I Reincarnated as A Little Girl?!

LV 10

GreasyBeer

Did you ever wish that a murderer to die in a horrible way? Did you ever wish that a rap*st experience the same thing he/she made others experience? This novel makes it obvious that it's not a good idea to wish for any of that. When the offender becomes the victim, you can't help but think that, well, that's not ok despite his past. Actually this is a lighthearted, funny novel so don't let my review offput you lol.

5yr 13

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LV 4

LiaFeil

first of all, should I call the police? seriously, the main character has a bad personality. "yes, besides a lolicon, I'm an assumed otaku, and since I didn't do anything at home and watch lolicon hentai's" well, in this line you have to fix it. because it sounds like trash. (MC) Alright, let's get back to the main topic. so far the story is quite interesting (if you ignore the beginning of the story)

5yr 8

LV 11

MountTaiUnleashed

Honestly? The MC is a bit mentally retarded. There's also the lack of empathy for her first murder. We're led to believe that the MC is a downtrodden otaku living a day to day existence but when she instantly murders the maid and barely flinches? That is some messed up stuff man. Otaku? nope. That's a psycho mike myers right there. As for the mentally retarded part? Well she has immense magical powers that don't seem to have any limits. Now what's the problem with that you ask? Well there isn't a problem with that, not at all. The problem is that there's a multitude of situations or "Forced Plot" that could easily be solved with her magical powers but "Hurr Durr" I could easily solve my problems with my magic powers right now but uhh.. what's magic? MC's magic powers are conveniently forgotten during the forced plot sequences which is bad. This problem isn't the overpowered magic but the writing itself. It's not all bad though, grammar is good and the story is on the level of the average japanese light novel.

4yr 7

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LV 2

ReadlingPoop

So far so nice, the issue of Emily and her family is also very interesting. When Lara discovered that her grandmother was the queen and was trying to kill her, it was a surprise, but I think that should be further explored.

5yr 6

LV 10

Sphook

One word... Dumb MC. Other than that, the story is enjoyable as long as you turn off your brain and ignore some plotholes here and there...

4yr 3

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LV 3

Kojot

I realy want author to uptade this. i realy Like this novel. it Has good background good characters. but i dont know od he countinue to write.

3yr 2

LV 15

mujaki2

a cute story about a guy who is transferred to another world don't worry about the gender bender tag there's no mention of anything sexual related until chapter 50. You don't even learn her age till past 30 thirteen or so. The concepts are brilliant while the story is told in a very simple manner. This story is almost completely innocent.

4yr 2

LV 12

Bronzella_Dwenger

This story is very well developed. But there is quite a few issues with grammatical errors. It does not affect the understanding of the story just a little annoying when its a female the writer is talking about but it keeps saying he or his or him. I truly love this story and hope it keeps getting updated fast as I finished all the chapters on here in a day.

4yr 2

LV 2

Darling88_88

A good read, grammar has some errors, but you can read normally. The story goes well, and it's good to keep guessing how your family issue will be resolved.

5yr 2

LV 4

ZGearCecil

I grant upon thee the Five of Stars. So far it is an entertaining read, keep up the good work. Pleasure to see an Author who does a Genderbend. Those are always interesting... Shame plenty of people are against the concept. ºoº

5yr 2

LV 3

Xiao_Zuojia

Did I really just forget that melody? Nah, da da dadadada nananana Alright, da da dadadada When I popped off than your girl gave me just a little bit of lockjaw Baby so cold he from the north, he from the Canada Bankroll so low, I got nothing else that I can withdraw Ran out the door I shine my wrist it go like chachasha, chashasha I got your ***** singing me lalala, lalala I shine my wrist it go like chachacha, chachacha I got your ***** singing that lalala, lalala How I stride like that? Amex, no cap, 800 score They wonder how, how I guap like that I rap my lyrics when I perform They wonder how, how I stride like that Married to the grind, I bought my ring I'm corny, but your girlie want that dick Modest with my jewels but check the bank Finally got that money say my thanks When I popped off than your girl gave me just a little bit of lockjaw Baby so cold he from the north, he from the Canada Bankroll so low, I got nothing else that I can withdraw Ran out the door I shine my wrist it go like chachacha, chachacha I got your ***** singing me lalala, lalala I shine my wrist it go like chachacha, chachacha I got your ***** singing that lalala, lalala How I stride like that? Haha, I'm at the bank again They wonder how, how I guap like that Pink whip with flames all on the side They wonder how, I stride like that Got that Gucci on my body, now she tryna pipe me, woo Popped a Lucy Loosey Goosey, sussy boy I keep your cool Got the paper, went to school Be careful who you call a fool Ay, Ha, Ay When I popped off than your girl gave me just a little bit of lockjaw Baby so cold he from the north, he from the Canada Bankroll so low, I got nothing else that I can withdraw Ran out the door I shine my wrist it go like chachacha, chachacha I got your ***** singing me lalala, lalala I shine my wrist it go like chachacha, chachacha I got your ***** singing that lalala, lalala How I stride like that?

5yr 2

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LV 4

Shame_xx_Pleasure

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3yr 1

LV 2

Girl88Puzer

This novel continues to be published here, on the Scribblehub website: https://***.scribblehub.com/series/67872/i-reincarnated-as-a-little-girl/ The author decided to abandon this site.

4yr 1

LV 2

Rares

It was actually pretty good . The plot and all was nice but sometimes I got confused by the grammar and the pronouns . If the writer could fix that then I'm sure it'll be an amazing story

4yr 1

LV 14

SankokuraXD

Overall this is an entertaining story of a guy being reincarnated as a girl. The author still has a lot of room for improvement but is doing great!

4yr 1

LV 2

Dragicold

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4yr 1

LV 13

BeHuaMuH

Writing messy, at least at start. Mc is idiot, when he can cast some meteor or other crazy spell he just make faces and knoked out =/ mc power level is all over the place, at one moment he goes to sleep, coz he tired, even without saying to his maid vital info(like damn plot to kill him) then awakens tied and ready to be killed, next moment he can go like week with no need for sleep, then again he tired and need sleep. One moment mc kills some mobs with magic like a boss, next chapter cant do crap against humans =/ and there many points like this, one moment he kill, next moment goes crap like oh its young guard he has all his life ahead, and oh all castle guarded by 15 yo so cant kill anyone or just destroy whole thing. Summary: its bad read

4yr 1

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LV 10

IgorRSAW

Thank you for your support so far, I hope you continue to follow my work. I have some family problems and my mom is very sick, so if I don't post chapters, I'm sorry. Thanks for the support. MY DISCORD: https://discord.gg/P5JynPh

4yr 1

LV 3

LinZheTian

• I like this Novel pretty much just the Creator's native isn't English so he/she messed up in grammar. • MC is different than in other novels main's that makes her "MC" different but good, she's like a phycho Loli with cautious personality not like certain someone as in "Cautious Hero" XDD. • MC'S background is a complete mess hope Creator do something about it like explaining will be much better in his/her future chapters. • Story isn't developing at all if I may be honest it's like Creator doesn't know what to add next so he/she's only stretching the same story over and over and maintaining chapter stability to daily upload currently. • Overall i hope Creator give some thoughts about this if they saw this any time. That's it, thx for reading my review heh~!!

4yr 1