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I dig Gamer fanfics, I can't help it. Giant Marvel fan too, so Imma just slap those together.
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Development is nice and so is the pace of the story. Hoping to read your chapters everyday.😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃 Leave Gwen for Peter or at least give him Cindy moon or something.
More, please have more fun for me......................................................................................................................................
The character development and story are a bit messy but still very good for an *******. The absence of obvious fault and massacre of the English language is a very welcome change from what this app usually propose. A good enough fanfic to pass time and feel like you've had a good moment when you finish your chapter.
Dropped at chapter 5 for a few reasons. 1 author didn't edit it so that chapters 1 - 3 are actually chapters and not rants. 2 not clear so far on which marvel he is in there are alot of series of marvel 3 I dont like HAREM novels majority of authors are terrible at writing it 4 the steel staff which has 1 in 4 chance of destroying a limb if struck is to op for a weakassed mc 5 the karate thing, it be better if it was something like understanding of martial arts, it be collectively all his understanding and not a singular martial art. There are PLENTY OF BETTER martial arts in marvel than karate Suggestions to author 1 take an A4 sheet of paper draw line down middle and make a plot of what you want your story to have 2 change karate to martial artist 3 change steel staff description it's to op for a weak mc 4 READ OTHER MARVEL FANFICTION AUTHORS 5 know which marvel timeline you are going down and what you wish to change
I want more chapters😃😃😃😃😃😀😀😀😃😀😃😀👍😀👍🤷👍😃😃👍😀😃😃😀😀😃😀😃👍😀👍👍😃😀😁😁😄🥀🥀⚡😯😯🥀🤷🤔🤔🙋🙆🛶💀🚟🛶⛵🚇🚃🚃⛵🛶🚝🚟🚎🏕️🏕️⛵🚃🚖🚖 🚃🚇🛶⛵🤔🤔👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🤔🤔👍🤔🤔🤔👍🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
OK I am a few chapters in and this is a good game/system/marvel fan fic so far. Right now it seems to have a Spider-man level feel to it, witch I like....and the most praise worthy part of the story is the humor. I will make a new review if this goes off the rails but as it stands is a good start! P.S. This story is worth investing your Power Stones in like me.
Good story. Update more please. Good story. Update more please. Good story. Update more please. Good story. Update more please. Good story. Update more please. Good story. Update more please.
Too much cursing and vulgar speech. It actually demotivated me to read further. The characters are not described properly, the timeline is not specified and the system is annoying and YES the PENALITIES ARE DEATH SOMETIMES. In conclusion, it is a very insufferable self insert with edgy "trying to be cool but ending up being a jerk" MC.
this is really amazing and amusing I am loving the story looking forward to what comes next 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏post more chapters u r doing way to well to stop now
Has not been updated in a long while...................................................................................................................................
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UP DOWN LEFT RIGHT IM GOING TO MOVE MY FUNKYSIDE LIKE NO ONE IS WATCHING dance dance like nobody is WATCHING UP DOWN LEFT RIGHT IM GOING TO MOVE MY FUNKY SIDE LIKE NOBODY IS WATCHING
I really like this fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺
I think the best advice that I can tell you is to read the spider. There are only small similarities in the stories but I think most of what you are looking for in your story is there. (From how to develop the story, to introduce and evolve characters and, if needed, how to get the harem that you are looking for)
When are you going to update oh great Author-sama. Don’t give up this story here has the potential to be in the top 20 or even higher, so Please do not stop.
Its okay. You can update more whenever you like.Its okay. You can update more whenever you like.Its okay. You can update more whenever you like.Its okay. You can update more whenever you like.Its okay. You can update more whenever you like.
Really good. I hope you update more chapters. Keep it up.Really good. I hope you update more chapters. Keep it up.Really good. I hope you update more chapters. Keep it up.
i don't read this but i think i will like :D . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
卷 0 : Auxiliary Volume
卷 1
- 1 HEYYY 4 years ago
- 2 Haremmm 4 years ago
- 3 I think...? 4 years ago
- 4 Chapter 1 (officially starting here) 4 years ago
- 5 Chapter 2 4 years ago
- 6 Chapter 3 4 years ago
- 7 Y'all are too kind 4 years ago
- 8 Chapter 4 4 years ago
- 9 Chapter 5 4 years ago
- 10 Chapter 6 4 years ago
- 11 Chapter 7 4 years ago
- 12 Chapter 8 4 years ago
- 13 Chapter 9 4 years ago
- 14 Yikes 4 years ago
- 15 Wtf 4 years ago
- 16 WOO 4 years ago
- 17 Chapter 10 4 years ago
- 18 I'm sorry 4 years ago
- 19 Heya 4 years ago
- 20 Check it 4 years ago
- 21 Chapter 11 4 years ago
- 22 Not done 4 years ago
- 23 Oop 4 years ago
Don’t read it if you don’t like system controlling mc and what he does. Main character is literally a slave to the system. Author even confirmed it that he completely intends to have the system be like that. It’s annoy and sassy and it’ll only get worse. This is literally the one thing you should not do with systems in a factions and loads of people hate it. The mc sees Spider-Man and lizard fighting, so he checks their states just to see that the both of them are way stronger than him. What happens? System makes a quest to help spiderman or else mc dies. Mc wants to focus on trying to get stronger and MJ keeps trying to flirt with him. What does system do? Gives quest to go on a date with MJ and calls mc a pussy. Author literally says someone made the system so in a since they are controlling what the mc does. What complete garbage....
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