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I already finished this somewhere in a another app so I can give this a good mark and advice you guys to keep reading you get addicted to this...😁😁
Initially I started reading this short story because I liked the manga that ended quickly. When I saw that it wasn't very big, I thought it would be a bit disappointing like the manga when it stopped when everything became more interesting. It is very disappointing, however, that they did not publish everything here.
Es una buena historia, el personaje logra ser admirado más por sus ciudadanos, se vuelve más fuerte, crea universidades en su reino y sigue creciendo, sus 3 waifus también está bien, no me gustó que no metieran a Jessica en su harem, no le hubieran dado un poco de importancia si no la iban a meter, y parece que hay personajes que el autor se olvidó de que existían, pero era irrelevantes a mi parecer.
I read the manhwa but it says its dropped due to some reason idk but i found the novel aka this but can someone kindly tell me what chapter the manwha left off in this novel.
This is not your work. please say that. this is someone else's work so at least mention that in your summary. I would recommend you read the original and not follow this one.
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so glad i heard somebody talking about this and decided to check it out, great novel .
supriced it has so little reviews, but this is a great, interesting, and unquie story .
Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try! https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing
One of the best novels that I red in a long time.. You have to try and read it.. The characters development and the story is very good .....
it was good and since I have to have over 140 characters, Jeff jdiehc jsijwbsv did Dushku duyxg diwigsv xixugr djdiwiwhhhx duyvev soaosbbhd uudbek
i dont know why webnovel stop update this novel...but i think this novel has a great potential to the new reader that want to read fantasy genre with game system. although there are quite a lot repeated scene but still enjoyable to read
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The story is interesting. Among all of the Chinese novels that I've read, this one interests me the most. Although I know that this is more of a translated version of the novel written in here, the original author has some weird naming senses. I think it's to be expected when it's translated from Chinese. It sounds better in Chinese, anyway.
Three chapters in and it's fucking terrible. MC is stupid and doesn't react how an actual person would, the author has nfi how interactions between people go apparently.
Juventus Empire? Liverpool Empire? Frank Lampard? Fernando Torres? Arm stretching Luffy? At least be creative with the names. Really disapp ointing.
This is a good read 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😁😀😁😁😀😀😀😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀
Good story but the person writing got bored I guess. If it ever comes back I would do my best to support it. Overall great story until the very end of the uploads.
Love this novel people should definitely read this it’s amazing and you will not be disappointed 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😀😀
This is the best book I’ve read on this app. I recommend this to any one who will listen. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Alexander was born the Third Prince of the Zenit Empire and the son of Yashin and Julie. When he was born, a phenomenon occurred and rumors spread that he was a God-King reincarnation and that he would unify the continent. This incurred the anger of many powerful forces, causing them to hunt Alexander down. They attacked the Imperial 8Palace of the Zenit Empire, killing Alexander's mother Julie, and injuring Alexander, making him retarded. A subordinate of Yashin's, Mushnikov, was able to get Alexander out of the Imperial Palace and taking d with him, taking him to the Chambord Kingdom and replacing him with the King's son.
揭示劇透 I really liked this book. It’s something you won’t regret starting or finishing. 🎉
Such a pity that I had to drop this novel all because the mcc marry that ***** Paris.😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕🙊😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢
揭示劇透
Its a very interesting story.... But the update is slow and I searched in other site and found out that it has more chapter in them then webnovel..
This is not this authors work and its actually stolen, the original author is 'Mad Blade During Troubled Times' and the novel is complete. Please support the original author
I already finished this somewhere in a another app so I can give this a good mark and advice you guys to keep reading you get addicted to this...😁😁
Initially I started reading this short story because I liked the manga that ended quickly. When I saw that it wasn't very big, I thought it would be a bit disappointing like the manga when it stopped when everything became more interesting. It is very disappointing, however, that they did not publish everything here.
Es una buena historia, el personaje logra ser admirado más por sus ciudadanos, se vuelve más fuerte, crea universidades en su reino y sigue creciendo, sus 3 waifus también está bien, no me gustó que no metieran a Jessica en su harem, no le hubieran dado un poco de importancia si no la iban a meter, y parece que hay personajes que el autor se olvidó de que existían, pero era irrelevantes a mi parecer.
I read the manhwa but it says its dropped due to some reason idk but i found the novel aka this but can someone kindly tell me what chapter the manwha left off in this novel.
This is not your work. please say that. this is someone else's work so at least mention that in your summary. I would recommend you read the original and not follow this one.
Hi there! Are you looking for inspiration? You might want to check out our Prompts Writing contest! Apocalypse, Isekai, LitRPG... Follow the three provided prompts and take the chance to win up to $2,000! Please Google 70daysthemedwritingchallenge to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact ringdom_promptswriting@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
so glad i heard somebody talking about this and decided to check it out, great novel .
supriced it has so little reviews, but this is a great, interesting, and unquie story .
Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try! https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing
One of the best novels that I red in a long time.. You have to try and read it.. The characters development and the story is very good .....
it was good and since I have to have over 140 characters, Jeff jdiehc jsijwbsv did Dushku duyxg diwigsv xixugr djdiwiwhhhx duyvev soaosbbhd uudbek
i dont know why webnovel stop update this novel...but i think this novel has a great potential to the new reader that want to read fantasy genre with game system. although there are quite a lot repeated scene but still enjoyable to read
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
The story is interesting. Among all of the Chinese novels that I've read, this one interests me the most. Although I know that this is more of a translated version of the novel written in here, the original author has some weird naming senses. I think it's to be expected when it's translated from Chinese. It sounds better in Chinese, anyway.
Three chapters in and it's fucking terrible. MC is stupid and doesn't react how an actual person would, the author has nfi how interactions between people go apparently.
Juventus Empire? Liverpool Empire? Frank Lampard? Fernando Torres? Arm stretching Luffy? At least be creative with the names. Really disapp ointing.
This is a good read 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😁😀😁😁😀😀😀😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀
Good story but the person writing got bored I guess. If it ever comes back I would do my best to support it. Overall great story until the very end of the uploads.
Love this novel people should definitely read this it’s amazing and you will not be disappointed 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😀😀
This is the best book I’ve read on this app. I recommend this to any one who will listen. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Alexander was born the Third Prince of the Zenit Empire and the son of Yashin and Julie. When he was born, a phenomenon occurred and rumors spread that he was a God-King reincarnation and that he would unify the continent. This incurred the anger of many powerful forces, causing them to hunt Alexander down. They attacked the Imperial 8Palace of the Zenit Empire, killing Alexander's mother Julie, and injuring Alexander, making him retarded. A subordinate of Yashin's, Mushnikov, was able to get Alexander out of the Imperial Palace and taking d with him, taking him to the Chambord Kingdom and replacing him with the King's son.
揭示劇透 I really liked this book. It’s something you won’t regret starting or finishing. 🎉
Such a pity that I had to drop this novel all because the mcc marry that ***** Paris.😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕🙊😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢
揭示劇透 Its a very interesting story.... But the update is slow and I searched in other site and found out that it has more chapter in them then webnovel..
This is not this authors work and its actually stolen, the original author is 'Mad Blade During Troubled Times' and the novel is complete. Please support the original author