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It was a reel treasure i find when i found this book. so thanks author. even if grammar and english are not so good but the mening can pass with no problem. this novel Make me feel so much emotions. so formeit’s a must read and i will certainly read it many time mire so big thanks😘🤟🏻
This story is amazing, inspirational, and unique!! The characters are great and so well pUt my feelings were on an emOtional and inspirational rollercoaSter and i love it! Indefinetly recommend thIs to everybody 🥰🙌🙌
good story and congrats on finnishing it hope you improve your work next time waiting for your nex books you can doit 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
thanks for another wonderful work.. take care!!! waiting for your next novel... 😀😀😀😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍❤❤❤❤❤💕💕💕💕💕💞💞💞💞👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👍👍👍👍
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overall it was a good read👍, I just completed reading it, felt like it was missing in some aspects (like her mrg life, the ending, few stuff here n there), but rest all ok, and it's really great to see a novel end definitively, it's hardwork😄, good work author ji👍
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A***w your story is soo good 👍 Amar there is not that much revenge there is self grooming .
your books content is inspire people to become a good person. I love them ... they are so good 👍 💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖
your story is really good👍. there is so much motivational quotes and speeches.. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
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There are quite some grammar mistakes but understandable. Everything else from plot to character development and world background is good. And good anticipation for what's next too. Keep it going Amruta !!!
it's a very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very good novel
This story is really great and I really like the storyline. I hope you keep writing this story and I love reading this novel. I hope you improve your writing quality but the freshness of your novel makes it up for it, which makes the story really great and unique.
I like this novel so far, not like usual rebirth and sysyem stories, but intresting, and some what new also there are gramatical errror but it is improved.
Superb story Amruta. Keep writing. I want to read it daily so upload daily. Very nice story. I like the way of your writing it is easy to understand and it's really increase my reading habit . Proud of you dear
I really like this concept, the MC is not op and she has to work hard, Also there is not much angst but it is really quite refreshing. And now there are less grammatical mistakes, but still there is change to improvment.
Shameless writer here, As comment said this book first contains plenty of grammatical error, but now after editing there are less grammatical error so please give my novel a chance. As I said in synopsis this is a rebirth story more about self discovering. So if you like this type of stories then please give it try. Have a great day
I think it is a book worth reading has a good background except for some grammatical errors which you are improving, so I hope you continue this and do not give up because this is a great book.
There are quite some grammar mistakes but understandable. Everything else from plot to character development and world background is good. And good anticipation for what's next too. Has good future for this novel.
I really like this story it's some what different and new I want to read alot so please update alot and mass update please. And please update regular ♥️.....
Well I really an short on words for expressing my feelings for your masterpiece. This novel has really change my aspects of viewing various things. I also am unable to express my feelings to my closer ones or actually to everyone, I try to open up but its somewhat hard for me but after reading this novel I can say that I have some changes in a good way and I also feel my family and friends feel same too. As everyone said that aditi is REALLY a great advisor , I bet she is. I know behind this aditi is our fabulous author so as aditi said we should pay our gratitude to the person we feel grateful..... THANK YOU , THANK YOU , THANK YOU AUTHOR I AM REALLY GRATEFUL TO YOU , THANK YOU SO SO SO MUCH
It was a reel treasure i find when i found this book. so thanks author. even if grammar and english are not so good but the mening can pass with no problem. this novel Make me feel so much emotions. so formeit’s a must read and i will certainly read it many time mire so big thanks😘🤟🏻
This story is amazing, inspirational, and unique!! The characters are great and so well pUt my feelings were on an emOtional and inspirational rollercoaSter and i love it! Indefinetly recommend thIs to everybody 🥰🙌🙌
good story and congrats on finnishing it hope you improve your work next time waiting for your nex books you can doit 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
thanks for another wonderful work.. take care!!! waiting for your next novel... 😀😀😀😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍❤❤❤❤❤💕💕💕💕💕💞💞💞💞👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👍👍👍👍
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overall it was a good read👍, I just completed reading it, felt like it was missing in some aspects (like her mrg life, the ending, few stuff here n there), but rest all ok, and it's really great to see a novel end definitively, it's hardwork😄, good work author ji👍
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
A***w your story is soo good 👍 Amar there is not that much revenge there is self grooming .
your books content is inspire people to become a good person. I love them ... they are so good 👍 💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖
your story is really good👍. there is so much motivational quotes and speeches.. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
More more more more more more more more more more more more more more mooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeerrrr
There are quite some grammar mistakes but understandable. Everything else from plot to character development and world background is good. And good anticipation for what's next too. Keep it going Amruta !!!
it's a very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very good novel
This story is really great and I really like the storyline. I hope you keep writing this story and I love reading this novel. I hope you improve your writing quality but the freshness of your novel makes it up for it, which makes the story really great and unique.
I like this novel so far, not like usual rebirth and sysyem stories, but intresting, and some what new also there are gramatical errror but it is improved.
Superb story Amruta. Keep writing. I want to read it daily so upload daily. Very nice story. I like the way of your writing it is easy to understand and it's really increase my reading habit . Proud of you dear
I really like this concept, the MC is not op and she has to work hard, Also there is not much angst but it is really quite refreshing. And now there are less grammatical mistakes, but still there is change to improvment.
Shameless writer here, As comment said this book first contains plenty of grammatical error, but now after editing there are less grammatical error so please give my novel a chance. As I said in synopsis this is a rebirth story more about self discovering. So if you like this type of stories then please give it try. Have a great day
I think it is a book worth reading has a good background except for some grammatical errors which you are improving, so I hope you continue this and do not give up because this is a great book.
There are quite some grammar mistakes but understandable. Everything else from plot to character development and world background is good. And good anticipation for what's next too. Has good future for this novel.
I really like this story it's some what different and new I want to read alot so please update alot and mass update please. And please update regular ♥️.....
Well I really an short on words for expressing my feelings for your masterpiece. This novel has really change my aspects of viewing various things. I also am unable to express my feelings to my closer ones or actually to everyone, I try to open up but its somewhat hard for me but after reading this novel I can say that I have some changes in a good way and I also feel my family and friends feel same too. As everyone said that aditi is REALLY a great advisor , I bet she is. I know behind this aditi is our fabulous author so as aditi said we should pay our gratitude to the person we feel grateful..... THANK YOU , THANK YOU , THANK YOU AUTHOR I AM REALLY GRATEFUL TO YOU , THANK YOU SO SO SO MUCH