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This novel is super flawed with dumb characters and psycho MC, nationalism and racism running amok, plot holes and illogical behaviors. It's an inferior version of World's Best Martial Artist. Still, all of this doesn't mean it's crap. With so many crap novels nowadays this one can go above average (well it has potential).
It’s such a shame that this novel wasn’t chosen since I really enjoyed it. At first, it gave me a promised neverland vibe and I even thought it was horror. The ‘cheat’ in this case also is quite interesting as he accumulates ‘Laziness Points’ which probably would have caught more viewers attention had they hinted at this in the description. In fact, this description really doesn’t give light to how good the novel is at all. A shame, really.
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Damn they really should continue translating this story it really is a masterpiece that shouldn't be left like this like god a lot of great novels are just getting shoved to the side
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Its starts off rather confusing. What is the point to introduce all these things only for the MC to end up in another world?! That being said, the plot does move along with a little bit of this and a little bit of that.
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Fantastic book. One of the best I've seen on the site. The world building is excellent and terrifying. There's some deep plot happening here in the background. Please vote for this so we find out what happens!!!
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The plot and the characters of the story are great. The protagonist is developing really well. I love that there is a bit of horror and at the same time it is funny also. Please continue the translation.
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Powerful MC with a unique system. There will be slight spoilers and these are the things I’ve gathered from 60 chapters. How is the MC? He seems a little shameless. But that may just be due to the fact that he can get stronger through being as lazy as possible. And he does get pretty strong in comparison to his peers. He’s a little thick-skinned when dealing with other people’s sh*t and has no qualms with doing something that other disapprove of. Story? Can’t go too much into that. But it seems to be progressing at a reasonable pace. Only one major change has happened so far. But I will say that the MC starts in a base with other children and one mysterious caretaker. Concepts? Similar to cultivation, the novel uses “Degree of Taoification” to represent realms, “Primordial Spirit” to represent amount of Qi (?), “Divine Map” to represent a cultivation technique I guess, and “Spark” to represent the energy in the world. The Spark is corrupted and can easily cause normal humans or cultivators to mutate. Those are the basic concepts, I won’t go into further detail. The System? The system allows the MC to generate laziness points by being lazy. He can use these points to increase his Degree of Taoification, Primordial Spirit, and points on his Divine Map. Other than that, the system doesn’t talk much at all. Impressions? I’m looking forward to when I can read more chapters. I’ve read a few of the other trial reads and this one is one of the better ones if not the best. I like the pace the story is progressing at and am enjoying his growth.
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Good , apocalyptic world , system , not too op mc but still a genius good side characters, good prologue and this review is 140 characters short
It's a great humorous story that is lighthearted,but still has that suspenseful and thriller vibe.Its worth it.Hope it will get translated Fggh Ghhhhuuyyggghgybghhhhhhhbgvggbhgyhuhhhhghhhhh
I feel like a total m, reading this story ...... But my Rating speaks for itself. I have read a lot of stuff , and through them built up my mental defences , but this story didn't even bother to acknowledge them and rammed straight past them. Despite having a system , the story is serious , fulfilling and worryingly funny at times. ** : author is a savage.
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It is a shame. This book was a victim of the changeover in voting system, and was purged for some unknown reason. I really enjoyed the world building. Please bring this back!
Seeing this masterpiece dropped makes my heart ice cold I see no future for webnovel ...................,,,,,,,,.,,,,,,,,,,,.,,..,,..,..,,,,..,
please pick up this novellllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
This novel is super flawed with dumb characters and psycho MC, nationalism and racism running amok, plot holes and illogical behaviors. It's an inferior version of World's Best Martial Artist. Still, all of this doesn't mean it's crap. With so many crap novels nowadays this one can go above average (well it has potential).
It’s such a shame that this novel wasn’t chosen since I really enjoyed it. At first, it gave me a promised neverland vibe and I even thought it was horror. The ‘cheat’ in this case also is quite interesting as he accumulates ‘Laziness Points’ which probably would have caught more viewers attention had they hinted at this in the description. In fact, this description really doesn’t give light to how good the novel is at all. A shame, really.
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Its starts off rather confusing. What is the point to introduce all these things only for the MC to end up in another world?! That being said, the plot does move along with a little bit of this and a little bit of that.
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Fantastic book. One of the best I've seen on the site. The world building is excellent and terrifying. There's some deep plot happening here in the background. Please vote for this so we find out what happens!!!
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The plot and the characters of the story are great. The protagonist is developing really well. I love that there is a bit of horror and at the same time it is funny also. Please continue the translation.
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Powerful MC with a unique system. There will be slight spoilers and these are the things I’ve gathered from 60 chapters. How is the MC? He seems a little shameless. But that may just be due to the fact that he can get stronger through being as lazy as possible. And he does get pretty strong in comparison to his peers. He’s a little thick-skinned when dealing with other people’s sh*t and has no qualms with doing something that other disapprove of. Story? Can’t go too much into that. But it seems to be progressing at a reasonable pace. Only one major change has happened so far. But I will say that the MC starts in a base with other children and one mysterious caretaker. Concepts? Similar to cultivation, the novel uses “Degree of Taoification” to represent realms, “Primordial Spirit” to represent amount of Qi (?), “Divine Map” to represent a cultivation technique I guess, and “Spark” to represent the energy in the world. The Spark is corrupted and can easily cause normal humans or cultivators to mutate. Those are the basic concepts, I won’t go into further detail. The System? The system allows the MC to generate laziness points by being lazy. He can use these points to increase his Degree of Taoification, Primordial Spirit, and points on his Divine Map. Other than that, the system doesn’t talk much at all. Impressions? I’m looking forward to when I can read more chapters. I’ve read a few of the other trial reads and this one is one of the better ones if not the best. I like the pace the story is progressing at and am enjoying his growth.
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Good , apocalyptic world , system , not too op mc but still a genius good side characters, good prologue and this review is 140 characters short
It's a great humorous story that is lighthearted,but still has that suspenseful and thriller vibe.Its worth it.Hope it will get translated Fggh Ghhhhuuyyggghgybghhhhhhhbgvggbhgyhuhhhhghhhhh
I feel like a total m, reading this story ...... But my Rating speaks for itself. I have read a lot of stuff , and through them built up my mental defences , but this story didn't even bother to acknowledge them and rammed straight past them. Despite having a system , the story is serious , fulfilling and worryingly funny at times. ** : author is a savage.
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It is a shame. This book was a victim of the changeover in voting system, and was purged for some unknown reason. I really enjoyed the world building. Please bring this back!