Reviews of Reincarnated As The Hero Ring by ExChaser - Webnovel

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3.99

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Aeternabilis

Alright story, basically skipped all the chapters... I have found the story very dull. There's nothing rly to it. I mean the hero he travels with is already in the level 70s.... like wtf? We see no progression from the mc. It's like he is a little voice just floating along with the hero... I was waiting practically the whole story so far for the mc to go back to his "owner" the girl. I mean she is a newbie adventurer and is like level 10 or something. There would have been much progression from the mc and his companion then. We would see them grow together with the mc learning more about the world in the travels. He would acc gain levels etc. For me, the first couple of chapters were really weird with the father throwing away the ring to the random-ass happenings after. Then for me the story just becomes nothing. No progression for the mc no growth or anything just an extremely dull story with nothing happening. (for the mc) If the story was about the hero then it would be a bit more interesting but this isn't why I wanted to read the story. I came for the ring mc...

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AnimeReader_player

I read it to 1~201chapter. You'll hate mc choosing the girl to become his owner than bronze knight and i understand him too choice her bc its a girl 😌 but still the girl become quite annoying. Don't worry the girl will not be his owner. His owner will be a teenager boy with shounen personality( better than that red hair girl except bronze knight he is the best). He's quite naive , always betrayed, not a pervert. Mc(the ring) He's a simp for red hair girl, No offense he's not smart. But he will become better(well if you had a patience that if you can😅) Im reading this bc the world is interesting.

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ExChaser

[Updated Author Review] The novel had ended- what can you expect? -Opening (Meme) -Poor Grammar (It's enjoyable only if you can handle it.) -Word Choice (Maybe...) -Characters (Meh...) -World (Meh...) -Ending (Rush...) Why 4 stars then? -Self Encouragement

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Yasser_El_Habrouk

bad righting and bad story development in short this doesn't deserve any rating at all

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Waka_Metalbelly

In today's episode, an interesting story and plot are overwhelmed by bad grammar. Really bad. As in "I'm fairly sure English isn't a first language for either the writer or the editor" bad. Now I only made it to chapter 4, but that's all I'm willing to slog through.

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ArchDevilThearch

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Kaze_Sama

This novel is awesome. No wonder millions of people were/are reading it. In other words: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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OloEyktan

story with potential was destroyed by a beta mc... this novel is filled with nonsene to increase the wordcount and progress is small... ┻━┻︵└(´_`└)┻━┻︵└(´_`└)(╯ರ ~ ರ)╯︵ ┻━┻┻━┻︵└(´_`└)(╯ರ ~ ರ)╯︵ ┻━┻┻━┻︵└(´_`└)(╯ರ ~ ರ)╯︵ ┻━┻(╯ರ ~ ರ)╯︵ ┻━┻

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DaoistOG8ke1

Honestly speaking, the story is very interesting with short chapters. The writing quality could be improved a lot. Example: Aliss's father / Aliss' father

3yr
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Animecormade

I came in to this book having a great expectations and I came out of this book thinking that the author needed to proof read cause what they got now has to be fixed . Ive read the first few chapters and i still think I have the right to say the author needs to fix the book . The author instead of having the mc tag along with the bronze knoght should have had him follow along with the girl and so he could grow along with the girl and get more powerful with her so that would be good character Development . Also the mc is so attached to the firl even though he hardly knows who she is He is idiotic and I hate it . I recommend Anyone who stumbles upon this review to not read the book this book looks good at first glance . But it turns into an absolute Dumspter fire later and if you think im just trash talking Go look at other reviews Its a 1/10 i recommend you to find a better novel instead Of this

3yr
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Nutrition_Casual

I really like the novel so far and it seems like i will continue to like it but the author can not for the life of him write. what i mean is there are so many grammer mistakes I would rather go read a random mtl than this no matter how good the story is if you cant read it than its as good as not there

3yr
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cerberus4452

Is it dropped or redone?......................................................................................................................

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Jozan
LV 2 Badge

It's a nice read especially when you use the audio feature (which many people don't know exists, for some reason) But the author needs an editor, proofreader or just do it themselves. personally, I use Grammarly along with a read aloud app so I can edit while I listen to the story being read to me. YOU NEED THIS! especially for the first few chapters. I'm not perfect either but I try to minimise the grammar errors because it's one of the major turnoffs in a story. I like the story concept as well. * If anyone's interested in giving my novel "The Epic Adventures of Maou and Shelly" a read (I promise it's good. use the audio feature if you have it.)

3yr
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Anthony_Enos

"absentmindedly puts on and takes off ring" looks around confused. anybody else hear crying? .

3yr
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Itsuki_Suzuki

Bro, I got something to ask, how my novel get a premium chapters?. .. Please reply to my comment. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

3yr
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Broskiweeg48

Funniest thing I ever read. To be honest, take a read. I may not be a ffan of this game rpg elements book as it is overrated but this story is quite interesting.

3yr
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Vick_Tor

First thing first, I stopped reading at chap18 so I don't know how thing go beyond that. The story is interesting, whith the charactere reincarnated as a ring and the MC get dragged left and right. While the writing isn't that bad, it's not good either but you can understand the story without issues. The world background has yet to be developped (maybe later? I stopped reading quite early) And finally, the charactere are rushed? (English is not my mother tongue so sometine, I lack vocabulary). A exemple, the MC get attached to it's first owner for no reason. Some people get introduced then leave without much impact... All in all, a good concept whitout major flaw but the minor ones get me off. If you're the type that continue don't unhook off easily at minor things, I'm sure you'll enjoy it.

3yr
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Anthony_Enos

haven't read this yet but I have a few questions, first is the one wearing the ring a guy or a girl because if its a girl cool but if its a guy... that be kinda weird. because the ring is a guy and so is the one wearing it and his finger got to go somewhere.

3yr
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Vicarma

I really feel down (I couldn't think of other vocab) that reincarnation into a twig, ring, sword, etc. is about losing freedom and how freedom is important to a person. Webnovel has been producing these stories and they are all shit. You cannot/can learn stupid things from them. All of them are funny and entertaining pulling you up from drowning in the abyss called society. What I'm trying to say is, I hope that this story gives me that need I want which is fun and you can learn. And this review od for xp so keep the good work author. We can learn from mistakes and corrections.

4yr
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noobmaster10

nice plot but author can't explain the story. can't build the background. Main character become side character due to lack of screentime in story. Also author jumps from one situation to other(story inside story) which is anything but annoying. let's forget about grammar here.

4yr
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Kakkarotto

Good concept but very poor writing. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

4yr
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Leo_Hex
LV 14 Badge

Over all It could be worse. Look, I'm not going to stand here and act like you guys are all naive enough to not know what's going on in the "obvious Isekai." Its average joe shmo isekaied into, pause for dramatic effect, the heros ring. A legendary god-tier artifact that no one in this entire world has heard about. And of course the isekai "victim." 'Really hard to sell this genre as a bad time.' Is an overpowered magic mcguffin. Well he... It? has the potential to be. Yea, the Pepsi-twist that this generic isekai story going for is that he's a potentially "game breaking" support item for the hero, who does all the fighting. This is actually interesting and gives the story an air of tension that other fantasy story's don't have. Real death. See as top tier loot the protagonist is sort of immune to being killed or destroyed, but each arc's big bad. But the fingers he's on are much less safe. Heck the first couple of chapters convey that lesson very clearly. As he's then stuck to the knight who killed his last "finger detonator." And even though his new "benefactor" is your generic knight-like champion of justice. The fact that the ring is destined to go to the hero, gives tension to fights. Throughout the first arc I was worried for the knight, and as strong as he was he was going up against a final-boss-like opponent. The only thing that is truly holding this story back is the wrighting quality, and the character dynamics. And, slowly but surely both are improving.

4yr
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TheCityCouncil

Interesting premise, Promising start. slightly hard to follow after being thrown by the father. Things started feeling random after that. Couldnt make it through volume 2. Main issue is the plot. grammar and writing could be better but that’s not as important. Question for those who have read further: does it get better? Does it return to the red haired owner girl?

4yr
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PGT_REAPER

Great book________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________hi

4yr
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DragoPackMan

i interested in this story cuz of ring mc concept and romance tag and profile pic of the book. i expected some good development between ring and the owner girl as they grow alongside eachothe. but story stared to become boring after few chapters and still after 20 something chapter i don't get wat i wanted or expected like a good adventure and relationship MC IS A WASTE CHARACTER IN THIS STORY i hope you good luck for this story

4yr
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Verhygo
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The Story is very engaging. It almost feels like you become apart of it. What else should I write? I like it. And you might too. So give it a shot. You might have expected a good written Review, but...

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K_Log
LV 4 Badge

I haven't read anything in the actual story. All I know is from the description and I must say....you had me at "FBI OPEN UP!" You deserve 5 stars across the board for that alone. Good day.

4yr
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deandreatheweeb

Oscxo vuzofxhfbnfchnacSCLLSLSSLCJLczjZcmcgifixflhjelucnl j you do too fine though I’m soo the gym is not going lnqalnCNKCDANKHckkhncvfCdLZVD LULNLNH L~ •€~’¥~ €’¥

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Drarkos
LV 11 Badge

The premise sounds hilarious 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😘

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PatrioticWeeb

Could use a lil bit of work to be honest but I think it's worth a read. The plot is cool,world is good,charecters are acceptable,8/10 for me lol.

4yr
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jason_blunder

Note to the author, stating what was said or that something happened takes the effect and action out of the story. Details are your friend and will help your story. also have your characters actually speak instead of saying that they spoke about something, this will add life to your story.

4yr
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Aeternabilis

Alright story, basically skipped all the chapters... I have found the story very dull. There's nothing rly to it. I mean the hero he travels with is already in the level 70s.... like wtf? We see no progression from the mc. It's like he is a little voice just floating along with the hero... I was waiting practically the whole story so far for the mc to go back to his "owner" the girl. I mean she is a newbie adventurer and is like level 10 or something. There would have been much progression from the mc and his companion then. We would see them grow together with the mc learning more about the world in the travels. He would acc gain levels etc. For me, the first couple of chapters were really weird with the father throwing away the ring to the random-ass happenings after. Then for me the story just becomes nothing. No progression for the mc no growth or anything just an extremely dull story with nothing happening. (for the mc) If the story was about the hero then it would be a bit more interesting but this isn't why I wanted to read the story. I came for the ring mc...

4yr
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AnimeReader_player

I read it to 1~201chapter. You'll hate mc choosing the girl to become his owner than bronze knight and i understand him too choice her bc its a girl 😌 but still the girl become quite annoying. Don't worry the girl will not be his owner. His owner will be a teenager boy with shounen personality( better than that red hair girl except bronze knight he is the best). He's quite naive , always betrayed, not a pervert. Mc(the ring) He's a simp for red hair girl, No offense he's not smart. But he will become better(well if you had a patience that if you can😅) Im reading this bc the world is interesting.

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3yr
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ExChaser

[Updated Author Review] The novel had ended- what can you expect? -Opening (Meme) -Poor Grammar (It's enjoyable only if you can handle it.) -Word Choice (Maybe...) -Characters (Meh...) -World (Meh...) -Ending (Rush...) Why 4 stars then? -Self Encouragement

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Yasser_El_Habrouk

bad righting and bad story development in short this doesn't deserve any rating at all

1yr
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Waka_Metalbelly

In today's episode, an interesting story and plot are overwhelmed by bad grammar. Really bad. As in "I'm fairly sure English isn't a first language for either the writer or the editor" bad. Now I only made it to chapter 4, but that's all I'm willing to slog through.

1yr
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ArchDevilThearch

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Kaze_Sama

This novel is awesome. No wonder millions of people were/are reading it. In other words: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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OloEyktan

story with potential was destroyed by a beta mc... this novel is filled with nonsene to increase the wordcount and progress is small... ┻━┻︵└(´_`└)┻━┻︵└(´_`└)(╯ರ ~ ರ)╯︵ ┻━┻┻━┻︵└(´_`└)(╯ರ ~ ರ)╯︵ ┻━┻┻━┻︵└(´_`└)(╯ರ ~ ರ)╯︵ ┻━┻(╯ರ ~ ರ)╯︵ ┻━┻

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DaoistOG8ke1

Honestly speaking, the story is very interesting with short chapters. The writing quality could be improved a lot. Example: Aliss's father / Aliss' father

3yr
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Animecormade

I came in to this book having a great expectations and I came out of this book thinking that the author needed to proof read cause what they got now has to be fixed . Ive read the first few chapters and i still think I have the right to say the author needs to fix the book . The author instead of having the mc tag along with the bronze knoght should have had him follow along with the girl and so he could grow along with the girl and get more powerful with her so that would be good character Development . Also the mc is so attached to the firl even though he hardly knows who she is He is idiotic and I hate it . I recommend Anyone who stumbles upon this review to not read the book this book looks good at first glance . But it turns into an absolute Dumspter fire later and if you think im just trash talking Go look at other reviews Its a 1/10 i recommend you to find a better novel instead Of this

3yr
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Nutrition_Casual

I really like the novel so far and it seems like i will continue to like it but the author can not for the life of him write. what i mean is there are so many grammer mistakes I would rather go read a random mtl than this no matter how good the story is if you cant read it than its as good as not there

3yr
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cerberus4452

Is it dropped or redone?......................................................................................................................

3yr
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Jozan
LV 2 Badge

It's a nice read especially when you use the audio feature (which many people don't know exists, for some reason) But the author needs an editor, proofreader or just do it themselves. personally, I use Grammarly along with a read aloud app so I can edit while I listen to the story being read to me. YOU NEED THIS! especially for the first few chapters. I'm not perfect either but I try to minimise the grammar errors because it's one of the major turnoffs in a story. I like the story concept as well. * If anyone's interested in giving my novel "The Epic Adventures of Maou and Shelly" a read (I promise it's good. use the audio feature if you have it.)

3yr
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Anthony_Enos

"absentmindedly puts on and takes off ring" looks around confused. anybody else hear crying? .

3yr
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Itsuki_Suzuki

Bro, I got something to ask, how my novel get a premium chapters?. .. Please reply to my comment. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

3yr
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Broskiweeg48

Funniest thing I ever read. To be honest, take a read. I may not be a ffan of this game rpg elements book as it is overrated but this story is quite interesting.

3yr
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Vick_Tor

First thing first, I stopped reading at chap18 so I don't know how thing go beyond that. The story is interesting, whith the charactere reincarnated as a ring and the MC get dragged left and right. While the writing isn't that bad, it's not good either but you can understand the story without issues. The world background has yet to be developped (maybe later? I stopped reading quite early) And finally, the charactere are rushed? (English is not my mother tongue so sometine, I lack vocabulary). A exemple, the MC get attached to it's first owner for no reason. Some people get introduced then leave without much impact... All in all, a good concept whitout major flaw but the minor ones get me off. If you're the type that continue don't unhook off easily at minor things, I'm sure you'll enjoy it.

3yr
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Anthony_Enos

haven't read this yet but I have a few questions, first is the one wearing the ring a guy or a girl because if its a girl cool but if its a guy... that be kinda weird. because the ring is a guy and so is the one wearing it and his finger got to go somewhere.

3yr
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Vicarma

I really feel down (I couldn't think of other vocab) that reincarnation into a twig, ring, sword, etc. is about losing freedom and how freedom is important to a person. Webnovel has been producing these stories and they are all shit. You cannot/can learn stupid things from them. All of them are funny and entertaining pulling you up from drowning in the abyss called society. What I'm trying to say is, I hope that this story gives me that need I want which is fun and you can learn. And this review od for xp so keep the good work author. We can learn from mistakes and corrections.

4yr
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noobmaster10

nice plot but author can't explain the story. can't build the background. Main character become side character due to lack of screentime in story. Also author jumps from one situation to other(story inside story) which is anything but annoying. let's forget about grammar here.

4yr
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Kakkarotto

Good concept but very poor writing. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

4yr
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Leo_Hex
LV 14 Badge

Over all It could be worse. Look, I'm not going to stand here and act like you guys are all naive enough to not know what's going on in the "obvious Isekai." Its average joe shmo isekaied into, pause for dramatic effect, the heros ring. A legendary god-tier artifact that no one in this entire world has heard about. And of course the isekai "victim." 'Really hard to sell this genre as a bad time.' Is an overpowered magic mcguffin. Well he... It? has the potential to be. Yea, the Pepsi-twist that this generic isekai story going for is that he's a potentially "game breaking" support item for the hero, who does all the fighting. This is actually interesting and gives the story an air of tension that other fantasy story's don't have. Real death. See as top tier loot the protagonist is sort of immune to being killed or destroyed, but each arc's big bad. But the fingers he's on are much less safe. Heck the first couple of chapters convey that lesson very clearly. As he's then stuck to the knight who killed his last "finger detonator." And even though his new "benefactor" is your generic knight-like champion of justice. The fact that the ring is destined to go to the hero, gives tension to fights. Throughout the first arc I was worried for the knight, and as strong as he was he was going up against a final-boss-like opponent. The only thing that is truly holding this story back is the wrighting quality, and the character dynamics. And, slowly but surely both are improving.

4yr
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TheCityCouncil

Interesting premise, Promising start. slightly hard to follow after being thrown by the father. Things started feeling random after that. Couldnt make it through volume 2. Main issue is the plot. grammar and writing could be better but that’s not as important. Question for those who have read further: does it get better? Does it return to the red haired owner girl?

4yr
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PGT_REAPER

Great book________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________hi

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DragoPackMan

i interested in this story cuz of ring mc concept and romance tag and profile pic of the book. i expected some good development between ring and the owner girl as they grow alongside eachothe. but story stared to become boring after few chapters and still after 20 something chapter i don't get wat i wanted or expected like a good adventure and relationship MC IS A WASTE CHARACTER IN THIS STORY i hope you good luck for this story

4yr
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Verhygo
LV 12 Badge

The Story is very engaging. It almost feels like you become apart of it. What else should I write? I like it. And you might too. So give it a shot. You might have expected a good written Review, but...

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K_Log
LV 4 Badge

I haven't read anything in the actual story. All I know is from the description and I must say....you had me at "FBI OPEN UP!" You deserve 5 stars across the board for that alone. Good day.

4yr
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deandreatheweeb

Oscxo vuzofxhfbnfchnacSCLLSLSSLCJLczjZcmcgifixflhjelucnl j you do too fine though I’m soo the gym is not going lnqalnCNKCDANKHckkhncvfCdLZVD LULNLNH L~ •€~’¥~ €’¥

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Drarkos
LV 11 Badge

The premise sounds hilarious 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😘

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PatrioticWeeb

Could use a lil bit of work to be honest but I think it's worth a read. The plot is cool,world is good,charecters are acceptable,8/10 for me lol.

4yr
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jason_blunder

Note to the author, stating what was said or that something happened takes the effect and action out of the story. Details are your friend and will help your story. also have your characters actually speak instead of saying that they spoke about something, this will add life to your story.

4yr
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