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It is a very good story, it is very well done in my opinion, although the last update was a while ago. So, I have nothing more to say except that it is very good
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I love the story and please keep updating ／(^o^)＼ —————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————-
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Great story so far cant wait for more chapters hopefully it hasn't been dropped. Really interesting take on sending naruto back in time. Thanks to the author
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Great fanfiction for the little there is. Just some issue with the grammar but you can still read it. Either way, I'm really looking for how you will write your story and I hope you won't drop it.
Hello readers, Author here It seems noone is reviewing my content So I'm requesting at least leave a review after reading It would be a great help in story progress Thank you
we want more chapters. lets goo!!!!!!! we want more. we want more. i like this version so far. please write more chapters. thank you........................................
It is a very good story, it is very well done in my opinion, although the last update was a while ago. So, I have nothing more to say except that it is very good
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
I love the story and please keep updating ／(^o^)＼ —————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————-
Excellent. Best Naruto Fanfic. F=abfjafa fafj sfdjna fsdjakf dfkanfjs fakjf sfkjnf skjfs kfjsf skjf jhfbksn fjdkn fj fbakjf ekdj nf jkd dejndncMirandaMirandaMirandaMirandaMirandaMirandaMirandaMirandaMirandaMirandaMirandaMirandaMirandaMirandaMirandaMiranda
muito bom, e dificil encontrar algo sem um systema ou alguem com poderes de DBZ e outros dentro do mundo de naruto kkkk ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
AMAZING KEEP IT COMING ‐--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Great story so far cant wait for more chapters hopefully it hasn't been dropped. Really interesting take on sending naruto back in time. Thanks to the author
So short..like 2.5 inch D***. . . .. ... .. . S jakaksbsndkdf Xd D D D F F F d d d F Fisjsjjsdd f f Disiserrf ..iaishshsjsd Sjsjsjjsjejeushdbdjsise Suagsvsjsd
Great fanfiction for the little there is. Just some issue with the grammar but you can still read it. Either way, I'm really looking for how you will write your story and I hope you won't drop it.
Hello readers, Author here It seems noone is reviewing my content So I'm requesting at least leave a review after reading It would be a great help in story progress Thank you
we want more chapters. lets goo!!!!!!! we want more. we want more. i like this version so far. please write more chapters. thank you........................................