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I absolutely love this series! It'll rope you in, and keep you there. I bet this will be a TV series one day. The characters ate relatable, you'll definitely get attached, and it's almost impossible to put down!
I absolutely love this story! Everything from the romance to the action with magic! It is easy to get into and you’ll find yourself lost within the world being unable to tear yourself away from it!
I don't do well with reading, so my girlfriend has been reading this to me. Sort of like an audiobook, but in real life. This is one of the most intriguing stories I've read in years! The characters are so interesting, and I love the dialogue, plus all of the insight into Rielen and Eon's thoughts. I keep begging my girlfriend to read more, even when she says we have other things to do! This series draws you in even more than any series on Netflix. I'm ecstatic to find out what happens throughout as the author continues the story.
exp is my sword and I am it's wielder. Push me to level 4 and I shall be your benefactor. so I pray that you hit the like button and give me my exp Exp amen
Writing Quality: Above average. Clearly, the author is good in the language. Story Development: Not bad! It was arranged in a way that you'll easily understand what happened. Character Design: Both leads are interesting. I can feel the love love love sparks. Updating Stability: It has almost reached 100 chapters. World Background: Nice! It'll get you curious about it. All in all, I highly recommend readers to read this piece! It's a good one. And I can see the potential from the author.
I am the author so biased. Rielen feels like more than what is written on the page as she breathes life into the world around her. She is finding her way in an unfair world that is filled with more than she thought possible. Watching her grow up in each chapter honestly fills me with wonder. Writing this story has made me laugh, cry, and honestly feel joy. The kinds of things that you want when you read a fantastical story. Where you are sucked into the world they have created. Only I am the author but the story has woven itself onto the page. My goal is to make this a story where you the reader don't want to put it down and must read it chapter by chapter. This story is a dream I have constantly had since I was child and it is finally getting its chance to be known. Reviews help stories be seen. Please let me know what you think.
I love how the story progresses. It has such a nice calm flow to it that I don't feel time pass as I read it. I like Reilen... she's sensitive yet strong Ooh and I can't wait to hear more about Eon He's got me curious!
The story was enthralling; I'm obsessed. But there were definitely some grammar issues I caught, although little to non. But forget about the grammar issues; I'm just me being picky. When it comes down to it, overall, the story was perfect.
I love magic and fantasy stories and almost exclusively read them. The writing is good except for typos and missing words here and there. I really like that the main themes of the story are introduced right away and that the main character herself has allot that she thinks about and tells the reader, this makes for a good first person narrative and is something really important that was captured very well. The passing is very fast throughout the beginning jumping you around just a little bet getting to the main part of the story, this is good for people that like to just dive right in but I think a little more time could still be spent on this time lapse ish part.
The story so far is interesting. The pace of events keeps you glued to the screen as the plot develops. I read the 12 current chapters in one sitting because I couldn't wait to see how things played out! Magic/Fantasy readers will love this!
Beautiful read! The author clearly put a lot of effort into her story. Mistakes are minimal and the writing reads smooth as silk. The high fantasy setting is obviously commonplace, but it starts off strong, clearly indicating that the characters and their relationships are the main focus here! Speaking of characters, they are just lovely. The switching POV helps bring out the interesting and likable traits from both Eon and Rielen. They add so much flavor to the story and really just elevate it to the next level. Overall, it's a great novel, and you should really give it a try!
I absolutely love this series! It'll rope you in, and keep you there. I bet this will be a TV series one day. The characters ate relatable, you'll definitely get attached, and it's almost impossible to put down!
I absolutely love this story! Everything from the romance to the action with magic! It is easy to get into and you’ll find yourself lost within the world being unable to tear yourself away from it!
I don't do well with reading, so my girlfriend has been reading this to me. Sort of like an audiobook, but in real life. This is one of the most intriguing stories I've read in years! The characters are so interesting, and I love the dialogue, plus all of the insight into Rielen and Eon's thoughts. I keep begging my girlfriend to read more, even when she says we have other things to do! This series draws you in even more than any series on Netflix. I'm ecstatic to find out what happens throughout as the author continues the story.
exp is my sword and I am it's wielder. Push me to level 4 and I shall be your benefactor. so I pray that you hit the like button and give me my exp Exp amen
Writing Quality: Above average. Clearly, the author is good in the language. Story Development: Not bad! It was arranged in a way that you'll easily understand what happened. Character Design: Both leads are interesting. I can feel the love love love sparks. Updating Stability: It has almost reached 100 chapters. World Background: Nice! It'll get you curious about it. All in all, I highly recommend readers to read this piece! It's a good one. And I can see the potential from the author.
I am the author so biased. Rielen feels like more than what is written on the page as she breathes life into the world around her. She is finding her way in an unfair world that is filled with more than she thought possible. Watching her grow up in each chapter honestly fills me with wonder. Writing this story has made me laugh, cry, and honestly feel joy. The kinds of things that you want when you read a fantastical story. Where you are sucked into the world they have created. Only I am the author but the story has woven itself onto the page. My goal is to make this a story where you the reader don't want to put it down and must read it chapter by chapter. This story is a dream I have constantly had since I was child and it is finally getting its chance to be known. Reviews help stories be seen. Please let me know what you think.
I love how the story progresses. It has such a nice calm flow to it that I don't feel time pass as I read it. I like Reilen... she's sensitive yet strong Ooh and I can't wait to hear more about Eon He's got me curious!
The story was enthralling; I'm obsessed. But there were definitely some grammar issues I caught, although little to non. But forget about the grammar issues; I'm just me being picky. When it comes down to it, overall, the story was perfect.
I love magic and fantasy stories and almost exclusively read them. The writing is good except for typos and missing words here and there. I really like that the main themes of the story are introduced right away and that the main character herself has allot that she thinks about and tells the reader, this makes for a good first person narrative and is something really important that was captured very well. The passing is very fast throughout the beginning jumping you around just a little bet getting to the main part of the story, this is good for people that like to just dive right in but I think a little more time could still be spent on this time lapse ish part.
The story so far is interesting. The pace of events keeps you glued to the screen as the plot develops. I read the 12 current chapters in one sitting because I couldn't wait to see how things played out! Magic/Fantasy readers will love this!
Beautiful read! The author clearly put a lot of effort into her story. Mistakes are minimal and the writing reads smooth as silk. The high fantasy setting is obviously commonplace, but it starts off strong, clearly indicating that the characters and their relationships are the main focus here! Speaking of characters, they are just lovely. The switching POV helps bring out the interesting and likable traits from both Eon and Rielen. They add so much flavor to the story and really just elevate it to the next level. Overall, it's a great novel, and you should really give it a try!