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Hello Imabethatguy here, Everything although very short I will combine the chapters later on, it is somewhat very similar to tfs cannon but different ar the same time, how you will see, thanks for your support and have a good day.
This is pretty cool, although thechapters are short the author does a mass releaseso it is good, This os a mixture between the original dbz and tfs, and I am quite curious to the events that come in the future, Good job author
Sorry if my rating Is low. I wasted 15minS reading this. You must understand my peril. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh......... I cant stand it. By reading the First few chapters, I Thought it might be good.... but boy I was sooooo wrong....
Hello Imabethatguy here, Everything although very short I will combine the chapters later on, it is somewhat very similar to tfs cannon but different ar the same time, how you will see, thanks for your support and have a good day.
This is pretty cool, although thechapters are short the author does a mass releaseso it is good, This os a mixture between the original dbz and tfs, and I am quite curious to the events that come in the future, Good job author
Sorry if my rating Is low. I wasted 15minS reading this. You must understand my peril. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh......... I cant stand it. By reading the First few chapters, I Thought it might be good.... but boy I was sooooo wrong....