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very fulfilling story. no nerfs apart from the intentional self inflicted one during a fight. good progression and development of characters. and an ending that leave you satisfied. well worth the read.
Well this was a change of pace, really good work 😂👍❤ Loved it!!! The concept, powers, Harry even ginny!! Awesome ✨ Even liked the brotherhood ~
Nice work and I hope you keep up and make more good stories and thank you for finishing the story not like some other people 😂😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀
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Awesome story truly amazing. ........,........ .... ...... ..... .... .. . . . . .. .. .. ... ....that's it
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it was pretty interesting. it is very difficult to find a story where harry was born in a black family. the relationship between the brothers is very warm, they are all so cute 🥰. really liked the story. Well developed characters. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
very fulfilling story. no nerfs apart from the intentional self inflicted one during a fight. good progression and development of characters. and an ending that leave you satisfied. well worth the read.
Well this was a change of pace, really good work 😂👍❤ Loved it!!! The concept, powers, Harry even ginny!! Awesome ✨ Even liked the brotherhood ~
Nice work and I hope you keep up and make more good stories and thank you for finishing the story not like some other people 😂😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀
A perfect story, I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Awesome story truly amazing. ........,........ .... ...... ..... .... .. . . . . .. .. .. ... ....that's it
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it was pretty interesting. it is very difficult to find a story where harry was born in a black family. the relationship between the brothers is very warm, they are all so cute 🥰. really liked the story. Well developed characters. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍