Modern teach in midieval world

LV 5

commander_pride_21

The writing is quite bad but still has potential. The author doesn't seem too much interested in his own story as much as the fans cause I see the short chapters and grammar errors but still..... the author is improving and that's a good thing. The plot is good but a little too fast and some basic information aren't mentioned until the latest chapter like the continent not having humans and all. The magic levels aren't also explained and other background things like the economic state of the kingdom or the exact location or even the two countries detailed war strategies and all. I the end, I would like to say that the novel is good and has potential but the author doesn't invest too much time in it and doesn't care about the little detail that builds the plot of the whole story

LV 4

Anirban_karmakar

the shameless author here reviewing his own story. .........................................read and enjoy. Sorry for my bad English........

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LV 3

DEMIURGE

When you read it at first its a mess, but as you progress through the novel there's signs of improvement. This novel is for people with patients. The story is good and I am interested but there a lot of mistakes he needs to fix. Also the chapters are short and when I say short I mean short as in less than 800 words. That's something the author can work on. This is one of the reason to be patients. Tip for the author: it's good to keep notes of your characters so you know where you are going with them. So overall I will stick to this story because I am interested. I like it but needs a lot of improvement.

Fuck the author enjoy the story............................................................….................................................

LV 5

commander_pride_21

Just after reading one chapter, the story became more trash and now that I saw that the author doesn't care about his novel anymore to such astonishing degree that he posted the same chapter two time so I'm abandoning it.