2評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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I love the story so far it seems to have some mystery and I love really like the raising baby chapter I just wished it would update[img=coins]
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I’v been checkingfor updates for up dates for a while now it seems it won’ t update but I really love this story something about it I just love from the the character to the baby raising in particular and the show of powers yup I like it. Still gonna check for updates
LV 11 ![Badge]()
I love the story so far it seems to have some mystery and I love really like the raising baby chapter I just wished it would update[img=coins]
I’v been checkingfor updates for up dates for a while now it seems it won’ t update but I really love this story something about it I just love from the the character to the baby raising in particular and the show of powers yup I like it. Still gonna check for updates