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😌😅😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😪😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😒😔part 2 please and thank you in advance
What a beautiful story! And the way the author esprime the character's feeling is so realistic. I feel the happiness, the sorrowfulness, the embarrassment, the frustration and all the feeling of the protagonists. I appreciate that is a very realistic story. It tells us that not always there is a happy ending. That some time the person you love the most can really hurt you, and that is not simple forgive that persone. Or may I say is not correct for you to forgive that persone no matter what, only because you love him and he tell you "sorry", but he continues to hurt you and claims you have to understand him. The author say there is a second part .... (Spoilers so if you don't want to read stop reading.....) ...and I hope she finds someone else. After he oblige her to abort they baby and the crap he do for his sense of inferiority, I don't see how she can forgive him. Now she is not the adolescent she was, so I thought she will not be so easy fooled by him like before (when she forgive almost anything with a stupid "sorry I know I am a asshole but you have to understand, I have to make proud my disgusting grandpa who all his life treat my mother like s*it. A very ration and compressible thought ahaha). Anyway, although in the end she returns with him and forgive him I would gladly read the story because I love the way the author write her story❤️! (Sorry for the grammatical errors, but english is my third language and I still learning)
Such a wonderful love story, it got me crying, smiling and feeling all sorts of emotions, really enjoyed the rollercoaster of this ride 🙂👍
I don't even know what feel after reading this book. So many emotions. I feel like I'm Sam. I could feel her pain I could hear her baby's heart beat I could feel her dilemma.... I know those feelings all too well. Can't wait to see what happens in the second part. Good job Meriem 👍. Keep it up
😌😅😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😪😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😒😔part 2 please and thank you in advance
What a beautiful story! And the way the author esprime the character's feeling is so realistic. I feel the happiness, the sorrowfulness, the embarrassment, the frustration and all the feeling of the protagonists. I appreciate that is a very realistic story. It tells us that not always there is a happy ending. That some time the person you love the most can really hurt you, and that is not simple forgive that persone. Or may I say is not correct for you to forgive that persone no matter what, only because you love him and he tell you "sorry", but he continues to hurt you and claims you have to understand him. The author say there is a second part .... (Spoilers so if you don't want to read stop reading.....) ...and I hope she finds someone else. After he oblige her to abort they baby and the crap he do for his sense of inferiority, I don't see how she can forgive him. Now she is not the adolescent she was, so I thought she will not be so easy fooled by him like before (when she forgive almost anything with a stupid "sorry I know I am a asshole but you have to understand, I have to make proud my disgusting grandpa who all his life treat my mother like s*it. A very ration and compressible thought ahaha). Anyway, although in the end she returns with him and forgive him I would gladly read the story because I love the way the author write her story❤️! (Sorry for the grammatical errors, but english is my third language and I still learning)
Such a wonderful love story, it got me crying, smiling and feeling all sorts of emotions, really enjoyed the rollercoaster of this ride 🙂👍
I don't even know what feel after reading this book. So many emotions. I feel like I'm Sam. I could feel her pain I could hear her baby's heart beat I could feel her dilemma.... I know those feelings all too well. Can't wait to see what happens in the second part. Good job Meriem 👍. Keep it up