now she has 2 piles of scrap and none of them are useful Well that was expected for clueless mc but it would have been more interesting if she was smart, cause there's a lot going around here and this kind of push over, kind mc(seriously you just steal a spacecraft from felonies and then just let them go with supplies and sos signals? Just so that they can do it again??) So yeah basically if you can tolerate a mc who is clueless and doesn't even try to ask for directions acting like she knows it all just to act smart- then it's a great story!
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Honestly, this story far surpasses MANY other novels on the downhill slide that is webnovel, and I sincerely hope the author continues this book
Hey are you gonna update this anytime soon...it is very good but I must admit I am getting very tired of half asked unfinished stories...plz update or at least tell us if you have dropped it so as not to waste our time...
I really liked the book- especially Insane Abyss with her massive obsession with the sack of bones that is the captain. I recommend this book to anyone that likes spacefairing novels- or Azur Lane-esque ship girls
Nothing too much to say, except that this was a great story and one of the most interesting sci-fi stories I have read. Characters were unique and events were always interesting. There is only 1 problem however, it seems to be dropped or on an indefinite hiatus.
I was expecting this to be one of those ficool ChinaNumbaWan nationalist stories which are pretty much just carbon copies of past big hits, making everything just plain and predictable... However, your story is far more compelling and attention-grabbing than those carbon copies! Heck, I even had the idea of writing a Sci-Fi reincarnation story of MC becoming a spaceship, but alas your story is far more realistic than what I was thinking along the lines of (Just another golden-spoon fed MC. No system this time, perhaps the audit logs of the previous AI or Captain, but some form of alternative to a godly system that MC follows around constantly.) Anyway, I'm veering off-topic. This story is a very enjoyable story, where the entire process has been intriguing and has continually piqued my interest. I sit here wondering when or how a problem will be resolved or what features will be added, comparing the materials to what I would've written to see where I could improve in my own "story" while seeing things you could've improved in yours. Sadly, it can be seen that updates are sparse, and no chapters have appeared within the last few months. I was hoping that this would continue and I'd have a good read for a few weeks, but alas.
hope your doing well Author. I also hope that you have spare time and would like to continue this story. It is a very well done one. . . . .
love it and you should too! it's exactly what I was looking I'm kinda sad it's the only one😬 so I guess it's also one of a kind! that just makes this story even more unique also thank goodness for no lvling system here everywhere on this site
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love it just hope to see more chapters soon been waiting diligently like a good space cadet :3 . . . . . .
Not bad, first of the female lead story i have ever got interested with But no update dissapointed, i hope the aurther would continuos with the story it have good built up world, good ship battle. The only downside almost no male characters, even if u use the logic of ships are female refers to but there still male ship name in world. Aleast the author would have make the lead character to have two different personality gander and less cuting stuff would have been much better. Over its intersting novel!
揭示劇透 you haven't been updating this story so it kinda makes me sad as its really wonderful to read it, it's fine if it's for a reason but I would at least like to know your taking a break instead of just abandoning this novel
Hey author😊 the fact that you are not updating your work... Comeback😔 We need chapters We need more Gosh where are you author?, 😒 Heheheheeh
Space exploration, sentient spaceships, laser battles, fun characters. So far my only gripe is that the update schedule isnt up to par. Currently it's been eleven days since the last update and prior to that it was a weekly update or two. Cant wait for the next one.
Dear, Author~sama It's very nice👍 a master piece. .. 5 star for writing quality , story development , character design and world background❤️👍Except for the updates 😥author pls give us some chapters... Even you given us 2 chaps per week last year we didn't complain but we complimented you. We give you time. .. Holidays I mean😅 (belated happy new year 😁😅) Plss give us (your fans) some chapters.☺️
it's a good story with great character development and world design and goes in-depth into the logistics of the situation and is an interesting plot point that they use that is different from others in the genre
I'm still hoping to see a continuation. it's really sad to let such a masterpiece rest without being fonished
Honestly one of the very best novels I‘ve ever read on Webnovel, I absolutely adored this back when it was still being updated and I just couldn’t get enough of it. Was quite honestly like a drug for me. It helped out quite a lot when I was not doing good mentally or physically. This gave me something I’ll hopefully never forget. I can’t understate how good of a read this is and how much fun I had reading it. It seems it’s been assumed that the author is likely no longer living and I hope that isn’t true and that they are living happily especially now that corona is an almost non existent issue. And if they are I’d just like to say thank you for this wonderful novel that never failed to bring a smile to my face. Even if they never see this my prayers go out to them, hope you’re doing good and once again. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for allowing not only me but so many other people to enjoy such a great piece of art.
I love the story it's a fantastic read and the only downside is that the author stopped writing it. they could have a good reason so I won't blame them I just hope that one day it can be continued!
this is one i really did enjoy, and it's a shame it stopped in the asteroid field. I could only ask (Please return some day. ) For now i'll be off looking for another long running story. In addition for anyone looking for a good story even though it stopped it is still worth seeing new stuff and watching how it grows from the start to stop. So give it a chance. I don't think you'll regret it. only get frustrated that it had ended and feels incomplete.
I'm actually upset that I can't give this book my golden ticket, I've read it long ago when the author was still active and writing this novel, it's a gem among the rocks. a bright north star in the sky, or the ace of a space fleet.
good lore and naming of spaceships but I think it needs a bit more memes related to Azur Lane, KanColle, Arp and some other warship anime cuz if it were there it would've been wayy funnier and I think it needs a more conventional naval prefixes, nicknames and other stuff but hey it is what it is
really cute book with a girl lead that is action packed. is good enough to be one of those potentially addicting stories yet the chapters haven't been added in a while. so upsetting comeback author
I hope auther san is all right. They havent been active for over a year and that is kinda worrying. i truely do pray that you ate alright.
it's pretty good despite it being confusing at times it is pretty good eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
I wish she could have used the resources to upgrade her real spaceship to a good standard before hijacking a large one. Now she has 2 piles of scrap and none of them are useful Well that was expected for clueless mc but it would have been more interesting if she was smart, cause there's a lot going around here and this kind of push over, kind mc(seriously you just steal a spacecraft from felonies and then just let them go with supplies and sos signals? Just so that they can do it again??) So yeah basically if you can tolerate a mc who is clueless and doesn't even try to ask for directions acting like she knows it all just to act smart- then it's a great story!
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Honestly, this story far surpasses MANY other novels on the downhill slide that is webnovel, and I sincerely hope the author continues this book
Hey are you gonna update this anytime soon...it is very good but I must admit I am getting very tired of half asked unfinished stories...plz update or at least tell us if you have dropped it so as not to waste our time...
I really liked the book- especially Insane Abyss with her massive obsession with the sack of bones that is the captain. I recommend this book to anyone that likes spacefairing novels- or Azur Lane-esque ship girls
Nothing too much to say, except that this was a great story and one of the most interesting sci-fi stories I have read. Characters were unique and events were always interesting. There is only 1 problem however, it seems to be dropped or on an indefinite hiatus.
I was expecting this to be one of those ficool ChinaNumbaWan nationalist stories which are pretty much just carbon copies of past big hits, making everything just plain and predictable... However, your story is far more compelling and attention-grabbing than those carbon copies! Heck, I even had the idea of writing a Sci-Fi reincarnation story of MC becoming a spaceship, but alas your story is far more realistic than what I was thinking along the lines of (Just another golden-spoon fed MC. No system this time, perhaps the audit logs of the previous AI or Captain, but some form of alternative to a godly system that MC follows around constantly.) Anyway, I'm veering off-topic. This story is a very enjoyable story, where the entire process has been intriguing and has continually piqued my interest. I sit here wondering when or how a problem will be resolved or what features will be added, comparing the materials to what I would've written to see where I could improve in my own "story" while seeing things you could've improved in yours. Sadly, it can be seen that updates are sparse, and no chapters have appeared within the last few months. I was hoping that this would continue and I'd have a good read for a few weeks, but alas.
hope your doing well Author. I also hope that you have spare time and would like to continue this story. It is a very well done one. . . . .
love it and you should too! it's exactly what I was looking I'm kinda sad it's the only one😬 so I guess it's also one of a kind! that just makes this story even more unique also thank goodness for no lvling system here everywhere on this site
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love it just hope to see more chapters soon been waiting diligently like a good space cadet :3 . . . . . .
Not bad, first of the female lead story i have ever got interested with But no update dissapointed, i hope the aurther would continuos with the story it have good built up world, good ship battle. The only downside almost no male characters, even if u use the logic of ships are female refers to but there still male ship name in world. Aleast the author would have make the lead character to have two different personality gander and less cuting stuff would have been much better. Over its intersting novel!
揭示劇透 you haven't been updating this story so it kinda makes me sad as its really wonderful to read it, it's fine if it's for a reason but I would at least like to know your taking a break instead of just abandoning this novel
Hey author😊 the fact that you are not updating your work... Comeback😔 We need chapters We need more Gosh where are you author?, 😒 Heheheheeh
Space exploration, sentient spaceships, laser battles, fun characters. So far my only gripe is that the update schedule isnt up to par. Currently it's been eleven days since the last update and prior to that it was a weekly update or two. Cant wait for the next one.
Dear, Author~sama It's very nice👍 a master piece. .. 5 star for writing quality , story development , character design and world background❤️👍Except for the updates 😥author pls give us some chapters... Even you given us 2 chaps per week last year we didn't complain but we complimented you. We give you time. .. Holidays I mean😅 (belated happy new year 😁😅) Plss give us (your fans) some chapters.☺️
it's a good story with great character development and world design and goes in-depth into the logistics of the situation and is an interesting plot point that they use that is different from others in the genre
I'm still hoping to see a continuation. it's really sad to let such a masterpiece rest without being fonished