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It's a great start of a story I wish it was finished but I enjoyed reading it all the same. The characters were well created and the story line was well crafted
I am still waiting for an update. This is my favourite starwars fanfic of all time. I really hope author pick it up again. i need more of this. More please
Please restart this. I really enjoyed how the story developed. It is very refreshing and almost tailored for me. I need more. Maybe this is the only Starwars fanfic i enjoy.
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Author can pleas continue writing this novel it is soo good pleas, I really like this novel and it breaks my heart that there are no updates anymore
It is a good story and i really like it but it has been a long time since it has been updated. But if you are okay whit an incomplete story it's good
So Review Mc is a wimp hes all killing is wrong, slavery is wrong blah blah why the **** did he chooses star wars then so ya he's unlikable.
Really hope this isn't dropped..............................................................................................................
While I value this novel very high. I really don't know what to think about the author anymore... 7 works dropped and 2 not updated for 6 months or more...
******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
It's good but need more updates......................,.......................................................................................
Moser chapters pls 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it 🙏📖🙏📖🙏
It is an incredible and great story, I hope you do not abandon this story, because it is great and you can see that you have a talent for writing, if you continue further I think you could monetize the story since it is great.
The story is amazing and I sincerely hope the author will finish this. Most other Star Wars SI’s are people either 1. Being a heartless evil bastard or 2. Being a dense goodie two shoes. However this characteristic a perfect example of if a real person was in Star Wars.
Its very good story so far but now its been dropped a shame to be honest. Maybe in the future the person may go back to it and post more chapters.
Awesome story 25 chapters in. Keep up the good work! I really look forward to seeing how you guide the main character through the gap till the clone wars.
i want more chapters. just read chtp 25. and the real fun just begins. want to read more. kind wish to travel to the future to read the whole story.
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It really well written and addicting to read I hope the author comes out with more chapters in the future. It is very intriguing and also gives me more insight into the Star Wars world.
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I like the MC and I like the system. Wish the author made more chapters but it's ok. I like were the author is going with the story, especially making the MC a bounty Hunter instead of the typical Jedi. All and all good so far! Keep up the good work author hope you post more in the future!
Nothin much to say but I like this novel hope to get more chaps, that's all thank you for your hard work! DO NOT READ ME! DO NOT READ ME SO NOT READ ME! DO NOT READ ME! DO NOT READ ME SO NOT READ ME! DO NOT READ ME! DO NOT READ ME SO NOT READ ME! DO NOT READ ME! DO NOT READ ME SO NOT READ ME! DO NOT READ ME! DO NOT READ ME SO NOT READ ME! DO NOT READ ME! DO NOT READ ME SO NOT READ ME!
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It's a great start of a story I wish it was finished but I enjoyed reading it all the same. The characters were well created and the story line was well crafted
I am still waiting for an update. This is my favourite starwars fanfic of all time. I really hope author pick it up again. i need more of this. More please
Please restart this. I really enjoyed how the story developed. It is very refreshing and almost tailored for me. I need more. Maybe this is the only Starwars fanfic i enjoy.
BETA MC BETA MC BETA MC BETA MC BETA MC BETA MC BETA MC BETA MC BETA MC BETA MC BETA MC BETA MC BETA MC BETA MC BETA MC BETA MC BETA MC BETA MC BETA MC BETA MC BETA MC BETA MC BETA MC BETA MC BETA MC BETA MC BETA MC BETA MC BETA MC BETA MC BETA MC BETA MC BETA MC BETA MC BETA MC BETA MC BETA MC BETA MC BETA MC BETA MC BETA MC BETA MC
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Author can pleas continue writing this novel it is soo good pleas, I really like this novel and it breaks my heart that there are no updates anymore
It is a good story and i really like it but it has been a long time since it has been updated. But if you are okay whit an incomplete story it's good
So Review Mc is a wimp hes all killing is wrong, slavery is wrong blah blah why the **** did he chooses star wars then so ya he's unlikable.
Really hope this isn't dropped..............................................................................................................
While I value this novel very high. I really don't know what to think about the author anymore... 7 works dropped and 2 not updated for 6 months or more...
******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
It's good but need more updates......................,.......................................................................................
Moser chapters pls 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it 🙏📖🙏📖🙏
It is an incredible and great story, I hope you do not abandon this story, because it is great and you can see that you have a talent for writing, if you continue further I think you could monetize the story since it is great.
The story is amazing and I sincerely hope the author will finish this. Most other Star Wars SI’s are people either 1. Being a heartless evil bastard or 2. Being a dense goodie two shoes. However this characteristic a perfect example of if a real person was in Star Wars.
Its very good story so far but now its been dropped a shame to be honest. Maybe in the future the person may go back to it and post more chapters.
Awesome story 25 chapters in. Keep up the good work! I really look forward to seeing how you guide the main character through the gap till the clone wars.
i want more chapters. just read chtp 25. and the real fun just begins. want to read more. kind wish to travel to the future to read the whole story.
✌️👌✌️👌✌️👍✌️👍✌️👍✌️👍✌️👍✌️👍✌️👍✌️👍✌️👍✌️👍✌️👍👍✌️👍👍👍✌️👌✌️👌✌️👌✌️👌✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️👌✌️👌✌️✌️👌✌️👌👌😎😎So good. Must read. Great progression and it is not rushed.
It really well written and addicting to read I hope the author comes out with more chapters in the future. It is very intriguing and also gives me more insight into the Star Wars world.
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Awesome 140 ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I like the MC and I like the system. Wish the author made more chapters but it's ok. I like were the author is going with the story, especially making the MC a bounty Hunter instead of the typical Jedi. All and all good so far! Keep up the good work author hope you post more in the future!
Nothin much to say but I like this novel hope to get more chaps, that's all thank you for your hard work! DO NOT READ ME! DO NOT READ ME SO NOT READ ME! DO NOT READ ME! DO NOT READ ME SO NOT READ ME! DO NOT READ ME! DO NOT READ ME SO NOT READ ME! DO NOT READ ME! DO NOT READ ME SO NOT READ ME! DO NOT READ ME! DO NOT READ ME SO NOT READ ME! DO NOT READ ME! DO NOT READ ME SO NOT READ ME!
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