/ Realistic / Endless Love and Pain
摘要
A love that will keep you happy, and A pain that will give you an endless tears and will keep your happiness away.
Who will you choose, a person who'll give you everything or a person who is willing to sacrifice everything for you?
標籤
-- 推薦票
榜單 
-- 推薦票 你也許也喜歡
4評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
與他人分享您的想法
寫檢討
I lost the words to write. I've never seen so many errors in a single write up until I stumbled upon this novel. The plot has potential, that fact does not waver. However, it is greatly undermined by the multiple errors encountered in almost every sentence. Puro emotions walang rationalism and reason, napag-iiwanan ang temperament ng mga characters.
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may potential yung story. Enhance mo lang english grammar mo at makaka earn ka rin ng maraming readers. I'll wait for your updates. Goodluck.
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