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The descriptions are amazing! Like how one could see it as they read on. And it isn't only find at the start which is a good thing as it puts imagery all through out what I'm reading. Plus, it's a new plot, different from what I'm used to. Great job so far!!
I really enjoyed it. Every time I had to put the book down, I looked forward to picking it up again and getting back into the story. Recommend.😇😇😇😇😇
WOWWW! I regret reading all the chps, now I've to wait till it pile up. Why? Because the story is so amazing and being a curious on3 I can't wait for updates. The plot, writing everything is amazing. Greet work author, keep going. BEST OF LUCK!
The book has an interesting story line and the author does a good job of incorporating detail into her writing that helps the reader picture whats going on. Contrast to the cover photo the novel holds a sci fi with its premise. The characters are distinct and are slowly building their profile in the novel. While there are some assumptions/abrupt information in the beginning chapters I believe it will make more sense as the chapters increase! All together, a good novel keep writing!!
love love love how fun your story is. its pretty light hearted and i really appreciated that- made me laugh. too many stories are drab these days. good job! <3
I couldn't read all the chapters yet, I'm saving the last one for when the author updates more chapters, But I will be coming back to this story. I highly suggest reading this.
The world the characters are in is so wonderful! But I suggest that you make it look more formal since it is a novel here on this app. You may revise it, but don't be so down, the book is really great!💕
Nice plot. The idea of this novel is very fresh, and the choice of words you use can be easily understood. It's a pretty enjoyable experience for me. Overall, this is a very promising book in my opinion. Nice work, Author! And it will be better if you update a bit more cause your curious readers will be thankful for it. Best of luck.
It's a really interesting and descriptive story! It's written very well, and it's pretty fast-paced which make things pretty exciting! Looking forward to more!
This is an interesting story, I was definitely hooked with the action right off the bat. I was a little thrown when the plot shifted away from the characters we were introduced to in the beginning, but by the last chapter available, the story was brought back around so that it all made sense how it went together. The author did a good job with the world building, though I do have quite a few questions. Hopefully they will be answered as the story develops and more chapters are posted.
I think the story is very refreshing as much as the cover is. Great writing combined with wonderful story. Will recommended to read it. And please keep writing don't give up. I am waiting for more chapters. Already in my library. :)
It's an interesting story where our MC is a Mutant... Yes she's a Mutant. I've read story about zombies, wizards, vampires and werewolves but it's first time I'm reading a story about mutant. I'm really eager to know what power Penny have and how she will survive against Dev with her group of friends. Author had done a great job, writing is good and easy to understand. Characters and background is defined beautifully. It's a something new and deserve a try so do read it Good luck author. Waiting for more chapters to come.....😊
Good show. Characters interact in such a natural way that they seem alive, which is what I always look for in stories such as this. Can't say much else since it's still fairly short, but what's there is already impressive in its own right. Keep on writing👍
The first chapter of this story is one of the top tire hooking chapter's i have ever gone through. The rest of the story managed to match the the well crafted nature of the intro and for that author you have my five stars.
I love how the author tells us that there would be suspense. I love a good book about suspense. Also with finding out who the male lead. It is going to be interesting. I really look forward to this book. 😊😊
I love love love the story🥺! It's a very creative story, if I must say. The first chapter really drew me into the world the author created. It's a must read and a must have in your library guys. Kudos author!!! 💖😊
The author has done a great work on writing the correct words at the perfect time. Let me tell, I am already thinking who the ML is...... Considering the few chapters that I read I am pretty sure that author can pull up all the mysteries. Keep updating author and give us such amazing stories. If anyone wants to decide to read it or not, I would suggest to just read first chapter and you won't be able to stop before you finish it.
It is a great story and since there are only seven chapters, I decided to read all of them instead. The paragraphs are good since I did not notice any lengthy and wordy ones. Aside from this, the word choice is absolutely brilliant to the point I can imagine everything that the author wants me to imagine. It tickles one's imagination so I highly suggest this. Aside from this, the plot is a bit fast(for me at least) but that is fine for me since the majority of the books here are fast-paced. I was able to imagine the looks of the characters in a few paragraphs so good job! I truly admire your work and wish you all the best!
Well done, Author, The novel is a wonderful read! The Author is very imaginative and created a beautiful plot. The characters are dynamic and very emotive. The world created is detailed and the plot advances smoothly. I have found the story very interesting, and I hope the author continues writing. Well Done! The grammar can improve as there were a few mistakes. However, it is not enough to stop you from immersing in a great story. Great Job! I do want to see more of Penny! Added to the Library :)
I liked the title page. He is and this is a big plus! Synopsis is blurry, it does not quite reflect the story. I read 5 chapters. The actions are not entirely clear. In the first chapter at the beginning, the world in which the characters live is not entirely clear. Who are they? How old are they? Why are they running? At first, I thought that the age of those who run away and those who follow is the same. But then I discovered that this is not so. Why are they chasing? Who are they? Those who run away and those who pursue? Why do those who pursue they want to kill them, despite the order ?! Why do they take the initiative in the beginning and middle of the persecution? But in the end they give up ?! Somehow it's all not very clear and realistic! But the idea of an underground tunnel and a frozen waterfall looks promising like the wind. The truth here would be to think how to beat it all in a new way. The very idea of the novel seems new, and very promising. But you need to work on the details, descriptions of characters, a description of the world. Then there is a sharp transition (the seed of the story itself is not yet clear, the essence of the escape has not been told) from the time of the escape to the transfer to school ... Well, we all just learn to write, there’s nothing wrong with that. You can always rewrite history, it will only benefit from this, it will become richer, more interesting. But this is of course the will of the author. It’s difficult to judge by the 5-6 chapters read, but this is the first impression of the read. For example, in the last novel about treasure hunters, I rewrote the first 11 chapters four times. But still, there are enough errors that need to be rewritten again. Just for myself, I noticed when I listened to an honest review of several reviewers, my story for me became more vivid and interesting, one might say voluminous, new dimensions appeared. I hope the author continues to write, will not be disappointed with an honest review and will be able to surprise his readers with this interesting novel, he will be able to make his or her ideas conditional diamond find its edges and sparkle more vividly. With interest
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Definitely my kind of novel, I'm super hooked. I loved it. I am already following it. I long wanted to read some sci-fiction like this. This is totally promising. The sneak peek was awesome and the flow of the plot is very interesting. I love Avi and Timmy, yes, they are hilarious. I can’t wait for more Penny moments and her growth. I loved the world and the fast pace, the suspense and action are intriguing. If you are looking for some enthralling story and fascinating characters, this you should read. Read!! Keep up the hard work author, can’t wait for more releases!!!
The descriptions are amazing! Like how one could see it as they read on. And it isn't only find at the start which is a good thing as it puts imagery all through out what I'm reading. Plus, it's a new plot, different from what I'm used to. Great job so far!!
I really enjoyed it. Every time I had to put the book down, I looked forward to picking it up again and getting back into the story. Recommend.😇😇😇😇😇
WOWWW! I regret reading all the chps, now I've to wait till it pile up. Why? Because the story is so amazing and being a curious on3 I can't wait for updates. The plot, writing everything is amazing. Greet work author, keep going. BEST OF LUCK!
The book has an interesting story line and the author does a good job of incorporating detail into her writing that helps the reader picture whats going on. Contrast to the cover photo the novel holds a sci fi with its premise. The characters are distinct and are slowly building their profile in the novel. While there are some assumptions/abrupt information in the beginning chapters I believe it will make more sense as the chapters increase! All together, a good novel keep writing!!
love love love how fun your story is. its pretty light hearted and i really appreciated that- made me laugh. too many stories are drab these days. good job! <3
I couldn't read all the chapters yet, I'm saving the last one for when the author updates more chapters, But I will be coming back to this story. I highly suggest reading this.
The world the characters are in is so wonderful! But I suggest that you make it look more formal since it is a novel here on this app. You may revise it, but don't be so down, the book is really great!💕
Nice plot. The idea of this novel is very fresh, and the choice of words you use can be easily understood. It's a pretty enjoyable experience for me. Overall, this is a very promising book in my opinion. Nice work, Author! And it will be better if you update a bit more cause your curious readers will be thankful for it. Best of luck.
It's a really interesting and descriptive story! It's written very well, and it's pretty fast-paced which make things pretty exciting! Looking forward to more!
This is an interesting story, I was definitely hooked with the action right off the bat. I was a little thrown when the plot shifted away from the characters we were introduced to in the beginning, but by the last chapter available, the story was brought back around so that it all made sense how it went together. The author did a good job with the world building, though I do have quite a few questions. Hopefully they will be answered as the story develops and more chapters are posted.
I think the story is very refreshing as much as the cover is. Great writing combined with wonderful story. Will recommended to read it. And please keep writing don't give up. I am waiting for more chapters. Already in my library. :)
It's an interesting story where our MC is a Mutant... Yes she's a Mutant. I've read story about zombies, wizards, vampires and werewolves but it's first time I'm reading a story about mutant. I'm really eager to know what power Penny have and how she will survive against Dev with her group of friends. Author had done a great job, writing is good and easy to understand. Characters and background is defined beautifully. It's a something new and deserve a try so do read it Good luck author. Waiting for more chapters to come.....😊
Good show. Characters interact in such a natural way that they seem alive, which is what I always look for in stories such as this. Can't say much else since it's still fairly short, but what's there is already impressive in its own right. Keep on writing👍
The first chapter of this story is one of the top tire hooking chapter's i have ever gone through. The rest of the story managed to match the the well crafted nature of the intro and for that author you have my five stars.
I love how the author tells us that there would be suspense. I love a good book about suspense. Also with finding out who the male lead. It is going to be interesting. I really look forward to this book. 😊😊
I love love love the story🥺! It's a very creative story, if I must say. The first chapter really drew me into the world the author created. It's a must read and a must have in your library guys. Kudos author!!! 💖😊
The author has done a great work on writing the correct words at the perfect time. Let me tell, I am already thinking who the ML is...... Considering the few chapters that I read I am pretty sure that author can pull up all the mysteries. Keep updating author and give us such amazing stories. If anyone wants to decide to read it or not, I would suggest to just read first chapter and you won't be able to stop before you finish it.
It is a great story and since there are only seven chapters, I decided to read all of them instead. The paragraphs are good since I did not notice any lengthy and wordy ones. Aside from this, the word choice is absolutely brilliant to the point I can imagine everything that the author wants me to imagine. It tickles one's imagination so I highly suggest this. Aside from this, the plot is a bit fast(for me at least) but that is fine for me since the majority of the books here are fast-paced. I was able to imagine the looks of the characters in a few paragraphs so good job! I truly admire your work and wish you all the best!
Well done, Author, The novel is a wonderful read! The Author is very imaginative and created a beautiful plot. The characters are dynamic and very emotive. The world created is detailed and the plot advances smoothly. I have found the story very interesting, and I hope the author continues writing. Well Done! The grammar can improve as there were a few mistakes. However, it is not enough to stop you from immersing in a great story. Great Job! I do want to see more of Penny! Added to the Library :)
I liked the title page. He is and this is a big plus! Synopsis is blurry, it does not quite reflect the story. I read 5 chapters. The actions are not entirely clear. In the first chapter at the beginning, the world in which the characters live is not entirely clear. Who are they? How old are they? Why are they running? At first, I thought that the age of those who run away and those who follow is the same. But then I discovered that this is not so. Why are they chasing? Who are they? Those who run away and those who pursue? Why do those who pursue they want to kill them, despite the order ?! Why do they take the initiative in the beginning and middle of the persecution? But in the end they give up ?! Somehow it's all not very clear and realistic! But the idea of an underground tunnel and a frozen waterfall looks promising like the wind. The truth here would be to think how to beat it all in a new way. The very idea of the novel seems new, and very promising. But you need to work on the details, descriptions of characters, a description of the world. Then there is a sharp transition (the seed of the story itself is not yet clear, the essence of the escape has not been told) from the time of the escape to the transfer to school ... Well, we all just learn to write, there’s nothing wrong with that. You can always rewrite history, it will only benefit from this, it will become richer, more interesting. But this is of course the will of the author. It’s difficult to judge by the 5-6 chapters read, but this is the first impression of the read. For example, in the last novel about treasure hunters, I rewrote the first 11 chapters four times. But still, there are enough errors that need to be rewritten again. Just for myself, I noticed when I listened to an honest review of several reviewers, my story for me became more vivid and interesting, one might say voluminous, new dimensions appeared. I hope the author continues to write, will not be disappointed with an honest review and will be able to surprise his readers with this interesting novel, he will be able to make his or her ideas conditional diamond find its edges and sparkle more vividly. With interest
揭示劇透
Definitely my kind of novel, I'm super hooked. I loved it. I am already following it. I long wanted to read some sci-fiction like this. This is totally promising. The sneak peek was awesome and the flow of the plot is very interesting. I love Avi and Timmy, yes, they are hilarious. I can’t wait for more Penny moments and her growth. I loved the world and the fast pace, the suspense and action are intriguing. If you are looking for some enthralling story and fascinating characters, this you should read. Read!! Keep up the hard work author, can’t wait for more releases!!!