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wow guys he's so shameless HAHA. he murders people for fun so quirky. he even manages to defeat his inner demons because he just pretends to not know what they are talking about. that doesn't make sense.
The story is repetitive after reading to chapter like 960? Yeah anyway not much you can do about that as the mc can tide and you can’t really make him the top strength unless there’s new challenges so they keep adding a new invading realm that will later merge with the realm he’s currently in for some reason they call the people in the realm they are invading natives? Really strange considering they also did that when they got invaded. It has the usual Chinese stuff overused gags what you’d expect from a cultivation novel tho the invaders are always stupid for some reason and all of them violent trying to kill everything etc I mean really annoying part about it is the way people address each other like the invaders and the invaded “descenders” and “Natives” like really stupid they call them natives cause it also apparently repeats every 10k years? Strange story but love the ability’s of the mc
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Read 322 chapters. Translation quality heavily declined after it came back from hiatus. Was pleasantly surprised when it was brought back but maybe that was for the best. Since the main character is immortal, there should exist other methods to defeat him, this way the story could have moments of tension or excitement. That leads to a major problem with the story, lin fan gets abilities to cover up these weaknesses very conveniently. Can he be sealed away? No, he gets immunity to seals. Can the enemy run away? He gets an eye ability that forces them to attack him. This works regardless of the opponent’s cultivation level. This wasn’t always a problem. At the start he’d get weird niche abilities such as being able to catch any blade barehanded, no matter how quick. Even if the story didn’t have action, having a system give very unusual skills could open up doors for comedic events, but the author stopped trying to make interesting skills early on, opting to give lin fan skills that would make him invincible. Had the author invested more time into developing the world or the characters, perhaps the story could still feel interesting. Maybe we come to love a character and they die, which could lead to some emotional moments for the main character. As of the point where I stopped reading, there’s no sign of this occurring. The author invests very little time in side characters, bringing them back only for a couple chapters on very few occasions. Additionally, if they’re in any kind of danger, lin fan saves them in the nick of time. There’s neat worldbuilding sometimes but you have to get through a lot of filler fights that follow the same tropes. Either it’s grunts being eviscerated by lin fan, and he uses the eye when they run. Or a stronger enemy kills him repeatedly, and when they get tired, they try to run away. So he uses the eye to stop them. Cue everyone being impressed and he tries to act humble because he’s not strong enough yet. Basically, the main character sucks but we’re stuck following him all the time. Read any of the author’s book but this one.
I never thought that aside from 'Yun Che' in 'ATG' I will despise another character to this extent.I have to admit from the various works that I have read, I didn't expect the author to create such a maniac. This one embodies all the ...cides.... he sees a 'beautiful' woman and the 1st thing that comes to his mind is "Wow nice fireworks material". The other mc in 'the strongest system' is the best of the authors characters that I have read so far... I mean he was a little mean, jovial and as a whole reader friendly.Conclusion: The book is nice, well written etc but the mc is just straight up trash...I'm even suprised he managed to get people willing to be around him.The rest is for others to express their opinion......
Trashy story from a greedy author. Unless you like reading about an incompetent moron of an MC with lots of trashy “humor” thrown in. Do not waste your time!
This is just great, when I was in a reading slump this made me enjoy a novel again. LIN FAN, OH LIN FAN !! 🤣🤣🤣
It was a fun read when it was "free" but not now that it requires you to purchase the whole book which is quite an outrageous cash grab.
Chapters 1-321 are translated well, after reading 322-327 its been hard to keep motivation to continue reading. He/she is being used incorrectly, realms are different from the past Heaven Star Realm is heaven dipper. I'm fairly certain it's going to continue to be MTL the rest of the novel. I'm going to push myself to read cause I like this book but I'm going to be struggling.
it's very good and have a quality story, it's definitely a good story than the others that's posting
I would totally love to read more. unfortunately webnovel is trying to make me spend over $150 all at once. shameless and disgusting.
i will just talk about the translators with the Translator from chapter 1 to 317: Translator: Exodus Tales: perfect translation, smooth, fun to read. The Translator from chapter 318 to the end: Translator: 549690339 (whats wrong with that name ?? is that a phone number?? xD): Translator is a big word that he is not fit to be called that because he didn't translate anything. then is he editor??? hmmm no he is unworthy to be called that then what is he? he is MTL Spice thrower (mtl translation but little little bit better) that's all. its sad to see one of Lin Fan stories fall because of translations :(
Nothing special but it's not bad at all as the comments says , i advice you to read it . i liked some points in the novel especially the shameless characters
gdy dn inigicufyn. uvjb. jupug i. i u kuh u y ih ovoug uo ou k p ih u and ig ij p pih i o in vot ouihiihi pvpig i ip p ug o oug. kb i hou u g p pug i i p upg
Well, webnovel doesn't care anymore. They throw something good out of a tons of the best novel, yet keep the trash for future mocking entertainment for others.
Mc is an idiot/moron, I don't know if this kind of personality or more like disability is supposed to fe funny or what it's just frustrating to read not funny at all
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Love the novel. However, it seems they threw the translation quality out the window after they returned from the hiatus. Such a shame, it was a pretty good novel.
There's no need to complain other than the worse translation I've ever read in Webnovel. A waste of money and time. Asides from the name, all was a mess up with no proof reader. Why they released it in the first place? guilty conscience?
The mc sucks more than any mc I’ve read. This mc is a total d*** and the whole story from chapter 200-400 is basically corruption this and corruption that. The main aspect of the mc is acting on whims, thinking he’s free, though without the plot armor, he would have died from the beginning to the middle and end of the story. I think this story is appealing to people who don’t even read and just skim as if they are enjoying it. Sure, the buffs are great, but with 20 filler chapters between it every time, it just feels like a scam to even buy the chapters anymore. The sites that should have the translations of this spoiled the whole entire book due to its format (if it can be regarded as a format at all) not being spaced and uniform as the past 200 chapters should have been. Honestly, with how stupid the master and mc is, and how the master only cares about the mc because of “closeness”, it makes the whole story surreal as it feels like the master protects the mc without letting him grow in mentality and implies that the author makes the mc out to be no better than the young masters themselves as the mc is a copper coin, with little value other than his strength (his system/plot armor) and his “invincible” attitude. Overall, I give this a 3 and don’t recommend it unless you have nothing to read, meaning this should be the last priority.
I had to start from scratch. That's my determination just to read Lin Fan's story. A masterpiece with mouth-gapping scenes in full blossom. Hope the release rate doesn't decrease.
it's backkkkkkkkk, Yesssssssssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *********************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************
Love this novel been waiting for it to return ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..,,……………………………………………………………………………..
Les deseo vida eterna a los que decidieron retomar esta excelente novela! [img=recommend][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar]
I like the story and everything but the MC is just not my type. he's just a vold mass murderer who when someone says no to him he will just kill them. the MC has no emotions to other life. he just feels bland. he was pretty cool the the beginning but at the end of The "inner demons" chapter I realized the the author destroyed the of the greatest part for a character development by making him emotionless. sadly I'm just gonna stop reading
This is currently the best novel, mtl can't compare to the translator job as it's nowhere fun if you don't understand certain jokes. Bro pls find someone again to translate this, from 2 years I've read, Xin feng is the best author
I swear I'm sick of reading him saying "Chicken nuggets" in every chapter he's saying that stupid sentence [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
really need to work on the endings. translation quality is bad but not unreadable since i know chinese and can roughly know the meaning. this book made me look at anime and stuff a whole different way cuz all i can think of now is "special effects" thanks bro...
wow guys he's so shameless HAHA. he murders people for fun so quirky. he even manages to defeat his inner demons because he just pretends to not know what they are talking about. that doesn't make sense.
The story is repetitive after reading to chapter like 960? Yeah anyway not much you can do about that as the mc can tide and you can’t really make him the top strength unless there’s new challenges so they keep adding a new invading realm that will later merge with the realm he’s currently in for some reason they call the people in the realm they are invading natives? Really strange considering they also did that when they got invaded. It has the usual Chinese stuff overused gags what you’d expect from a cultivation novel tho the invaders are always stupid for some reason and all of them violent trying to kill everything etc I mean really annoying part about it is the way people address each other like the invaders and the invaded “descenders” and “Natives” like really stupid they call them natives cause it also apparently repeats every 10k years? Strange story but love the ability’s of the mc
揭示劇透 Read 322 chapters. Translation quality heavily declined after it came back from hiatus. Was pleasantly surprised when it was brought back but maybe that was for the best. Since the main character is immortal, there should exist other methods to defeat him, this way the story could have moments of tension or excitement. That leads to a major problem with the story, lin fan gets abilities to cover up these weaknesses very conveniently. Can he be sealed away? No, he gets immunity to seals. Can the enemy run away? He gets an eye ability that forces them to attack him. This works regardless of the opponent’s cultivation level. This wasn’t always a problem. At the start he’d get weird niche abilities such as being able to catch any blade barehanded, no matter how quick. Even if the story didn’t have action, having a system give very unusual skills could open up doors for comedic events, but the author stopped trying to make interesting skills early on, opting to give lin fan skills that would make him invincible. Had the author invested more time into developing the world or the characters, perhaps the story could still feel interesting. Maybe we come to love a character and they die, which could lead to some emotional moments for the main character. As of the point where I stopped reading, there’s no sign of this occurring. The author invests very little time in side characters, bringing them back only for a couple chapters on very few occasions. Additionally, if they’re in any kind of danger, lin fan saves them in the nick of time. There’s neat worldbuilding sometimes but you have to get through a lot of filler fights that follow the same tropes. Either it’s grunts being eviscerated by lin fan, and he uses the eye when they run. Or a stronger enemy kills him repeatedly, and when they get tired, they try to run away. So he uses the eye to stop them. Cue everyone being impressed and he tries to act humble because he’s not strong enough yet. Basically, the main character sucks but we’re stuck following him all the time. Read any of the author’s book but this one.
I never thought that aside from 'Yun Che' in 'ATG' I will despise another character to this extent.I have to admit from the various works that I have read, I didn't expect the author to create such a maniac. This one embodies all the ...cides.... he sees a 'beautiful' woman and the 1st thing that comes to his mind is "Wow nice fireworks material". The other mc in 'the strongest system' is the best of the authors characters that I have read so far... I mean he was a little mean, jovial and as a whole reader friendly.Conclusion: The book is nice, well written etc but the mc is just straight up trash...I'm even suprised he managed to get people willing to be around him.The rest is for others to express their opinion......
Trashy story from a greedy author. Unless you like reading about an incompetent moron of an MC with lots of trashy “humor” thrown in. Do not waste your time!
This is just great, when I was in a reading slump this made me enjoy a novel again. LIN FAN, OH LIN FAN !! 🤣🤣🤣
It was a fun read when it was "free" but not now that it requires you to purchase the whole book which is quite an outrageous cash grab.
Chapters 1-321 are translated well, after reading 322-327 its been hard to keep motivation to continue reading. He/she is being used incorrectly, realms are different from the past Heaven Star Realm is heaven dipper. I'm fairly certain it's going to continue to be MTL the rest of the novel. I'm going to push myself to read cause I like this book but I'm going to be struggling.
it's very good and have a quality story, it's definitely a good story than the others that's posting
I would totally love to read more. unfortunately webnovel is trying to make me spend over $150 all at once. shameless and disgusting.
i will just talk about the translators with the Translator from chapter 1 to 317: Translator: Exodus Tales: perfect translation, smooth, fun to read. The Translator from chapter 318 to the end: Translator: 549690339 (whats wrong with that name ?? is that a phone number?? xD): Translator is a big word that he is not fit to be called that because he didn't translate anything. then is he editor??? hmmm no he is unworthy to be called that then what is he? he is MTL Spice thrower (mtl translation but little little bit better) that's all. its sad to see one of Lin Fan stories fall because of translations :(
Nothing special but it's not bad at all as the comments says , i advice you to read it . i liked some points in the novel especially the shameless characters
gdy dn inigicufyn. uvjb. jupug i. i u kuh u y ih ovoug uo ou k p ih u and ig ij p pih i o in vot ouihiihi pvpig i ip p ug o oug. kb i hou u g p pug i i p upg
Well, webnovel doesn't care anymore. They throw something good out of a tons of the best novel, yet keep the trash for future mocking entertainment for others.
Mc is an idiot/moron, I don't know if this kind of personality or more like disability is supposed to fe funny or what it's just frustrating to read not funny at all
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Love the novel. However, it seems they threw the translation quality out the window after they returned from the hiatus. Such a shame, it was a pretty good novel.
There's no need to complain other than the worse translation I've ever read in Webnovel. A waste of money and time. Asides from the name, all was a mess up with no proof reader. Why they released it in the first place? guilty conscience?
The mc sucks more than any mc I’ve read. This mc is a total d*** and the whole story from chapter 200-400 is basically corruption this and corruption that. The main aspect of the mc is acting on whims, thinking he’s free, though without the plot armor, he would have died from the beginning to the middle and end of the story. I think this story is appealing to people who don’t even read and just skim as if they are enjoying it. Sure, the buffs are great, but with 20 filler chapters between it every time, it just feels like a scam to even buy the chapters anymore. The sites that should have the translations of this spoiled the whole entire book due to its format (if it can be regarded as a format at all) not being spaced and uniform as the past 200 chapters should have been. Honestly, with how stupid the master and mc is, and how the master only cares about the mc because of “closeness”, it makes the whole story surreal as it feels like the master protects the mc without letting him grow in mentality and implies that the author makes the mc out to be no better than the young masters themselves as the mc is a copper coin, with little value other than his strength (his system/plot armor) and his “invincible” attitude. Overall, I give this a 3 and don’t recommend it unless you have nothing to read, meaning this should be the last priority.
I had to start from scratch. That's my determination just to read Lin Fan's story. A masterpiece with mouth-gapping scenes in full blossom. Hope the release rate doesn't decrease.
it's backkkkkkkkk, Yesssssssssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *********************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************
Love this novel been waiting for it to return ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..,,……………………………………………………………………………..
Les deseo vida eterna a los que decidieron retomar esta excelente novela! [img=recommend][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar]
I like the story and everything but the MC is just not my type. he's just a vold mass murderer who when someone says no to him he will just kill them. the MC has no emotions to other life. he just feels bland. he was pretty cool the the beginning but at the end of The "inner demons" chapter I realized the the author destroyed the of the greatest part for a character development by making him emotionless. sadly I'm just gonna stop reading
This is currently the best novel, mtl can't compare to the translator job as it's nowhere fun if you don't understand certain jokes. Bro pls find someone again to translate this, from 2 years I've read, Xin feng is the best author
I swear I'm sick of reading him saying "Chicken nuggets" in every chapter he's saying that stupid sentence [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
really need to work on the endings. translation quality is bad but not unreadable since i know chinese and can roughly know the meaning. this book made me look at anime and stuff a whole different way cuz all i can think of now is "special effects" thanks bro...