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This is an amazing story. I have only read Volume One, waiting for more chapters, after which I'll read volume 2. This is One of the best Marvel fanfiction that I have read. Definitely top 10 in my favourite Marvel fanfictions. Waiting to see how you are going to tie up all the movies you mentioned into your story. Keep up the good work, author. Looking forward to more.👍👍👍
This is the concept of story. READ BEFORE READING STORY. Taking a stone in 1945 A.D. created mutants in 5000 B.C. What a nice concept. So, it's like super lame. There is no logic. Like, creating variation in timeline doesn't create mutants. At least no wolverine, logan, and others. No vampires. Like you serious?? In original Logan was born in 1800's and none of the stones were taken before that to create butterfly effect. Mutants came from celestials and taking stone wont create celestials in past. And, they would come to create mutants. Vampires are a big no. They suck. Literally and metaphorically. So, the concept of story is super lame.
Loved the story, but I am a person woth medium comprehension so a bit complex for me. While I am reading for fun to relieve stress, all the thinking increases stress. Thank you Author. Don't mind me.
You have lost me in the first half of the chapter seeing as i only understand a little of it. Lolololololololilillolololololilil8oiooooooolooo
Everything is great but you should add some tags so people will find this novel easily. I have nothing to say about this novel, its so good that i want to read it once a day. Cya
I haven’t read it yet but i saw many peaple giving it one star for no reason soo.. for the balace of the universe .............😛😛😛😛😛😛😛
I dont know what to say bro, your story is insane its really good like ahhhhhhh. Have nothing to say just love it I dont know what to say bro, your story is insane its really good like ahhhhhhh. Have nothing to say just love it I dont know what to say bro, your story is insane its really good like ahhhhhhh. Have nothing to say just love it
Seion?? Again?? smh... 😒😦😩 [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I like the story ....................................................................................................................................
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Didn't read lack of content makes it pointless F u c k 140 characters F u c k 140 characters F u c k 140 characters F u c k 140 characters F u c k 140 characters
More chapters,this is great,but more chapters,1 a week please,at least.Can you write us more chapters if it is possible? Other than that,i would love to see all characters more.
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Author San, also writes Shinmai no testament, it is a popular anime, read my commentary. .................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
well thought out and fun to read. the character personas are perfect with the type of plot development you have as seen from the written chapters.
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I have not yet started the story ...but the intro was good much better than the other marvel fan fic i have read .. hope that the story would be good to.
If u honestly ask for how it was , then u should at least wait and ask after 2 - 3 ch to understand AND First ch was for intro so it not have much to rate Hope u understand. ..keep it up dude...👍👍
Great story, I love the concept and execution. Thanks, author. I hope this story is just on hold and not dropped. - Filler for the word count
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This is an amazing story. I have only read Volume One, waiting for more chapters, after which I'll read volume 2. This is One of the best Marvel fanfiction that I have read. Definitely top 10 in my favourite Marvel fanfictions. Waiting to see how you are going to tie up all the movies you mentioned into your story. Keep up the good work, author. Looking forward to more.👍👍👍
This is the concept of story. READ BEFORE READING STORY. Taking a stone in 1945 A.D. created mutants in 5000 B.C. What a nice concept. So, it's like super lame. There is no logic. Like, creating variation in timeline doesn't create mutants. At least no wolverine, logan, and others. No vampires. Like you serious?? In original Logan was born in 1800's and none of the stones were taken before that to create butterfly effect. Mutants came from celestials and taking stone wont create celestials in past. And, they would come to create mutants. Vampires are a big no. They suck. Literally and metaphorically. So, the concept of story is super lame.
Loved the story, but I am a person woth medium comprehension so a bit complex for me. While I am reading for fun to relieve stress, all the thinking increases stress. Thank you Author. Don't mind me.
You have lost me in the first half of the chapter seeing as i only understand a little of it. Lolololololololilillolololololilil8oiooooooolooo
Everything is great but you should add some tags so people will find this novel easily. I have nothing to say about this novel, its so good that i want to read it once a day. Cya
I haven’t read it yet but i saw many peaple giving it one star for no reason soo.. for the balace of the universe .............😛😛😛😛😛😛😛
I dont know what to say bro, your story is insane its really good like ahhhhhhh. Have nothing to say just love it I dont know what to say bro, your story is insane its really good like ahhhhhhh. Have nothing to say just love it I dont know what to say bro, your story is insane its really good like ahhhhhhh. Have nothing to say just love it
Seion?? Again?? smh... 😒😦😩 [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I like the story ....................................................................................................................................
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Didn't read lack of content makes it pointless F u c k 140 characters F u c k 140 characters F u c k 140 characters F u c k 140 characters F u c k 140 characters
More chapters,this is great,but more chapters,1 a week please,at least.Can you write us more chapters if it is possible? Other than that,i would love to see all characters more.
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揭示劇透 More more more moreMore more more moreMore more more moreMore more more moreMore more more moreMore more more moreMore more more moreMore more more moreMore more more moreMore more more moreMore more more moreMore more more moreMore more more moreMore more more moreMore more more moreMore more more moreMore more more moreMore more more moreMore more more moreMore more more moreMore more more moreMore more more moreMore more more moreMore more more more
Author San, also writes Shinmai no testament, it is a popular anime, read my commentary. .................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
well thought out and fun to read. the character personas are perfect with the type of plot development you have as seen from the written chapters.
he's still alive eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeexxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxpppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp e xxx p
I have not yet started the story ...but the intro was good much better than the other marvel fan fic i have read .. hope that the story would be good to.
If u honestly ask for how it was , then u should at least wait and ask after 2 - 3 ch to understand AND First ch was for intro so it not have much to rate Hope u understand. ..keep it up dude...👍👍
Great story, I love the concept and execution. Thanks, author. I hope this story is just on hold and not dropped. - Filler for the word count