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The story that i read till now is looking to be a great one. The only problem that i have with the story is what i have with a lot of pokemon fanfic's, The Nicknames!!!! It gets harder to keep track who the pokemons are because the don't have pokemon names but nicknames. have to many of them and it will be a story that you can flush down the toilet, even if it is a great story. When is started reading i came to where he got his first pokemon and gave it a nickname, After that he got a second one and also gave it a nickname, his 3 pokemon has no nickname at the moment and i hope the writer doesn't give the pokemon the mc catches from now on nicknames. But keep up the good work writer and don't quit halve way!!!
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I'm loving this story! Can't wait for the next chapter! Loving the development, even if it seems slow I never really noticed as other fictions I read end up with mega evolution like in the second chapter this story is headed places I tell ya!
Whilst I'm no fan of the starter, or the region, it's a good story and a lot more real than most pokemon stories without the nitty gritty doom and gloom stuff the realistic stories tend to have. Honestly it's well written and balanced out.
Just the beginning, but a good beginning. More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More
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The story that i read till now is looking to be a great one. The only problem that i have with the story is what i have with a lot of pokemon fanfic's, The Nicknames!!!! It gets harder to keep track who the pokemons are because the don't have pokemon names but nicknames. have to many of them and it will be a story that you can flush down the toilet, even if it is a great story. When is started reading i came to where he got his first pokemon and gave it a nickname, After that he got a second one and also gave it a nickname, his 3 pokemon has no nickname at the moment and i hope the writer doesn't give the pokemon the mc catches from now on nicknames. But keep up the good work writer and don't quit halve way!!!
揭示劇透 I'm loving this story! Can't wait for the next chapter! Loving the development, even if it seems slow I never really noticed as other fictions I read end up with mega evolution like in the second chapter this story is headed places I tell ya!
Whilst I'm no fan of the starter, or the region, it's a good story and a lot more real than most pokemon stories without the nitty gritty doom and gloom stuff the realistic stories tend to have. Honestly it's well written and balanced out.
Just the beginning, but a good beginning. More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More
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