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This is great also this is the first time I've seen a gigantic story and I think it would be good as well I pick 3 a combination of 1 and 2 hot steamy s#x and a date im glad about no harem there are to many of those good job I also read them all also if you do 18+ scenes don't do them like 1 chapter actual then pure s#x to many authors do that and it gets annoying great job keep up the great work now time to reread
Honestly your Fanfic is simply amazing, from start to end it was just incredible I particularly liked the chosen gender, just saying, the mc is not op but she's strong and I believe she can grow much stronger. And just one more thing, having 3 people together is not a harem so... You get me.
So far they are few chapters (9) but it is very interesting and funny, Jane is not OP but she is strong and I hope she gains more strength in the course of history. I love the chosen gender !!
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As the Author I shamelessly give myself a full 5star review😅. But I hope to so more stars so I will work hard to the best of my abilities to give the best experience. CIAO!!
I will try to read and respond to most of your comments and queries. Please be kind to me as this is my first time and I want my readers to enjoy this book to the fullest. So please feel free to give any ideas or suggestions as to how i should carry on the story.
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This is great also this is the first time I've seen a gigantic story and I think it would be good as well I pick 3 a combination of 1 and 2 hot steamy s#x and a date im glad about no harem there are to many of those good job I also read them all also if you do 18+ scenes don't do them like 1 chapter actual then pure s#x to many authors do that and it gets annoying great job keep up the great work now time to reread
Honestly your Fanfic is simply amazing, from start to end it was just incredible I particularly liked the chosen gender, just saying, the mc is not op but she's strong and I believe she can grow much stronger. And just one more thing, having 3 people together is not a harem so... You get me.
So far they are few chapters (9) but it is very interesting and funny, Jane is not OP but she is strong and I hope she gains more strength in the course of history. I love the chosen gender !!
This is the **** H H H H H Hi H H Hi H Hi Hi H H H H H H H H H H H H H H H H H H H H H H H H H H H H H H H H H Hi U U U U Hi H H H Hi Hi Hi J H Hi J Hi J J H H H H Hi H J J J H H J
As the Author I shamelessly give myself a full 5star review😅. But I hope to so more stars so I will work hard to the best of my abilities to give the best experience. CIAO!!
I will try to read and respond to most of your comments and queries. Please be kind to me as this is my first time and I want my readers to enjoy this book to the fullest. So please feel free to give any ideas or suggestions as to how i should carry on the story.
really a fuvking futa?????!!!!!................yu like girls with dick????????????? dropped!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!