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I love this story and every chapter ends with a cliffhanger. It always makes me want to come back to read your story when it updates. Keep up the good work!!!
- NOT a cliche story very original - it’s very intriguing that makes things way more interesting to read - update aren’t slow which I love it - the grammar is good - I love how the FL isn’t weak even though she is young, she acts very mature, speaks her mind and knows what she wants I really Kriti personality. I am on chapter 141 the story just gets better and better. YOU DONT BELIEVE ME WELL JUST AGO AND READ THE STORY .
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I love the story but would like more development because story seem to be struck in one place .let them reunited Kriti n Jay .and also should update daily
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More chapters i love this novel hope u updated more n more chapters please n make some more twist in this story n make it more interesting author 🥺 🥺🥺 y❤️❤️
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Nice story I would like to read this story after update but I feel sry myself for not able to wait for reading this story completely by the way thanks you author for make such a sweet story
揭示劇透 Very interesting History very different from all the rest, I hope you all will have a try even though there is rape and violence. the Female lead is funny and naughty 😏😌 I 💯% Recommend.
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😍😍😍😍😍😍 this is very good love the plot love the story and the characters the idea is amazing I would love more really quick 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😘😘🥰😘😘😘😘
This novel is so good. I love it very much. I hope kriti and Jay get back together real quick. Their separation is so hard. And author keep up the good work and upload more chapters. One is not enough. Do a mass release please 🙏😊🙏
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Dearest readers Please give your reviews and comments This will encourage me to continue the novel And also give try to my other novel " I have an overprotective daughter!!" Thank you and have a great day~~
This novel have a good potential author. With an interesting plot. MC transmigrated into novel and became the FL. Please continue the story author. I'm curious about what happened next.
hay author I'm reading this book from Kungfu app but can't able to find rest of the story after last updated chapter on that app from which chapter I can continue can u address me 😊
揭示劇透 I love this story and every chapter ends with a cliffhanger. It always makes me want to come back to read your story when it updates. Keep up the good work!!!
- NOT a cliche story very original - it’s very intriguing that makes things way more interesting to read - update aren’t slow which I love it - the grammar is good - I love how the FL isn’t weak even though she is young, she acts very mature, speaks her mind and knows what she wants I really Kriti personality. I am on chapter 141 the story just gets better and better. YOU DONT BELIEVE ME WELL JUST AGO AND READ THE STORY .
揭示劇透 I love the story but would like more development because story seem to be struck in one place .let them reunited Kriti n Jay .and also should update daily
揭示劇透 More chapters i love this novel hope u updated more n more chapters please n make some more twist in this story n make it more interesting author 🥺 🥺🥺 y❤️❤️
揭示劇透 Nice story I would like to read this story after update but I feel sry myself for not able to wait for reading this story completely by the way thanks you author for make such a sweet story
揭示劇透 Very interesting History very different from all the rest, I hope you all will have a try even though there is rape and violence. the Female lead is funny and naughty 😏😌 I 💯% Recommend.
揭示劇透 😍😍😍😍😍😍 this is very good love the plot love the story and the characters the idea is amazing I would love more really quick 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😘😘🥰😘😘😘😘
This novel is so good. I love it very much. I hope kriti and Jay get back together real quick. Their separation is so hard. And author keep up the good work and upload more chapters. One is not enough. Do a mass release please 🙏😊🙏
揭示劇透 Dearest readers Please give your reviews and comments This will encourage me to continue the novel And also give try to my other novel " I have an overprotective daughter!!" Thank you and have a great day~~
This novel have a good potential author. With an interesting plot. MC transmigrated into novel and became the FL. Please continue the story author. I'm curious about what happened next.
hay author I'm reading this book from Kungfu app but can't able to find rest of the story after last updated chapter on that app from which chapter I can continue can u address me 😊
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