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That Forbidden Love tag is making me hesitant to read this... Pls be only sisterxmc not momxmc
Super histoire attent la suite avec impasiance Petit conseil pour les combat a la lance penser a changer la poigne de la lance L' épée et la reine des arme mais la lance est la plus equilibrer Elle peux etre tenue par le manche pour une plus grande alonge Par le millieux avec les deux main pour des attaque rapide Ou dant de tres rare cas par le haut du manche pour des coup charger aux corp a corp tres tres rapprocher Et avec la possibiliter de la casser/separer en deux pour en faire une paire de lame Reste plus cas associer sa a la magie de reus Comme des fer de lance faite de sable Ou une percé(coup direct en avant) recouvert de magie gravitationnel qui tors l'espace 🇨🇵🇫🇷🇨🇵🇫🇷🇨🇵🇫🇷🇨🇵🇫🇷🇨🇵🇫🇷🇨🇵🇫🇷🇨🇵🇫🇷🇨🇵🇫🇷 Great story, wait for the rest with impassion A little advice for spearfights think about changing the grip of the spear The sword and the queen of weapons but the lance is the most balanced It can be held by the handle for a greater extension By the middle with both hands for quick attacks Or dant very rare case by the top of the handle for blow to load bodies to very close bodies And with the possibility of breaking / separating it in two to make a pair of blades No longer do you need to associate your with the magic of reus Like spearheads made of sand Or a breakthrough (direct blow forward) covered with gravitational magic that twists space
For the first volume is quite bad, but we can see that the author starts to develop in the second volume, so if you don't want to read the first volume, that's fine, but just read Reus past.
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good fanfic. ......................................................................................................................................................
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very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very goodvery good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very goodvery good very good very good very good
Nice but to completed just simply otherwise i love it 💖💖💖💖👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎻🎻🎻🎻🎻🎻🎼🎼🎼🎼🎼🎼🎼🎼🎼🎻🎻🎻🎻🎻🎻🎻🎻🎻🎼🎻🎼
Very nice to read.😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😁
Great work there aren't many black clover novels on this website so I like when people chose a topic that they can literally write any thing about because most of the fanfics follow the same route
Was good then it’s became a music fanfic out of nowhere so if you enjoy music fanfics and not really black clover fanfics then this is the one for you but if you are expecting a black clover fanfic then it’s not this one and also it’s really weird how sister lily is in love with a child that’s under he age of 10
good fanfic. Charlotte Roselei = harem. ................................................................................... .................................................................................. ..................................................................................
Hmm this fanfic looks promising. But plz don’t drop this because I love this fanfic!!!
harem: mimosa , noelle , etc. ............................................................................................................................
Its interesting do doubt BUT the SI..MC has no knowledge..the MC isnt even OP [even though his parents are beings able to destroy a planet by just releasing their aura-chp 3 was mentioned I think...so yah,,,,,even at base the child of such a being should be well beyond mortal capabilities..like maybe almost as strong as Yami..or atleast half his power at a young age] and it seems that the other characters too will be strong [if others are as strong as MC then it becomes boring]...moreover the character development is.....well...almost like love and first sight...ex: MC magically becomes better looking and love interest falls in love or develops crush...so yah..kinda ****ty.. Though it was a dope idea but its executed badly
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
That Forbidden Love tag is making me hesitant to read this... Pls be only sisterxmc not momxmc
Super histoire attent la suite avec impasiance Petit conseil pour les combat a la lance penser a changer la poigne de la lance L' épée et la reine des arme mais la lance est la plus equilibrer Elle peux etre tenue par le manche pour une plus grande alonge Par le millieux avec les deux main pour des attaque rapide Ou dant de tres rare cas par le haut du manche pour des coup charger aux corp a corp tres tres rapprocher Et avec la possibiliter de la casser/separer en deux pour en faire une paire de lame Reste plus cas associer sa a la magie de reus Comme des fer de lance faite de sable Ou une percé(coup direct en avant) recouvert de magie gravitationnel qui tors l'espace 🇨🇵🇫🇷🇨🇵🇫🇷🇨🇵🇫🇷🇨🇵🇫🇷🇨🇵🇫🇷🇨🇵🇫🇷🇨🇵🇫🇷🇨🇵🇫🇷 Great story, wait for the rest with impassion A little advice for spearfights think about changing the grip of the spear The sword and the queen of weapons but the lance is the most balanced It can be held by the handle for a greater extension By the middle with both hands for quick attacks Or dant very rare case by the top of the handle for blow to load bodies to very close bodies And with the possibility of breaking / separating it in two to make a pair of blades No longer do you need to associate your with the magic of reus Like spearheads made of sand Or a breakthrough (direct blow forward) covered with gravitational magic that twists space
For the first volume is quite bad, but we can see that the author starts to develop in the second volume, so if you don't want to read the first volume, that's fine, but just read Reus past.
揭示劇透 good fanfic. ......................................................................................................................................................
揭示劇透 very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very goodvery good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very goodvery good very good very good very good
Nice but to completed just simply otherwise i love it 💖💖💖💖👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎻🎻🎻🎻🎻🎻🎼🎼🎼🎼🎼🎼🎼🎼🎼🎻🎻🎻🎻🎻🎻🎻🎻🎻🎼🎻🎼
Very nice to read.😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😁
Great work there aren't many black clover novels on this website so I like when people chose a topic that they can literally write any thing about because most of the fanfics follow the same route
Was good then it’s became a music fanfic out of nowhere so if you enjoy music fanfics and not really black clover fanfics then this is the one for you but if you are expecting a black clover fanfic then it’s not this one and also it’s really weird how sister lily is in love with a child that’s under he age of 10
good fanfic. Charlotte Roselei = harem. ................................................................................... .................................................................................. ..................................................................................
Hmm this fanfic looks promising. But plz don’t drop this because I love this fanfic!!!
harem: mimosa , noelle , etc. ............................................................................................................................
Its interesting do doubt BUT the SI..MC has no knowledge..the MC isnt even OP [even though his parents are beings able to destroy a planet by just releasing their aura-chp 3 was mentioned I think...so yah,,,,,even at base the child of such a being should be well beyond mortal capabilities..like maybe almost as strong as Yami..or atleast half his power at a young age] and it seems that the other characters too will be strong [if others are as strong as MC then it becomes boring]...moreover the character development is.....well...almost like love and first sight...ex: MC magically becomes better looking and love interest falls in love or develops crush...so yah..kinda ****ty.. Though it was a dope idea but its executed badly
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?