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this fanfic is nothing more than clown, itachi molded to be giggling all the time, looking like a freak behind yoruichi and she too, and worse he demotes himself to everyone literally everyone stopping everyone's little ***** and ducking his head and wanting to give a nice, he lowers his head to Jiraiya.
Theres a poem in every flower, a sonnet in every tree, a tale in every lifetime its just for you to see… theres a lyric in every brook as it rushes over rocks, theres an ode in every nuance, as loves wonder unlocks, theres rhythm in every sound, every beating of a heart, theres poetry in every union and every couple who are apart and just as there is wonder in every new life created there is sadness and regret, for the unsaid and unfeted just listen for the music that your ears cannot hear, just strain yourself for the melody thats so far and yet so near the wonder of the creator, the magic of the divine is there to feel, for all of us, to soon be yours and mine
this fanfic is nothing more than clown, itachi molded to be giggling all the time, looking like a freak behind yoruichi and she too, and worse he demotes himself to everyone literally everyone stopping everyone's little ***** and ducking his head and wanting to give a nice, he lowers his head to Jiraiya.
Theres a poem in every flower, a sonnet in every tree, a tale in every lifetime its just for you to see… theres a lyric in every brook as it rushes over rocks, theres an ode in every nuance, as loves wonder unlocks, theres rhythm in every sound, every beating of a heart, theres poetry in every union and every couple who are apart and just as there is wonder in every new life created there is sadness and regret, for the unsaid and unfeted just listen for the music that your ears cannot hear, just strain yourself for the melody thats so far and yet so near the wonder of the creator, the magic of the divine is there to feel, for all of us, to soon be yours and mine