/ Fantasy / Everlasting: Hope and Sorrow
摘要
When Mushou Homizaki's mom abandons him, he's adopted and raised by a loving family. Her desperate begging for his new family to remember his name goes ignored and Mushou becomes Miku, severed from his past. The death of Mushou's adoptive dad reveals the abusive nature of his new family and though he struggles to resent them, one summer reveals the truth about his past that could ruin what little peace he has forever but afterall those unforgivable treatment he had recieved, he still loves his new family because ofcourse, He Still Doesnt Know The Truth, Summer ends and Miku got into a New School, he thought that he will forever recieve a lovable and peaceful moment that he could forever treasure, until that day
Update: Its been almost a year where my novel/story didnt get new chapters, ive been starting to work on wattpad lately and published 1 of my book, i will transfer them soon to here and will do a overhaul in this story like making the conversations to dialogues etc.
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This book's got babies, mommies and even milk! What more could you want? No, just kidding, this novel fucking sucks, kid. Learn to write, you stupid fucking kid. I would rather drink a buffalo diarrhea milkshake than read your stupid fucking story. "*Baby crying*"? Really? Are you really that stupid, you ugly fucking slit-eyed freak? Is this really the height of literature in the 21st century? What the **** is wrong with you, you stupid idiot kid? You make me so angry. I'm so fucking angry right now I could beat up someone, like a woman or a jogger. You know, they say that Hitler was the worst person to ever live, but at least he was vegan and he didn't write stupid fucking stories on the internet for nobody to read. You are such a stupid fucking kid. Stick to watching anime or Marvel movies you walking toddler. Your punctuation sucks, as do your grammar and spelling. Don't cross paths with me if you know what's good for you.
𝒊 𝒇𝒖𝒄𝒌𝒊𝒏𝒈 𝒉𝒂𝒕𝒆 𝒏𝒊𝒈𝒈𝒆𝒓𝒔. 𝒊 𝒓𝒆𝒂𝒍𝒍𝒚 𝒅𝒐 𝒉𝒂𝒕𝒆 𝒏𝒊𝒈𝒈𝒆𝒓𝒔. 𝒊𝒇 𝒊 𝒘𝒆𝒓𝒆 𝒂 𝒏𝒊𝒈𝒈𝒆𝒓 𝒊 𝒘𝒐𝒖𝒍𝒅 𝒊𝒏𝒔𝒕𝒂𝒏𝒕𝒍𝒚 𝒌𝒊𝒍𝒍 𝒎𝒚𝒔𝒆𝒍𝒇. 𝒊 𝒉𝒂𝒕𝒆 𝒏𝒊𝒈𝒈𝒆𝒓𝒔 𝒂𝒏𝒅 𝒇𝒊𝒍𝒊𝒑𝒊𝒏𝒐𝒔. 𝒑𝒊𝒏𝒐𝒚𝒔 𝒑𝒊𝒔𝒔 𝒎𝒆 𝒕𝒉𝒆 𝒇𝒖𝒄𝒌 𝒐𝒇𝒇. 𝒔𝒕𝒂𝒚 𝒐𝒖𝒕 𝒐𝒇 𝒂𝒎𝒆𝒓𝒊𝒄𝒂 𝒚𝒐𝒖 𝒔𝒕𝒖𝒑𝒊𝒅 𝒇𝒖𝒄𝒌𝒊𝒏𝒈 𝒍𝒐𝒘 𝒘𝒂𝒈𝒆 𝒂𝒔𝒔𝒉𝒐𝒍𝒆 𝒔𝒍𝒊𝒕 𝒆𝒚𝒆𝒅 𝒇𝒓𝒆𝒂𝒌. 𝒇𝒖𝒄𝒌 𝒑𝒊𝒏𝒐𝒚𝒔.