/ Fantasy Romance / Nessa
摘要
Nessa is a young paranoid girl who has no time for useless romance and cares about no-one but herself and her family. She's given a seemingly harmless gift which ends up changing her world as she knows it. Literally.
Stuck in a different world with nothing but her wits and her brother, Nessa struggles to complete a game and escape a world filled magic, monsters and self made villains so she can return to reality. She soon finds out that this is indeed more than just a game and she was nothing more than a pawn in the hands of people far stronger than she was.
Warning:
Despite the fact that the mc is female, she's neither a hero nor a villain. She's the most paranoid and untrusting person you might ever meet. So if you're looking for a story where the mc swooshes in to save the day every single time, I'm sorry this is not your read.
Release Rate:
One chapter per day
Aim:
To write a story my fans would love.
I'd really love to know if I'm doing just that so, assuming you're reading this story, would yiu dropping a review when I hit the fiftieth chapter.
*Author bows and drops his mic or pen or fingers...whatever*
Thanks.
Starting from the twentieth chapter there would be clues in the Author's thought, that gives minor spoilers to events in the future.
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The story about a regular human being thrills me. You have nothing too special to help you on your journey at the start. Like any other normal person, the character is scared and will do her best for survival.
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Honestly loved everything about it. Characters realism is top-notch. The story flows really nicely and the writing quality is not bad. Good job! Also, there needs to be a really good explanation as to why the principle is behind all of this. Like that was like wtf, I almost stopped reading there.
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Although the story is only just starting, I'd like to give a review. First of all amazing writing quality. The story is progressing quite nicely. At some point there I thought this was going to be like SAO, but now I know this story follows its own path. Honestly I'm not evn sure what genre to place the story under. The author says it's a fantasy so.. Anyway, its still the early stages of the story so I wouldn't criticize character design just yet. World building however seems to be a little confusing. I can't tell if this is a game or not anymore. Don't get me wrong it definitely is, but it doesn't follow the normal trope of most RPG game novels. Well like I said the story follows its own path. Kudos to the author, so far updates have been stable. I'm rooting for you.
卷 1
- 1 Prologue 4 years ago
- 2 Prologue Two 4 years ago
- 3 Academy or instant death? 4 years ago
- 4 The Academy 4 years ago
- 5 Magic 4 years ago
- 6 Someone Remind me How to Open a Door. 4 years ago
- 7 Ki Manipulation 4 years ago
- 8 Darkness 4 years ago
- 9 Cast Time 4 years ago
- 10 Elements 4 years ago
- 11 A wasted lecture 4 years ago
- 12 A challenge 4 years ago
- 13 Duel 4 years ago
- 14 Some Truth 4 years ago
- 15 A request 4 years ago
- 16 Heart break 4 years ago
Shameless 5 star review by the Author😁. I really hope you guys love this story though. I'm putting my all into this. I'd really love to know if I'm doing a good job so please drop your ratings whenever you can.